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since: 12-22-04, id: 450587
Author has written 60 stories for Fantasy, Song, Life, Love, Religion, Nature, and General.

Hello all and welcome to my new poetry page! For those of you are confused, I'm also Winged One1. My poetry outnumbers my prose horrifically, so I've moved the poetry here.

Basic stats- Name: Simi
Age: 17
Religion: Jewish
Other important facts: I'm easily confused. Bear that in mind when you Review.

Perhaps more will show up in this bio later? You never know.

Goodness. Enjoy the tonloads of poetry! It enjoys you. _~

If you want fiction, go here. http://www.fictionpress.com/~wingedone1

And Now, A Moment From the Dictionary

angst (Àngkst)
n.

A feeling of anxiety or apprehension often accompanied by depression.

(Surprisingly, not "A feeling that you are drenched in your own blood, slashed by the knives of your inner sorrow," or "Incurable gothiness, lamentations, and self-mutilation." Hm.)

I love constructive criticism on anything here, though I have two caveats:

1) Some of these poems are very, very old. If the summary says so, crits of any kind are probably necessary as they're really only here out of a sense of completeness. If you wanna, though, go ahead.

2) I start poems with so/and/but, which I've found baffles some people. That's okay. You may comment on the oddity, but it's sticking. I like the sound of it. :)

