ABOUT ME (THE AUTHOR):
Not much I can say. I'm currently in the US Navy as a Gunner's Mate. English was always my favorite class in high school..
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THIS PROFILE WAS LAST UPDATED:
09APR08: Whoo... After a year-long hiatus (maybe it was more than a year...?) I'm BACK!! Not that much of you really care anyway, haha.. But, I started writing a new story. Read the full summary below.
STATUS OF CURRENT STORIES:
The Predators II: The Gateway Campaign: A sequel to The Predators. This time, (in my opinion) I think I've outdone myself. This Predators is worlds better than my original one, and I've focused more on character development than ever. The chapters are way shorter so it'll appeal to more people. And you don't have to read all of The Predators to understand this, though it'll be helpful. This time it's about the USR retaking the forest/swamp/jungle planet of Gateway (think of Naboo from Star Wars). Don't worry, this story isn't dead yet, believe it or not, as of 09APR09, I'm still working on it.
The Heracles Project: I just started this story. A federal agent, Matt Robb, helps two rebelling super soldiers to uncover their past and shut down the sinister operation that created them, all the while facing his own inner demons.
If you read The Predators, please be easy on it. I'm aware of the many, many, many errors with it. The only possible way to fix it is to rewrite it completely, which I'm not up to doing right now. Or maybe, ever.
And for the record, the last stand thing in Chapter 3 (2 if you don't count the prologue) was based off of two things.
#1: A game of StarWars: Battlefront. Me and my friend were the last ones on our team so we made a defensive position and tried to hold the enemy off. We died.
#2: A game called Starcraft. In one of the levels, you have to order your soldiers to hold this base for, I believe, 10 minutes from these alien creatures called Zergs. After the time is up, dropships come in and save you.
Completed Stories
The Predators: In the future, mankind's most terrifying enemy, isn't man at all. Now, the soldiers of the U.S.R. must unite to combat a menace that threatens all of humankind. I know there are a lot of errors grammar-wise, just give me reviews on content, not syntax please.
-Thunderstrike: The Alliance :Story 1: Following an attack on a summer camp, the misunderstood must unite to defeat the largest threat the nation has ever known. I honestly couldn't believe how popular this story was. After The Predators, which gave me very mixed reviews, I basically expected the same with Thunderstrike. Turns out, it was way more appealing than I ever thought possible.
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