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Pimpled Boy
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since: 10-21-04, id: 440709, Profile edited: 03-17-08
Author has written 47 stories for Nature, General, Fantasy, Haiku, Life, Family, General, Sci-Fi, Romance, School, and Essay.

Gimlet eyes of mine
Have lost their pearly lustre
Thick lenses in front...

The pair of cute ears
Have lost their own role, alas -
Amps to do the job!

The attractive face
Bedecked with ugly pimples
Has lost its virtue

This is the cruel
Reality that I face
In adolescence!

I don't think I'm good at writing. I joined FictionPress basically to improve my skills in written English and Chinese. I really admire people who write well, and I aspire to be one. It's hard work though.

Two favourite Singaporean writers here are: maybehecate and bluejaywalking. They really write very very well, and I enjoy reading their works. I believe they can grow up to be very promising writers and contribute to the literary arena of Singapore.

Friends of mine claim that my writings are sometimes good, but sometimes bad. With regard to this, I've been trying very hard to maintain my writing 'standard' at its peak, even though recently, it has sort of 'deteriorated' during the November/December school holidays.

Both my parents are from Chinese-speaking background. Hence, my English isn't very good. I don't think I write good English compositions. I always have writer's block each time I write an English composition in class. (I'm trying very hard to improve on my English, though.)

I hope you enjoy your stay here. I publish works that represent myself in FictionPress. I really wish that the number of (both positive and negative) reviews in each of my work will increase. So to end off this long rambling profile, I sincerely hope you'll read and review my works.




1. Ladybird
A frustrating experience with a ladybird. Read and review.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-6-06 - Published: 12-6-06
2. Pimple Worries reviews
On the worries of a pimply adolescent during a haircut. Read and review.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-06 - Published: 10-22-06
3. Ants reviews
I wrote this poem anyway, though I know deep down it won't go far. Read and review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-29-06 - Published: 5-29-06
4. After Chinese New Year reviews
I saw a poor bamboo withering away by the refuse chute just after Chinese New Year. Read and review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
5. The Enclosure reviews
Thoughts of a panda towards environmental destruction.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-11-06 - Published: 1-11-06
6. An Inconsistent Perfection reviews
Read and review. Inspiration struck me when one of the screws of my glasses loosened and the lens fell.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-06
7. Nail Deformities reviews
I'm a victim of nail deformities.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-06
8. Dawn II reviews
This is an extension of my haiku "Dawn" into a tanka. Perhaps you can tell me which is better.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-06
9. Untitled reviews
I screwed up a solo performance. A poem to express my disappointment. (To concerned friends out there: the last few stanzas are deliberately exaggerated; it isn't true that I flung my instrument to the floor.)
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-31-05 - Published: 12-31-05
10. 好可爱
Perhaps it's a little bit too late. But I decided to post it here. Read and review.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
11. 陈嘉庚的笑
About my school. Read and review.
School - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
12. 原来世界这样美(二)
Read and review.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
13. 原来世界这样美(一)
Read and review.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
14. 等你,在雨中 reviews
余光中新诗改写。
Romance - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
15. Colours
An attempt to write a sci-fic story. Do read and review!
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,262 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-05
16. Great Grandmother's Funeral reviews
A sad poem about a great grandmother who was not remembered by her great grandchildren.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-28-05 - Published: 12-28-05
17. The Poet's Eye reviews
Ever wonder poets' role in the society? Read to find out!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-05
18. A Haiku Is reviews
Haiku in itself.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-11-05 - Published: 12-11-05
19. Memories reviews
Inspiration from maybehecate's poem on crystallising love.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-7-05 - Published: 12-7-05
20. The Bargain
I had wanted to submit this for the Commonwealth Essay Competition 2005. But my teacher rejected it.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 698 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-5-05 - Published: 11-5-05
21. The Holiday Disaster reviews
This poem is dedicated to the thousands of victims of the recent tsunami disaster which affected six nations across South-Asia and even Africa.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-31-04 - Published: 12-31-04
22. Writer's Block reviews
This is an attempt to express in words how writer's block is like. Read and review!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-28-04 - Published: 12-28-04
23. Dancing Notes on the Staff reviews
An attempt to describe the notes on the staff in poetry. Do review to give me precious comments so that I can improve on it.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-04
24. Mother Earth's Ululation
This isn't really a good title. If you can think of a better one, please tell me. Read and review!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-3-04 - Published: 12-3-04
25. 五官的自白 reviews
This poem is dedicated to our five senses. Read and review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-21-04 - Published: 11-21-04
26. Dusk reviews
A haiku about dusk. Isn't dusk beautiful?
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-11-04 - Published: 11-11-04
27. Drugs reviews
Read and review. Something about drugs.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-9-04 - Published: 11-9-04
28. The Elephant's Eye reviews
A sad haiku about an elephant lacking its freedom. This picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/8123.jpg) inspires me.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-6-04 - Published: 11-6-04
29. 当阳光洒落 reviews
Hope that this can be published in my school's "Collection of Chinese literature". Read and review so that I can improve on it.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-04
30. 俳句 reviews
Read and Review. But try to type your review in English.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - Japanese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-04
31. Time Haiku reviews
This is a haiku about time.
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-04
32. Time Cinquain
A cinquain about time.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-04
33. What is Green? reviews
This poem is just about the colour green. A rather long poem. Hope that you will like it. Read and review!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-04
34. Happy I Ams
This poem is about some of the happy and useful things around us.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-04
35. Dawn reviews
Again, I've written this haiku to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/8009.jpg).
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-3-04 - Published: 11-3-04
36. The Melancholy Sight reviews
I've written this haiku to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/792.jpg).
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-31-04 - Published: 10-31-04
37. The Moth reviews
I wrote this haiku describing an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/7914.jpg).
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-04
38. When Mum and Dad Quarrel
This is a typical point-of-view from a ten-year-old when his mum and dad quarrel, so expect a happy ending!
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-04
39. The Hilly Landscape
Mother Nature indeed enraptures me with her creation of the landscapes around us. This haiku is written to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/788.jpg).
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-04
40. Mirage reviews
I really miss my fun and carefree childhood...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-27-04 - Published: 10-27-04
41. Summer Shower reviews
This poem is not one of the best which I've written... Anyway, please review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-04 - Published: 10-26-04
42. The Telephone Call reviews
This poem is about what happened during and after a hoax call. The "during" part is written by Fleur Adcock.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 509 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-04
43. The Sky reviews
The vast blue sky... how beautiful it is...
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-04
44. Papaya Tree
Papaya... What an unusual plant it is!
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-04
45. Adventure on Venda reviews
This story is about a team of fictional characters on a mission to exterminate Orxis.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,950 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-04 - Published: 10-21-04
46. Singapore reviews
This poem is about my country, Singapore.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-21-04 - Published: 10-21-04
47. Rain reviews
This poem is about rain.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-21-04 - Published: 10-21-04
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