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Author has written 4 stories for Fantasy, General, Horror, and Fantasy. Yeah, I don't really expect anyone to read my stories. Getting comments on amateur art? Hard. Getting comments on amateur writing? Hah! You crazy? Considering my work isn’t borderline pornographic, filled with popular cliché creatures like vampires and werewolves, or is a rip off of some popular book or show, I’ll be lucky if I get a single comment at all! But hey, life’s life. I hope you will give me a spin. Who knows, I might return the favor. Wink a-wink. Anyway, the story I really want help with is Branches Off Semmelrogg, and I’m sure its longness is enough to scare off most potential readers, but I'd love critiques, not flames, not even compliments, I want to make this better before I continue. Be blunt, please! Oh, and here are some WIP character portraits from BOS. Enjoy. Barnabas Spraggon (aka Uncle Grabby)
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1. Devil Dance reviewsThis is best said out loud so you can hear the rhythm. But yes. Satan says: Sin! And as always have fun.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-5-07 - Published: 10-5-072. Chapter 20 reviewsThis is a chapter of an imaginary book. Chapter 20 recounts the main characters' ascent through a oozing warped hotel, at the top of which, reality has snapped, and creatures from the other side are leaking through.Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,288 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-5-07 - Published: 10-5-073. Everythin's FineI was her catch, not the other way around, though, for awhile, I liked to think that way. I should have known, that somewhere in this great sand pit I’d meet someone who’d best me. I just didn’t expect them to be wearing blue eyeliner, ‘s all.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 946 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-5-07 - Published: 10-5-074. Branches Off Semmelrogg »Welcome to the dysfunctional, freakish and over all malevolent Semmelrogg clan. They are descendants of an 800 year old nut job called Gran Gran who has summoned them to compete for her magic. Will they be able to survive each other? Not bloody likely!Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 12,231 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-2-07 - Published: 10-2-07
