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| Shelia Gavin |
Author has written 22 stories for Friendship, General, Life, Fantasy, Song, Love, and General. Hi. My name is Sheila Gavin. Sometimes I write, sometimes I don't. Like most people I seem to meet, I have a very low opinion of my own work, and I'm hoping for some honest constructive criticism. | |||||||||||
1. On The Shelf reviews.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-17-09 - Published: 7-17-092. A PoemA poem with no real meaning.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-28-08 - Published: 8-28-083. Insomnia reviewsThis short story is based on semipersonal events and emotions. Certain things happened to me, some to people I love the most. This is why people should sleep at night.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,437 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-074. Another Stormy Afternoon Alone reviewsA late night poem again. Really sucks. Please review and be honest.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 620 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-27-07 - Published: 6-27-075. Just This Once reviewsA late night song. The third of three late night poems. Yeah, something's wrong with me. Help me if you can. Thank ye kindly.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-15-07 - Published: 6-15-076. Thousand Ways reviewsWritten for my dear sweet love. Kinda personal. Has a working melody. The second of three poems written from 1 a.m. to 3 a.m. Posting all three.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-15-07 - Published: 6-15-077. Somthing to Hold on To reviewsWritten late at night while listening to Hey Jude by the Beatles. Why that matters I don't know. The first of three late night poems. Enjoy...?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-078. Psychological Breakdown of the Optimist's Love reviewsSad poem about loving someone who doesn't love you back. Relatable perhaps, that's up to you. I am a poor writer at 1a.m. and all the time anyway. Please read and review.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 486 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-5-07 - Published: 6-5-079. The shell of Me reviewsPoem written after reading Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman, and drinking way too many energy drinks. Includes some life musings that I've been sitting on for a while, if people see me or what they think is me. Please read and review.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-07 - Published: 2-28-0710. Black Lace Dreams reviewsHere's my first poem in a long time... two people who definitely feel something for one another, but they only fantasize about the other. This is about how one realizes it's time to make the fantasies come true.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 687 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-5-07 - Published: 1-5-0711. Understudy reviewsInspired by "Paper Doll" by Kittie. Was sitting in freezing basement when written. Very bored at the time. Read and Review please.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-21-05 - Published: 7-21-0512. Just Believe reviewsYay! I can't believe I wrote another song! It's non-violent and there are very few big words! So people who don't like big words, enjoy! I don't really like it, but oh wellSong - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-21-05 - Published: 6-21-0513. Back in My City reviewsThis piece of work was written after having a dream of where all my friends would be after about 15-20 years... I just changed their names in the poem. As always, read and review please!Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 348 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-4-05 - Published: 6-4-0514. He was reviewsAnother one of my crappy poems. This one's about a guy who meant the world to someone and all that goes into it. Kinda naughty and sad, so rated T. Read and reviewGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-15-05 - Published: 5-15-0515. Question and Answer reviewsA poem written a couple months ago to a few people in my life. Though it's a guy the poem's talking about, some lines were meant for female I know.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-31-05 - Published: 3-31-0516. Memory reviewsThis is based off a haunting dream of mine... Probably my creepiest work yet. Rated R for some language and... well, the general theme of it. Enjoy if you have the stomach for this one!Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 467 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-13-05 - Published: 2-13-0517. Song of the Sirens reviewsThis is just a song I wrote out of boredom... it has no melody yet, so any ideas are most welcomed. Once again, I fear I've lost my touch in writing, so critique me appropriately! Enjoy (if you dare)Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-26-05 - Published: 1-26-0518. Postive Audacity reviewsA poem written with a more postive attitude towards life and its ups and downs. This was mostly written so certain people (you know who you are) will get off my back about not writing recently. Therefore, if this sucks, it's because it was written quicklyLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-17-05 - Published: 1-17-0519. Immortality Lament Raining reviewsThis was written right after reading Immortal Rain by Kaori Ozaki. Let's put it this way: Fast addicting books spurt poems that may not be so good. And because of that, I'm hoping for some constructive critisism. So have fun suffering this one!Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 358 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0420. Christen Me reviewsOk, this one I wrote after a big fight at my house as well as a reminder of the death of a certain friend of mine over 3 years ago... and it kinda sux, i think, but it's up to you! PG cuz it suggests some deadly stuff and it's a little too creepyfor kiddiLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-15-04 - Published: 10-15-0421. Cynical Queen reviewsI've had this poem for a while now. I wrote it while watching T.V. at 11:00 at night. This one probably sucks... rated PG for mentions of violence and gunsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-17-04 - Published: 8-17-0422. Never Will Let Go reviewsA poem about what might happen if a friend of mine goes through with killing herself... rated PG for mention of suicideFriendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-17-04 - Published: 8-17-04