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since: 09-30-04, id: 438090, Profile Updated: 12-26-08
country: United States
Author has written 21 stories for General, Life, General, Young Adult, Love, Nature, Action, and Horror.

Welcome to my world.. My sanctuary...

Writing is my way of expressing myself and getting away from the world. I hope you like what you see, but please keep in mind that non-constructive criticism need not apply. But otherwise.. Enjoy

Children Learn What They Live

If children live with criticism, they learn to condemn.

If children live with hostility, they learn to fight.

If children live with ridicule, they learn to be shy.

If children live with shame, they learn to feel guilty.

If children live with tolerance, they learn to be patient.

If children live with encouragement, they learn confidence.

If children live with praise, they learn to appreciate.

If children live with fairness, they learn justice.

If children live with security, they learn to have faith.

If children live with approval, they learn to like themselves.

If children live with acceptance and friendship, they learn to find love in the world.

-Dorthy Law Nolte

Artist: Lee Ann Womack Song: I Hope You Dance Lyrics

I hope you never lose your sense of wonder,
You get your fill to eat but always keep that hunger,
May you never take one single breath for granted,
God forbid love ever leave you empty handed,
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean,
Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens,
Promise me that you'll give faith a fighting chance,
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance.

I hope you dance...I hope you dance.

I hope you never fear those mountains in the distance,
Never settle for the path of least resistance
Livin' might mean takin' chances but they're worth takin',
Lovin' might be a mistake but it's worth makin',
Don't let some hell bent heart leave you bitter,
When you come close to sellin' out reconsider,
Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance,
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance.

I hope you dance...I hope you dance.
I hope you dance...I hope you dance.
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always rolling us along,
Tell me who wants to look back on their years and wonder where those years have gone.)

I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean,
Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens,
Promise me that you'll give faith a fighting chance,
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance.

Dance...I hope you dance.
I hope you dance...I hope you dance.
I hope you dance...I hope you dance..
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always rolling us along
Tell me who wants to look back on their years and wonder where those years have gone)

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1. Goodbye to You reviews
Saying Goodbye to what hurts the most.. 10/14/08
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-26-08 - Published: 10-26-08
2. The Innocents of Sleep
For someone special.. 10/13/08
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-20-08 - Published: 10-20-08
3. Tears Fall Like Rain
The pain is real.. 10/19/08
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-20-08 - Published: 10-20-08
4. Hell's Playground reviews
Try it you will like it I promise. You don't need a discription. Just read it. Trust me.
Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,635 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-28-07 - Published: 11-28-07
5. Watching my World Fall Apart
I’m watching my world fall apart because of you
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
6. Obsidian Eyes reviews
Her strange obsidian eyes were like a pair of two way mirrors. You couldn’t see into them or read the feelings behind them but you could sense their depth and you knew she was analyzing your every move. Please Read and Review!
Complete - Action - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 559 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
7. Acceptance
Marie was different. She was reminded of this every time she walked down the halls of her high school. The sea of children always parted in front of her. Please Read and Review!
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 963 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
8. The Power of Flame reviews
Using words to create pictures in your mind. Please Read and Review!
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
9. Always and Forever
past boyfriends.. it always seems so prefect at first..
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
10. Embers reviews
Getting over the last little bit of a dying relationship that weighs you down and finding a new fire in a new relationship with someone that can set your heart free. Please Read and Review!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
11. The Summoning »
The story is about a male vampire named Avery who turns Selene, a young women fighting with the world, into a vampire. It explains the hardships she has to go through after Avery changes her and how it brings them closer together. Keeps you guessing.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,453 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 10-6-06
12. Feeding the Addiction
Emotions gone through while in a serious relationship. Please Read and Review!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-07
13. The Light
A blast from the past. I wrote this a long time ago. People keep telling me there is a light at the end of the tunnel but I did’t see it.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-8-06 - Published: 10-8-06
14. Different reviews
About a girl who doesn't fit in. She discribes the world around her and how her world is so different from everybody elses. Very short and to the point. This was one of my first attempts at writing.
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-8-06 - Published: 10-8-06
15. Through Angel's Eyes
I wrote this when the whole Ramsey case got back in the news. I guess it just inspired me. I felt bad for her and what she must have gone through. But anyways it's not finished yet. Sorry. R&R Please!
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-06 - Published: 10-6-06
16. Not Caring
I wrote this when my friend Ian Netto died in a car accident as a reminder for the rest of us of what can happens when you get mixed up in drugs and drinking. Please Read and Reveiw! This one is very important to me!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-06 - Published: 10-6-06
17. Frustrations
Expresses the thoughts and emotions that go through your head when the person you love or care about is taken away from you. When you finally can't take it anymore but your not sure you want to let it all go just yet. Not Finished.. Any Suggestions? R&R
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-06 - Published: 10-6-06
18. My Everything
This poem discribes the feelings you go through when you really care about someone but they just leave you taking everything you have because they were just playing with your heart. Written 7.4.06
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-06 - Published: 10-6-06
19. Shattered Dreams
A raging torrent of hate and pain, Everything to lose and nothing to gain, As I sit here dying inside... just a story i wrote when i broke up with my last boyfriend. R&R please!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 400 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-06 - Published: 10-6-06
20. Living a Nightmare reviews
Living a nightmare lost and alone. No one to come save me and nowhere to go. Lost in the dark not one person caring if I’m saved or not.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-17-06 - Published: 8-17-06
21. Dominos reviews
Inspired by a phone call with a past friend early in our relationship. It discribes how it feels to be in the middle of something you cannot handle. When it seems as if the weight of the world is on your shoulders and you just can't take it anymore. R&R
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-17-06 - Published: 8-17-06
22. One Step at a Time
Inspired by a phone call with a past friend. Please Read and Review!
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-17-06 - Published: 8-17-06
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