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Author has written 36 stories for Life, Love, Mystery, Humor, Young Adult, Action, General, and General. There's not very much to know about me. I write poetry and short stories, and am using this site to get feedback on what I write. I started submitting when I was fourteen, Now that I'm seventeen its interesting to see how much my writing has evolved in just 3 short years. Anything I submitted before 2006, with the exception of the poems, is no longer an accurate representation of my ability as a writer, but still they are realativly interesting to read because there is some evidence of creative thinking and have some visible plot. Most of my poems are 4-liners. I know they're short, but they are meant to be. I hope you enjoy. | |||||||||
1. Trees reviewsThere is a message behind this poem. See if you can guess it.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-072. The Teacher reviewsTells the breif story of a teacher being unsuccessful in teaching one of his students. I may add onto it later on to elaborate on the story.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-073. Summer reviewsThis poem describes those prestine summer days which we are all nostalgic for.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-074. Sleep reviewsshort poem all about sleepComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-075. Practical Joke reviewsI wrote this as part of a school excercise, and I'm not quite sure where I was going with it. For all intents and purposes, this poem describes a practical joke.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-076. New Measure reviewsBreif poem about life and deathComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-077. Laughter reviews4line poem putting laughter into perspectiveComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-078. Flowers of Spring reviewsA springthemed poemComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-079. Everlasting Breeze reviewsSomewhat of a spiritual poemComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-0710. An Ode to Breakfast reviews4 line poem commemorating the traditional meal of breakfastComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-07 - Published: 6-8-0711. Ode to my Bedroom reviewsAnd Ode about my bedroomComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-1-07 - Published: 6-1-0712. Hypcondria reviewsYou cant cure what isn't thereComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,241 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-22-07 - Published: 5-22-0713. A Short Christmas Fable » reviewsA Christmas Eve story with a chilling twistHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 657 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 4-1-0714. Silent Lies reviewsNAComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 5-10-0715. Night reviewsNAComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 5-10-0716. Dislike reviewsIt may seem bitter at first, but there is some underlying humor within.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 5-10-0717. Charlie Smith reviewsThis is a satirical poem about America and fastfood in American Culture.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 5-10-0718. Beyond the Moon reviewsThis was the product of a Speed Poetry exercise. I am just interested on getting feedback for it.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-29-07 - Published: 4-29-0719. The Stalker reviewsIts pretty much exactly what it sounds likeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0720. 2150 reviewsA glimpse into what could be a dark and gloomy future for the human race. Just keep in mind that as with all of my stories, there is a twist in the end.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 673 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-0721. Strangers on a bus reviewsThis is a quick story of a Psychiatrist who meets a man who isn't quite there, and also learns an important lesson in the end.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 779 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-3-07 - Published: 4-3-0722. November Shadows reviewsThis poem is a Pantoum. This form may seem to be repetitive to some, since you need to repeat the 2nd and 4th lines of the previous stanza as the 1st and 3rd in the next. But if done properly, the repetativeness enhances the meaning of the poem.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-3-07 - Published: 4-3-0723. Flower reviewsPsuedoromantic 4 line poemComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-1-07 - Published: 4-1-0724. SolitudeA glimpse into the life of a lonely old man.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 485 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-1-07 - Published: 4-1-0725. BackChannels reviewsAwaking from a 11 year long coma, John Barton Finds himself in a world much different than the one he remembers.Action - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 580 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-05 - Published: 7-31-0526. On a clear » reviewsI am definatly going to pursue this project. please note that the chapters may seem short, and the characters aren't described too well yet. this is the making of a first draft. in the second draft I will add more detailsAction - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 7 - Words: 4,505 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-3-05 - Published: 1-6-0527. Roots reviewsA "friend" didn't know where her life was taking her, so I was trying to give her advice through this poemLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-11-05 - Published: 4-11-0528. Plane crashMy first short story I ever wrote. I'ts violent, and has no real plot to it. I however, am proud of it because it got me an A+ in my seventh grade Launguage arts class. It is just how I wrote it, completely unchanged.Action - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,343 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0429. Younger Victems reviewsThis short stories follows Eve through her last year of life. After being diagnosed with cancer, Eve finds she only has ten to seventeen months to liveYoung Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,140 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0430. My failed attempt to get a girlfriend reviewsWhen I was in eight grade, I met a girl as beautiful as the stars. when I realized we could never be, I wrote this parody of my attempts to ask her out. think back to "Green Eggs And Ham"Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-24-04 - Published: 9-24-0431. Forever Holocaust » reviewsWhat would the world be like if Nazi Germany had not been liberated. What If the world had become a giant concentration camp, with one ruler. What If Hitler had succeeded in Breeding the perfect race, allowing it to be the dominant race of the planet?Mystery - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,670 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-22-04 - Published: 9-20-0432. The Darkness Within reviewsFollow her down a path to the end. Here it is, the first poem I ever wrote.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-04 - Published: 9-20-0433. Midnight reviewsThis is a story of the stereotype of the midnight hours. It depicts the lies fed to us as children, and the truth of what really goes on as we slumberLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-04 - Published: 9-20-0434. The Storm Of Shadows reviewsIts about love, I cant really summarize it. But I do love her.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-04 - Published: 9-20-0435. A Tribute To An Inspiration reviewsI just wish that I hadn't made such a big mistake, or otherwise Jenn and I might be together today.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-20-04 - Published: 9-20-0436. Inner Fire reviewsA brief look into the thoughts of a teenager before and during a succesful suicide attempt.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-19-04 - Published: 9-19-04
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