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| Angela Dawne |
Author has written 26 stories for Life, Nature, Humor, Love, Haiku, Kids, Humor, Religion, and Romance. Well, it is time for me to stop posting to this account. All this stuff is so fake. It stifles creativity, it does. If your style is truly to write poems like this: Navy blue eyes that glittered in candlelight Okay, great. But that's just not concise writing. Nor are those descriptions there to "move the plot along", as it were, it's just there to show how artsy and avant-garde you are. And the point of poetry, to my reckoning, anyway, is to say what you mean. You can say it prettily if you'd like.. But, in the end, you should have said it. And it shouldn't take fifteen words to say what three can. So I've decided to let everything I've already posted stay here, and you can review to your heart's content, I suppose...but all my new stuff I'm keeping. That way I can write the way I'd like to write. I truly don't enjoy pandering to my readers. Rather, I should write so that I get readers that are worth it, that are looking for something new and fresh and real. Peace be with you all. I truly did enjoy writing some of these pieces (and still maintain that my best works have been the light-hearted ones). - Angela Dawne - P.S. Don't steal the penname. It is registered. :-) | |||||||
1. Becoming a Model reviewsI think I am turning into quite a bitter child. Mother detests me, and why shouldn't she? This is about her putting me in modeling school. Yippee.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-17-07 - Published: 6-17-072. Neurotic Girlfriend reviewsThe girlfriend you can never get rid of. Much to your bitter disappointment.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-07 - Published: 6-3-073. Chirping reviewsProbably will stay a oneshot, unless people like the characters. Though, quite honestly, I like the characters. Anyway, read and review. It's almost nauseatingly cute.Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 936 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-07 - Published: 5-13-074. How to Write a Shakespeare Essay reviewsProcrastinating on my Shakespeare essay. Decided to write how to write one, but not actually write one. God forbid I finish it more than two hours before class starts.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-13-07 - Published: 5-13-075. Persecution reviewsWhat happens when you're bored in Humanities. And you're supposed to be discussing the Spanish inquisition. Read and review, please...just wrote it out in about two minutes.Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-11-07 - Published: 5-11-076. Swoon, for the Ideal Man has Come! reviewsHe closes the toilet seat, he opens up my door...is it true? Can it be true? This story is obviously done in jest. It's pretty funny, in a medieval style sort of way. No, really. Just read it. It's good.Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 776 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-07 - Published: 3-1-077. The Man I Love reviewsKinda quirky. Some's serious, some's silly. Enjoy.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-1-07 - Published: 3-1-078. Leonardo DUHVinci reviewsWhy is he DuhVinci? Check out my brother's story to find out. Yes, this story is my 11 yearold bro's, as told to me, so...please review?Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 346 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-10-06 - Published: 11-10-069. Great Timing reviewsI really like this guy, but unfortunately am not going to be able to see him any longer. That's okay. I think.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-17-06 - Published: 10-17-0610. My Tongue Might Have a Mind of its Own reviewsMy tongue starts working when I'm not careful. But sometimes it works.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-17-06 - Published: 10-17-0611. The Small Poetic Ramblings of a Girl in Love reviewsYeah, this is about as good a poem about love gets when you're actually in it. It's sorta hard to concentrate... A simple poem. Read and review.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-20-06 - Published: 8-20-0612. My Great Adventure reviewsMy 3rd grade sister's short, short, short, short, short story about her stuffed animal Sniffy. Should bring a smile? You'll love the sappy ending! =)Kids - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-0613. C'mon, Mom! reviewsA six year old complains to his mom.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-3-06 - Published: 1-3-0614. Jungle Morals reviewsRated for safety. Who says living in the jungle doesn't teach morals?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-18-05 - Published: 11-18-0515. Snowflake reviewsActually, two haikus. Funny to me, which is...what counts?Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-18-05 - Published: 11-18-0516. Envying the Bluebird reviews{Twittering love songs to its mate.} Rated for endless safety.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-11-05 - Published: 9-11-0517. Come Back reviewsRated for safety. From a guy's POV. The girl he loved got into trouble...he just wants her back. In first-person.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-8-05 - Published: 6-8-0518. You're My Everything reviewsI don't want to hear that it's my fault. I just want to hear that you love me.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-6-05 - Published: 6-6-0519. Who Scares Me reviewsWho scares me? People that don't go on the computer...Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-0520. Why I'm Still Awake reviewsWhy am I not in bed? It's late at night, right? Wrong.Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-05 - Published: 5-31-0521. Awful, Awful Seasons reviewsThis is exactly why I'm always in front of a computer and not in the real world. The seasons. They're dangerous! Really! (Oh, just read it.)Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0522. The Real Hell reviewsCome on. You know it's true. Just read.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0523. Suicide is Stupid reviewsRather stupid poem from the eyes of a stupid person who was doomed because they were suicidal. (Note: I'm not Christian. I have no idea what the heck I'm talking about here. Feel free to correct me.)Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0524. Obsessions Destroy reviewsWhat havoc can Obsessions wreak? Based on the science of Unarius, which I firmly believe in.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0525. My Piano StoryWhat does it mean as I pound the keys of my piano?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 275 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 4-9-05
