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| Alanna Lioness |
Author has written 27 stories for Fantasy, School, Supernatural, Spiritual, General, Life, Family, Romance, Love, Nature, Essay, Thriller, and Play. Welcome! Updated as of December 16th, 2009 So, I'm finding all this coding that is suddenly required to update my profile and edit my stories in the Doc Manager terrifying, so I'm going to keep this short. It's been a very long time since I've been on FictionPress, but I'm happy to be back and I'm looking to share my writing with the world again. During my time away, I have continued to write, although it's mostly been for myself and I haven't gotten around to showing people what I've been working on. I've participated in NaNoWriMo for three years now and the past two years' stories have been pretty bad... Haha. But, my 2009 NaNo turned out surprisingly well. If I still have any readers left from once upon a time when I used this regularly, they might remember my first, horrible draft of Fairy Lines. Well, it's back and much, MUCH better. In fact, that's the whole reason I'm here. I have finally found the time and determination to begin a full edit of Fairy Lines. Right now I have finished a good second (it's more like a fourth, but who's counting?) draft of the first chapter and I'm working on the second chapter, which is going well. Now that I've posted the new first chapter here, I'd love to hear back from people and find out what they think. What do you think of the storyline? Are there any grammatical errors I've blatantly missed? Also I'm still not entirely happy with the title Fairy Lines, so feel free to give me any alternate title ideas. I hope to hear from you guys soon and thanks in advance! | |||||||
1. Fairy LinesChristopher, a simple backwoods hunter, always believed that fairies were stories, thought up to entertain children. However, when he receives a royal summons to find the missing Princess of Cornan, he can only begin to realize how mistaken he is.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,072 - Published: 12-16-112. All For Her » reviewsWhen Peter's mob family fiance mentions that her dad might need a little assuring to whether or not Peter's a good addition to the family, he goes out of his way to cause a little trouble in town.Fiction: Play - Rated: T - English - Humor/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,641 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-09 - Published: 9-22-093. Fairy Lines original unrevised reviewsChristopher, a simple backwoods hunter, always believed that fairies were stories, thought up to entertain children. However, when he receives a royal summons to find the missing Princess of Cornan, he can only begin to realize how mistaken he is.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,893 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-30-094. Baby Business » reviewsJane Fuller, an undercover agent for the FBI, has begun her maternity leave. However, when jewel thief Juliet Potpourri sends out a request for a pregnant assistant, she is thrown back into work whether she likes it or not. Will a forbidden romance ensue?Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Crime/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 65,999 - Reviews: 54 - Updated: 6-17-09 - Published: 12-29-085. Lifetime » reviewsKidnapped and turned into a vampire, orphaned, beggared, betrayed, given love and then finally power... Isabelle had never expected any of these things to happen to her, yet they did. It's a story worth telling when a Slayer comes to call...Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 58,279 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 6-17-09 - Published: 12-27-08 - Complete6. Valet reviewsAs a valet at a country club, Corey has seen his fair share of beautiful, rich young women. But out of them all, he only has eyes for Kaitlyn Albright. Will Corey's plan to rise above his station and sweep her off her feet at the Founder's Ball work?Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,927 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-13-097. Stealing The Light reviewsPeter decides that it would be a good idea to rob the downtown candle store. After all, "in this economy you've got to save on everything you can." However, Julie does not agree and will stop at nothing to keep him from stealing her candles.Fiction: Play - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,595 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-27-09 - Complete8. Lifeblood » reviewsNicolas is a vampire. Elsandra is a vampire slayer. When Elsandra is sent on a mission to slay Nicolas, the tables are turned and Elsandra finds herself captive. However, Nicolas needs help and as a human, Elsandra can do just that.Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 78,728 - Reviews: 109 - Updated: 4-21-09 - Published: 12-28-06 - Complete9. A Twilight Addict's Movie Commentary » reviewsAs a serious fan of the Twilight Saga, I have a lot to say about the Twilight movie.Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 13 - Words: 31,087 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 4-20-09 - Published: 3-21-0910. The Last Night reviewsMalory is your average waitress working in the big city. But what's her big secret and how will it affect her when fate plays a nasty trick on her in the middle of the night?Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,522 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-13-09 - Complete11. The Bike Man reviewsShe didn't want to be there. She didn't even know his name. But all the same, the hour she spent with the little old man would stay with her for the rest of her life...Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,096 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-6-09 - Complete12. The Other Side reviewsTake a step away from your busy life.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-28-09 - Complete13. Christmas Again reviewsAfter five years of suffering, Heather ventures into New York City to face her past. She was expecting the pain of the memories... but not meeting Rob and finding love.Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,717 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-24-08 - Complete14. Baby It's Cold Outside » reviewsPerhaps it's the weather, perhaps it's the mood. Either way, Peter won't take no for an answer when he begs Rachael to stay at his house a little longer...Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,639 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-7-08 - Published: 12-4-07 - Complete15. Midnight Flight 277 reviewsSometimes you just can't wait to get home.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-4-08 - Complete16. The Feather » reviewsA young girl watches a pure white feather fall from the sky one day. There's something special about this feather. Something magical. And it's something only the girl can figure out on her own.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,166 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-5-07 - Published: 3-14-07 - Complete17. There's That Feeling reviewsTo everyone who never had the chance to meet one of their grandparents.Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-5-07 - Complete18. I Remember These Things Too reviewsOh, to go back to those summer days...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-29-06 - Complete19. The Last Adventure reviewsA young star falls from the sky much before her time. She thinks of her past, present, and future while her impending death draws closer and closer.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 976 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-21-06 - Complete20. Fate of the Hidden » reviewsEach of the seven royal families were required to sacrificed their first born children to the demons. This was life for hundreds of years. It assured the safety of each kingdom. But what if one child was hidden and never handed over to the demons?Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 25 - Words: 52,170 - Reviews: 133 - Updated: 3-2-06 - Published: 8-16-0521. I Call It Homework reviewsIt's a known fact that every student hates homework. But did you know that homework could be the undoing of an entire town?Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,120 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-26-0622. By Candlelight reviewsShe had never amounted for much in her family. But the pull of the night would change her life for the better, forever.Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,860 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-19-06 - Complete23. An Unconventional Princess Story reviewsThe king and queen wanted a normal child, a blond haired, blue eyed princess that was able to lead a normal life without having to worry about enchanted naps, christening curses, or anything else you could read in a fairytale. Instead they got Annie...Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,075 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 1-13-06 - Complete24. Watching Over Me: A Dream Is a Gift reviewsGrace Noel does not come from the happiest of families. Her escape is her work at the local record store where her crush works. Who's this customer who takes an interest in her? And what does he have to tell her?Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,045 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-19-05 - Complete25. The Other Side of Life » reviewsAbby's a ghost who's been around for over one hundred years. Besides the occasional frantic human, she's used to being left to her own devices. So of course Abby's surprised when a young man checks into her room and demands to know what she's doing there.Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,746 - Reviews: 66 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 9-5-0526. That Girl in the Corner reviewsThink before you exclude.Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 8-24-05 - Complete27. Lady Alexandra » reviewsAn evil lord wants to take over the peaceful country of Tamae. Can Lady Alexandra, a spunky 15 year old, and her unusual group of friends foil his plans?Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,716 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 11-18-04 - Published: 8-16-04
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