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1. Our StarBoats reviews
For once we sailed across the sky in our star-boats. We are older now, but those stars will always be our own.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-24-08 - Published: 4-24-08
2. Hours Come and Hours Go
Written apparently with TS Eliot on the brain. Hours come and go without passing.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-23-07 - Published: 10-23-07
3. Ripple
He shakes his world in a glass bottle.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-9-07 - Published: 9-9-07
4. Seven For a Secret
The birds here don't sing, but they whisper poetry, weird poetry, if you're willing to listen to them.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-9-07 - Published: 9-9-07
5. Asphalt Temple
One by one the headlights come on, guiding us to the asphalt temple.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07
6. Observations From Victory Lane
School's let out, the clouds are clearing, and the air is heavy with the smell of gasoline.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07
7. The Book of David
It seems, now, that we have forgotten everything but how to argue. And though words escape our lips, their shapes are meaningless.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-13-07 - Published: 8-13-07
8. The Gloaming
Sunset, dusk, evening, twilight, gloaming.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-07 - Published: 7-12-07
9. Far El Dorado reviews
I never know how to categorize my poetry anymore. This is representative of my mother and I in what I think may be a fantasy guise. But in any case, I believe we all search for El Dorado, though all for different reasons.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
10. Waiting For the Barbarians
Inspired by a poem of the same name. It is basically an alternate version of the story I'm working on. The Emperor made his decision, and whether or not it was right, the goddess is coming...
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
11. Solstice King
It's not a nature poem or a fantasy poem, though it does feature an anthropormorphized Winter. Written in honor of a very chilly May morning.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
12. Cycles of the StormGod reviews
An acrostic poem. The young woman responsible for the calendar and the changing of the seasons gives summer its one last moment.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
13. A Moment of Sunlight
Written for the sheer pleasure of writing it, and experiencing one moment of silver twilight.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
14. The River reviews
A mind too fragile to bear tragedy invents its own reality, though old memories come creeping in sometimes at the river.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-07
15. Polish It Carefully So It Won't Wear Away reviews
I don't really know where this came from, other than that it's based on a true story. I thought I was done with angsty boy poetry, but I guess not! But he gave a trophy I could sieze onto, walk away with, and keep on going.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-21-07 - Published: 6-21-07
16. Infinite Generosity
I was sitting in English class there were birds outside. April is so unfair. So: Piece by piece, the world is replaced by machinery.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
17. The Wind Today reviews
Written on the day of the VT shootings partially a response to that. The wind was unbelievably loud that day, and it all sort of snowballed into a poem on tragedy.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-07
18. Ocean's Children Grown
Far away from Mother Ocean, her children grow, live, and die in the desert.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-12-07 - Published: 2-12-07
19. Fall and Fade to Sleep
A villanelle about the ocean, and the light that dances on the waves.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-12-07 - Published: 2-12-07
20. Womb of the Creator reviews
The Creator is a recurring figure in my poetry. She struggles always to create a world of beauty and meaning, and leaves her mark on the world below her...
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-12-07 - Published: 2-12-07
21. Where the Buttermoths Fly reviews
A traditional and tragic tale of star-cross'd lovers. The love of a faerie king and the merking's daughter is bitter, and buried now beneath the waves.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 491 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-06 - Published: 7-31-06
22. The Mynah Bird and the Fox May Speak reviews
The mynah bird and the fox may speak, but the sun makes us forget. (Written at the end of the schoolyear, wanting to be outside again)
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-06 - Published: 7-31-06
23. Satellites and Old Moons reviews
When the flood comes, will you seek the sun or be left behind in old Atlantis?
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-4-06 - Published: 7-4-06
24. On Purity
Who wants to wear white on their wedding day anyway? Red is so much more fun...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-1-05 - Published: 11-1-05
25. December's Corsage reviews
Actually, not too angsty. Promise. It's secretly about me, but shhh! Don't tell anyone.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-1-05 - Published: 11-1-05
26. Beast and Beauty reviews
A retelling of the Beauty and the Beast in sestina form! A bit dark, but it's a wonderfully dark story.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-1-05 - Published: 11-1-05
27. Wedding Picture reviews
A sad little poem of a widow reflecting on what's left.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-30-05 - Published: 10-30-05
28. Creation of a Rose reviews
This is a mythology poem, telling how rose got thorns, and such.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-30-05 - Published: 10-30-05
29. Star, Spider, and Storm reviews
Silverstar, the heroine from the North. Arachne, the assassin from the East. Meadow, the Tempest from the South. Rather important characters from a story of mine; I just had a word-babble here.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-23-05 - Published: 10-23-05
30. Wheel
It's a seasons poem! I think everyone should have one.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-5-05 - Published: 10-5-05
31. Jerusalem reviews
I was eleven when we visited Israel, and Jerusalem, and the Western Wall...
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-27-05 - Published: 9-27-05
32. Seabreeze and Stars
I want the stars, I want seabreeze...The first line is from Bob Dylan's song, A Hard Rain's AGonna Fall.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-27-05 - Published: 9-27-05
33. Black Branch
Rated for strong suicide themes. The first line is from Bob Dylan's song A Hard Rain's AGonna Fall.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-27-05 - Published: 9-27-05
34. Dancing Lights » reviews
Symbolising betrayal and moving on. Written before I had any clue what I was talking about.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-22-05 - Published: 1-1-05
35. Siren » reviews
The siren is a guy, actually. We're not discussing this. And I'd be the narrator. Basically, this is all symbolic of a love triangle. I sigh, loudly. The second? After the breakup.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-22-05 - Published: 2-10-05
36. Faded Flower for the Queen reviews
A new take on the Persephone myth. What happened when the gods of old were slowly replaced?
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 504 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-8-05 - Published: 5-8-05
37. Ghost Dancer » reviews
A ghostly woman will dance forever...And her husband will search for her until the end of time. (Two poems that go together, eg the two chapters)
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-8-05 - Published: 5-6-05
38. Darker, Colder reviews
Read after "Dark Cold Place." Good God, was I in an angst mood.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-6-05 - Published: 5-6-05
39. Elegy reviews
Stuff's changing in my life. I know what inspired this, but it's hard to explain. Written for what I've lost and what I'm soon to lose.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-10-05 - Published: 2-10-05
40. Secrets reviews
Sort of old. When the darkness comes, will your will or your denial be stronger?
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
41. Broken reviews
Little broken angel, are you like me?
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
42. Dark Cold Place reviews
Tears provide for the best poetry.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
43. Invitation to Hell reviews
The invitation is always open.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
44. Gothic Snow reviews
Written for a picture on Elfwood by the same name. Instead of Seven Dwarves, there are seven deadly sins.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
45. Greys
For a story. When you have come to the ends of the earth and nothing is the same, can you hold on to your black and whites?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
46. Grounded Stars
Another view of Winter Sky, written a year later. She has watched the stars fall, and all alone, she cries for them...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
47. The Guide
She is alone, she is eternal, she is the Guide.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 549 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
48. Spell of the Hunter
No one knows whether the spell is good or evil...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
49. Lament of the Winged One reviews
Oldish. Written for my character "The Winged One," the lone survivor of her people.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-05 - Published: 1-1-05
50. Bleeding Stars reviews
Written with a friend in mind. Um. Yeah.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
51. Cry of the Winged One reviews
Oldish. Written for a story that WILL NEVER BE FINISHED! BWAHA! Um...yeah. Otherwise, angstyness abounds.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
52. Mirror reviews
Again with the oldness! I had this phase where I avoided mirrors. Yeah.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
53. Pandoran Prison reviews
The oldness, it burns.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
54. Poison Glen reviews
Inspired by a picture on Elfwood by the same name, I believe. I just had fun with it.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
55. Pretend reviews
Old. I am so massively ashamed of this, but here it is in any case.
Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
56. Weave a Pretty Web reviews
Oldish. Weave your pretty web, spider, and capture the stars and storms.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
57. Red Snow reviews
Another oldie. Rated for, um, lots of blood. Emotion, sad, blah.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
58. Wind in the Eaves reviews
Very old! I'm not quite sure what it means. Mostly what the cold months mean to me.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
59. Winter Day
Sequel to Winter Sky. Very old! I still don't really know what it means.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
60. Winter Sky reviews
Very old! I still like it, though. It's about the battle between good and bad, I think.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-27-04 - Published: 12-27-04
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