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Author has written 26 stories for Fantasy, School, Supernatural, Spiritual, General, Life, Family, Romance, Love, Nature, Essay, Thriller, and Play. Welcome! Updated as of September 21st, 2009 OMG! What is this? An update? A new post? WHOA! Hahaha... sorry about the long break. I swear I'm working on the next chapter of Baby Business. It's about half done now and I'm hoping it'll be up within the next few weeks. However, to hold you over until that comes out, I've taken my little skit Stealing the Light and I'm now in the process of turning it into a short, one act play. It's been retitled All For Her. You can read the first scene now and I'm hoping to get the second scene up in the next few days. Hey everyone, I just thought I'd throw out a quick little comment about reviews. Yeah, I know you're all going "Ugh. Again?" But yeah, again. Sorry. On the upside, I'm not just talking about myself this time. I'm saying this for all the authors here on Fiction Press. I'm sure there's thousands of other writers that would agree with me on this: I believe that if you read someone's story, poem, or any other piece of written work on Fiction Press, it's only polite to write them a review. Lately I've been reading a lot more here than I have in the past years and for each story I read, even if I don't like it, I leave a review. If anything, it lets the author know people are reading their stuff. If you're an author and you're reading this, think about how happy you are when you get a review. Don't you think everyone should be given the same thrill as often as possible, including yourself? If you see something in a story you think needs to be improved or fixed, let the author know! I'm going to take a wild guess and say that about 95 percent of the authors here love constructive criticism. After all, it's the best way to improve one's writing. Even if you can't find anything to improve or fix in a piece, let the author know what you liked or didn't like about their chapter. Any sort of input you can offer the writer helps. Of course, I understand if people are busy and don't have much time, but reviews don't have to be long! A quick, "Hey, I loved your story, especially when yadda yadda yadda... happened. I found a typo in this part of the story, I thought you should know about. Can't wait for the next chapter!" is greatly appreciated by all. But if you're in even MORE of a hurry than that, a "Great chapter!" can be appreciated too, especially if you come back for the next chapter and mention a few things you liked about the last one as well. And remember: If you review, there's a good chance people will return the favor. I have to admit that I should be better about this, but if you ask me to review, I always will. :) If you want to hear more about how to write good reviews, I suggest you check out the Guide for Fictionpress Reviews by ColorCrayons (better known as Clodhopper): http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1980482/1/Guide_For_Fictionpress_Reviews Happy Reviewing! | |||||||||||
1. All For Her » reviewsWhen Peter's mob family fiance mentions that her dad might need a little assuring to whether or not Peter's a good addition to the family, he goes out of his way to cause a little trouble in town.Play - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,285 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-09 - Published: 9-22-092. Fairy Lines reviewsChristopher, a simple backwoods hunter, always believed that fairies were stories, thought up to entertain children. However, when he receives a royal summons to find the missing Princess of Cornan, he can only begin to realize how mistaken he is.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,026 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-30-09 - Published: 6-30-093. Baby Business » reviewsJane Fuller, an undercover agent for the FBI, has begun her maternity leave. However, when jewel thief Juliet Potpourri sends out a request for a pregnant assistant, she is thrown back into work whether she likes it or not. Will a forbidden romance ensue?Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Crime/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 68,797 - Reviews: 52 - Updated: 6-17-09 - Published: 12-29-084. Lifetime » reviewsKidnapped and turned into a vampire, orphaned, beggared, betrayed, given love and then finally power... Isabelle had never expected any of these things to happen to her, yet they did. It's a story worth telling when a Slayer comes to call...Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 60,334 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 6-17-09 - Published: 12-27-085. Valet reviewsAs a valet at a country club, Corey has seen his fair share of beautiful, rich young women. But out of them all, he only has eyes for Kaitlyn Albright. Will Corey's plan to rise above his station and sweep her off her feet at the Founder's Ball work?Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,117 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-13-09 - Published: 5-13-096. Stealing The Light reviewsPeter decides that it would be a good idea to rob the downtown candle store. After all, "in this economy you’ve got to save on everything you can." However, Julie does not agree and will stop at nothing to keep him from stealing her candles.Complete - Play - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,839 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-27-09 - Published: 4-27-097. Lifeblood » reviewsNicolas is a vampire. Elsandra is a vampire slayer. When Elsandra is sent on a mission to slay Nicolas, the tables are turned and Elsandra finds herself captive. However, Nicolas needs help and as a human, Elsandra can do just that.Complete - Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 78,387 - Reviews: 105 - Updated: 4-21-09 - Published: 12-28-068. A Twilight Addict's Movie Commentary » reviewsAs a serious fan of the Twilight Saga, I have a lot to say about the Twilight movie.Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 13 - Words: 31,837 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 4-20-09 - Published: 3-21-099. The Last Night reviewsMalory is your average waitress working in the big city. But what's her big secret and how will it affect her when fate plays a nasty trick on her in the middle of the night?Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,664 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-13-09 - Published: 4-13-0910. The Bike Man reviewsShe didn't want to be there. She didn't even know his name. But all the same, the hour she spent with the little old man would stay with her for the rest of her life...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,160 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-6-09 - Published: 2-6-0911. The Other Side reviewsTake a step away from your busy life.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-28-09 - Published: 1-28-0912. Christmas Again reviewsAfter five years of suffering, Heather ventures into New York City to face her past. She was expecting the pain of the memories... but not meeting Rob and finding love.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,995 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-24-08 - Published: 12-24-0813. Baby It's Cold Outside » reviewsPerhaps it's the weather, perhaps it's the mood. Either way, Peter won't take no for an answer when he begs Rachael to stay at his house a little longer...Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,612 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-7-08 - Published: 12-4-0714. Midnight Flight 277 reviewsSometimes you just can't wait to get home.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-4-08 - Published: 10-4-0815. The Feather » reviewsA young girl watches a pure white feather fall from the sky one day. There's something special about this feather. Something magical. And it's something only the girl can figure out on her own.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,058 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-5-07 - Published: 3-14-0716. There's That Feeling reviewsTo everyone who never had the chance to meet one of their grandparents.Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-5-07 - Published: 3-5-0717. I Remember These Things Too reviewsOh, to go back to those summer days...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-29-06 - Published: 12-29-0618. The Last Adventure reviewsA young star falls from the sky much before her time. She thinks of her past, present, and future while her impending death draws closer and closer.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 963 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-0619. Fate of the Hidden » reviewsEach of the seven royal families were required to sacrificed their first born children to the demons. This was life for hundreds of years. It assured the safety of each kingdom. But what if one child was hidden and never handed over to the demons?Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 25 - Words: 51,846 - Reviews: 133 - Updated: 3-2-06 - Published: 8-16-0520. I Call It Homework reviewsIt's a known fact that every student hates homework. But did you know that homework could be the undoing of an entire town?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,112 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 1-26-0621. By Candlelight reviewsShe had never amounted for much in her family. But the pull of the night would change her life for the better, forever.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,856 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-0622. An Unconventional Princess Story reviewsThe king and queen wanted a normal child, a blond haired, blue eyed princess that was able to lead a normal life without having to worry about enchanted naps, christening curses, or anything else you could read in a fairytale. Instead they got Annie...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,047 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0623. Watching Over Me: A Dream Is a Gift reviewsGrace Noel does not come from the happiest of families. Her escape is her work at the local record store where her crush works. Who's this customer who takes an interest in her? And what does he have to tell her?Complete - Spiritual - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,001 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-19-05 - Published: 12-19-0524. The Other Side of Life » reviewsAbby's a ghost who's been around for over one hundred years. Besides the occasional frantic human, she's used to being left to her own devices. So of course Abby's surprised when a young man checks into her room and demands to know what she's doing there.Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,492 - Reviews: 66 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 9-5-0525. That Girl in the Corner reviewsThink before you exclude.Complete - School - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 8-24-05 - Published: 8-24-0526. Lady Alexandra » reviewsAn evil lord wants to take over the peaceful country of Tamae. Can Lady Alexandra, a spunky 15 year old, and her unusual group of friends foil his plans?Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,290 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 11-18-04 - Published: 8-16-04
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