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Author has written 47 stories for Nature, General, Fantasy, Haiku, Life, Family, General, Sci-Fi, Romance, School, and Essay. Gimlet eyes of mine The pair of cute ears The attractive face This is the cruel I don't think I'm good at writing. I joined FictionPress basically to improve my skills in written English and Chinese. I really admire people who write well, and I aspire to be one. It's hard work though. Two favourite Singaporean writers here are: maybehecate and bluejaywalking. They really write very very well, and I enjoy reading their works. I believe they can grow up to be very promising writers and contribute to the literary arena of Singapore. Friends of mine claim that my writings are sometimes good, but sometimes bad. With regard to this, I've been trying very hard to maintain my writing 'standard' at its peak, even though recently, it has sort of 'deteriorated' during the November/December school holidays. Both my parents are from Chinese-speaking background. Hence, my English isn't very good. I don't think I write good English compositions. I always have writer's block each time I write an English composition in class. (I'm trying very hard to improve on my English, though.) I hope you enjoy your stay here. I publish works that represent myself in FictionPress. I really wish that the number of (both positive and negative) reviews in each of my work will increase. So to end off this long rambling profile, I sincerely hope you'll read and review my works. | |||||||
1. LadybirdA frustrating experience with a ladybird. Read and review.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-6-06 - Published: 12-6-062. Pimple Worries reviewsOn the worries of a pimply adolescent during a haircut. Read and review.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-06 - Published: 10-22-063. Ants reviewsI wrote this poem anyway, though I know deep down it won't go far. Read and review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-29-06 - Published: 5-29-064. After Chinese New Year reviewsI saw a poor bamboo withering away by the refuse chute just after Chinese New Year. Read and review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-065. The Enclosure reviewsThoughts of a panda towards environmental destruction.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-11-06 - Published: 1-11-066. An Inconsistent Perfection reviewsRead and review. Inspiration struck me when one of the screws of my glasses loosened and the lens fell.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-067. Nail Deformities reviewsI'm a victim of nail deformities.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-068. Dawn II reviewsThis is an extension of my haiku "Dawn" into a tanka. Perhaps you can tell me which is better.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-069. Untitled reviewsI screwed up a solo performance. A poem to express my disappointment. (To concerned friends out there: the last few stanzas are deliberately exaggerated; it isn't true that I flung my instrument to the floor.)General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-31-05 - Published: 12-31-0510. 好可爱Perhaps it's a little bit too late. But I decided to post it here. Read and review.Essay - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0511. 陈嘉庚的笑About my school. Read and review.School - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0512. 原来世界这样美(二)Read and review.Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0513. 原来世界这样美(一)Read and review.Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0514. 等你,在雨中 reviews余光中新诗改写。Romance - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-0515. ColoursAn attempt to write a sci-fic story. Do read and review!Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,262 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-0516. Great Grandmother's Funeral reviewsA sad poem about a great grandmother who was not remembered by her great grandchildren.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-28-05 - Published: 12-28-0517. The Poet's Eye reviewsEver wonder poets' role in the society? Read to find out!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-0518. A Haiku Is reviewsHaiku in itself.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-11-05 - Published: 12-11-0519. Memories reviewsInspiration from maybehecate's poem on crystallising love.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-7-05 - Published: 12-7-0520. The BargainI had wanted to submit this for the Commonwealth Essay Competition 2005. But my teacher rejected it.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 698 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-5-05 - Published: 11-5-0521. The Holiday Disaster reviewsThis poem is dedicated to the thousands of victims of the recent tsunami disaster which affected six nations across South-Asia and even Africa.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-31-04 - Published: 12-31-0422. Writer's Block reviewsThis is an attempt to express in words how writer's block is like. Read and review!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-28-04 - Published: 12-28-0423. Dancing Notes on the Staff reviewsAn attempt to describe the notes on the staff in poetry. Do review to give me precious comments so that I can improve on it.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-26-04 - Published: 12-26-0424. Mother Earth's UlulationThis isn't really a good title. If you can think of a better one, please tell me. Read and review!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-3-04 - Published: 12-3-0425. 五官的自白 reviewsThis poem is dedicated to our five senses. Read and review.General - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-21-04 - Published: 11-21-0426. Dusk reviewsA haiku about dusk. Isn't dusk beautiful?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-11-04 - Published: 11-11-0427. Drugs reviewsRead and review. Something about drugs.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-9-04 - Published: 11-9-0428. The Elephant's Eye reviewsA sad haiku about an elephant lacking its freedom. This picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/8123.jpg) inspires me.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-6-04 - Published: 11-6-0429. 当阳光洒落 reviewsHope that this can be published in my school's "Collection of Chinese literature". Read and review so that I can improve on it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - Chinese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-0430. 俳句 reviewsRead and Review. But try to type your review in English.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - Japanese - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 0 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-0431. Time Haiku reviewsThis is a haiku about time.Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-5-04 - Published: 11-5-0432. Time CinquainA cinquain about time.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-0433. What is Green? reviewsThis poem is just about the colour green. A rather long poem. Hope that you will like it. Read and review!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-0434. Happy I AmsThis poem is about some of the happy and useful things around us.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-4-04 - Published: 11-4-0435. Dawn reviewsAgain, I've written this haiku to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/8009.jpg).Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-3-04 - Published: 11-3-0436. The Melancholy Sight reviewsI've written this haiku to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/792.jpg).Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-31-04 - Published: 10-31-0437. The Moth reviewsI wrote this haiku describing an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/7914.jpg).Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-04 - Published: 10-30-0438. When Mum and Dad QuarrelThis is a typical point-of-view from a ten-year-old when his mum and dad quarrel, so expect a happy ending!Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0439. The Hilly LandscapeMother Nature indeed enraptures me with her creation of the landscapes around us. This haiku is written to describe an online picture (http://www.picture.com/pics/001/788.jpg).Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-29-04 - Published: 10-29-0440. Mirage reviewsI really miss my fun and carefree childhood...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-27-04 - Published: 10-27-0441. Summer Shower reviewsThis poem is not one of the best which I've written... Anyway, please review.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-04 - Published: 10-26-0442. The Telephone Call reviewsThis poem is about what happened during and after a hoax call. The "during" part is written by Fleur Adcock.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 509 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-23-04 - Published: 10-23-0443. The Sky reviewsThe vast blue sky... how beautiful it is...Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-0444. Papaya TreePapaya... What an unusual plant it is!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-22-04 - Published: 10-22-0445. Adventure on Venda reviewsThis story is about a team of fictional characters on a mission to exterminate Orxis.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,950 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-04 - Published: 10-21-04