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Author has written 31 stories for Love, General, and Haiku. Repeating Yesterday -(As I Lay dying)- this is what I am - Without tring I would never fail and I fell in love with failure - For love and Failing (Bleeding Through) -I hope that and pray that one day you will realize You were always my biggest inspiration the pain you've caused has built who I've become now we might as well be strangers on't be a corpse so you can drag your dead I've been blessed by the fires by the fires of your hell- Return to sender (Bleeding Through) I love music; favorite band Still Remains I think that metalcore have awesome lyrics and I am all about the lyrics…Im 24…I don’t write to often…its like therapy for me…I’m not creasy well no one have prove it xD. This is like a hobby for me I write since I was 15 and I still do...I’m from Panama city Panama and I’m just writing something in my profile cause I don’t have anything else to do right now (I’m at work) like to drink…well I think that I already pass the “getting drunk everyday” age…last year lol…I’m studding Mechanical Engineer…since I was like 16 I felt in love with this phrase “This world is in state of agony”…I think that is so truth…I like the depressive lyrics/poems/songs...though I don’t like to be depress…well at least not for the last 5 years…I write to myself…well that’s about it…i should back and do some...work... Staying alive is just the slowest way to die...nothing else... | |||||||||
1. SimplerI ever wrote something like this before…and I really like this piece…is not a poem …I would like your opinion…please read and give me some honest critics…it just happend when thinking about writing something but i wasnt on the "mood"...R&R thanxComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 499 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-9-09 - Published: 1-9-092. Under Water reviewsNo black or white...only gray tones...love, hate, life and pain are overated... Im back with an experiment;It may be hard to understand my point of view but is open to interpretation...give me your critics I will replay. R&RComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-29-08 - Published: 9-29-083. SimpLe reviewslife can be so complex and simple...Read and Review. I will replay XD thanx Pretty different from what I used to write; love instead painComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-12-08 - Published: 6-12-084. Your nothing reviewsI know that is not you but this “nothing” that kills..."She wants nothing more But to be a little whore" -S.O.A.D. read and review thanxComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-22-08 - Published: 4-22-085. ButterfliesWell, well I back with 2 pieces that I write with pain and tears, and dont worry darling i know that is not you! is the "nothig" that kills! enjoy it R & R. thanxComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-1-08 - Published: 4-1-086. Dont Give More Tomorrows reviewsWell, well I back with 2 pieces that I write with pain and tears, enjoy it R & R. thanxComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-1-08 - Published: 4-1-087. 10 seconds to love you reviewsyour number one stoker or your imaginary friend....R & R thanxComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-07 - Published: 10-30-078. Life is reviewsThis is really an experiment,I hope you can understand it & Me well if you can give me some critics I will appreciate it.Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-13-07 - Published: 6-13-079. Sunset reviewsI cry...I hope you can read and give me some reviewscritics thanx, my second haikuComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-6-07 - Published: 6-6-0710. Happy? reviewsmy first short poem. is my first attemp, i hope you can read it and give some reviewsComplete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-4-07 - Published: 6-4-0711. Those Beautiful Eyes reviewsI still remember those beautiful eyes...I'm just sorry cause you only met Mr. Hide, about a serial killerlover...very graphic and dark R & R i'll reply...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-10-07 - Published: 5-10-0712. ¿Quienes somos? reviewsRead & Review...una simple pregunta, con respuestas muy complicadas...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-25-07 - Published: 4-25-0713. Close My EyesWill I close my eyes or should I close yours...do I care about you, do I ever care about anything.You can take my pain but you cant take my heart Read & Review, I will replyComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-29-07 - Published: 3-29-0714. Hi reviewsDont worry about me this is the goodbye...read & reviewComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-13-07 - Published: 3-13-0715. Lets Die Before June reviewsI'm back...lets die before June...love can eat you from the inside out. Please read & review thanx..Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-30-06 - Published: 12-30-0616. In Heaven reviewsThe way i feel about my faith and beliefs... a protest i think. R & RLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-10-06 - Published: 6-10-0617. Imperfect reviewsthe love is perfectly imperfect... R & R.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-17-06 - Published: 4-17-0618. Let reviewsHey! I'm back!...when u have to let it go (song)...R & R i will reply...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-0619. The Remembrance Ballad reviewsOne of my favorite songs...this lyric is fucking awesome the band is called "Atreyu" R & R plzLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-6-06 - Published: 2-6-0620. The coldest kisS reviewsAbout Love?...is about a Vampire...and wath he do with his lover...the girl who give him the coldest kisS...R & R plz (my first one in this topic)Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-30-06 - Published: 1-30-0621. Forget My Name reviewsThis one is no about a heartache...i just stop caring about a girl that i used to love...(as u can see there is no rage in this one) plz r&rLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-28-06 - Published: 1-28-0622. She Just Want To Fuck With Me reviewsThis actually happened, is very graphic… (I make some changes already)Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 374 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-27-06 - Published: 1-27-0623. Give Me Back reviewsFor my new ex...this is the goodbye...R and RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-21-06 - Published: 1-21-0624. Let Me Hate You Darling reviewsI just let all my feelings in this poem...just let the words flow...very fucking painfull...Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-17-06 - Published: 1-17-0625. Forgive Us reviewsWe are al guilty...R and R if u want...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-12-06 - Published: 1-12-0626. FAV reviewsMi primer poema en español en esta page, en los de ingles eh tenido buenas criticas veamos con este, el titulo significa Feliz Año Viejo, titulo Ramdon...leanlo y demne su opinion es corto no les tomara tiempoLove - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-6-06 - Published: 1-6-0627. This was for Us reviewsA lot of sadness in this poem...hope you like it...R&RLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-0528. I wish reviewsHope u like this, a lot of angry in this peace...please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-19-05 - Published: 12-19-0529. Dreams Of Agony reviewsi cant sleep the night i wrothe this...Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0530. No one Left reviewssometimes you just think that there is no one leftLove - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-05
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