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since: 01-10-05, id: 453884, Profile edited: 04-23-08
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Author has written 13 stories for General, Fantasy, Love, Life, and Humor.

One of my closest friends once said "Talking to Satsu-chan is like having unprotected sex. You never know what's going to happen."


UPDATED : January 17, 2008

Just FYI, within the next year or two I will hopefully be working on publishing DMCS and Wings and Wishes under my newly assumed pen name:
Mochi Marie Mack

BY THE WAY! I just found out this morning that the story I submitted to scholastics (Ticking) was awarded a Silver Key! Check it out, I have it published for you guys! Last year my fantasy piece was awarded a Gold Key, however there was very little competition in that genre. This year's piece was submitted in Short Story, where there is a LOT of competition, so this years Silver Key is actually more of an achievement than last year's Gold Key... So, yeah, hopefully this means I am improving...

Bio:

Name: Mochi Marie Mack

Age: 18

Birthdate: March 30, 1990

Websites: myspace.com/jijichan
gaiaonline.com - FrenchToastSyrup

My Books: I'm actually trying to focus on rewriting Wings and Wishes to improve it...

Faith: Christian. Because being a Child of God isn't a religion, it's a way of life.

Favorites:

Animal: I am OBSSESSED with horses :3

Books: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

Author: McKinley Cooper (my new hero) xD

Musicals: How to Succeed in Business Without Really Trying, Phantom of the Operah, Rent, Lion King (I've only seen Lion King on broadway but one day I shall see Phantom and Rent!), Thoroughly Modern Millie (chinese guys are AWESOME!)


Travelin' Soldier

A Dixie Chicks song

Two days past eighteen / He was waiting for the bus in his army greens / Sat down in a booth at a cafe there / Gave his order to girl with a bow in her hair / He's a little shy so she gives him a smile / And he says would you mind sitting down for a while / And talking to me I'm feeling alone / She says I'm off in an hour and I know where we can go / So they went down and they sat on the pier / He said I bet you got a boyfriend but I don't care / I got no one to send a letter to / Would you mind if I sent one back here to you / I cried / Never gonna hold the hand of another guy / Too young for him they told her / Waitin' for the love of a travelin' soldier / Our love will never end / Waitin' for the soldier to come back again / Never more to be alone when the letter said / A soldier's coming home / So the letters came from an army camp / In California then Vietnam / He told her of his heart / It might be love / And all of the things he was so scared of / He said when it's getting kinda rough over here / I think of that day sitting down at the pier / And I close my eyes and see your pretty smile / Don't worry but I won't be able to write for a while / I cried / Never gonna hold the hand of another guy / Too young for him they told her / Waitin' for the love of a travelin' soldier / Our love will never end / Waitin' for the soldier to come back again / Never more to be alone when the letter said / A soldier's coming home / One Friday night at a football game / The Lord's prayer said and the Anthem sang / A man said folks would you bow your heads / For a list of local Vietnam dead / Crying all alone under the stands / Was a piccolo player in the marching band / And one name read and no on really cared / But a pretty little girl with a bow in her hair / I cried / Never gonna hold the hand of another guy / Too young for him they told her / Waitin' for the love of a travelin' soldier / Our love will never end / Waitin' for the soldier to come back home again / Never more to be alone when the letter said / A soldier's coming / I cried / Never gonna hold the hand of another guy / Too young for him they told her / Waitin' for the love of a travelin' soldier / Our love will never end / Waitin' for the soldier to come back home again / Never more to be alone when the letter said / A soldier's coming home /




1. Pure Love reviews
Pure Love loves without inhibitions. It is kind, understanding, and it comforts and heals. Pure Love is the person you love not for what they can give you, but for who they are. Pure Love heals and is healing
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 5-9-08
2. Loving Scars reviews
Erase his fears and inhibitions, love him for who he is and accept him for who he was, all his faults and all his scars. Because you can't erase them, you can only love him.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 5-9-08
3. Storm v2 reviews
Let the storm of him take over you -rewrite of Storm-
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-6-08 - Published: 5-6-08
4. Storm reviews
Let the storm of him take over you -liable to edits in near future- Please R&R. Tell me how I can improve
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-6-08 - Published: 5-6-08
5. Ticking reviews
A sad story about an old woman alone on her birthday
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 643 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-29-08 - Published: 4-29-08
6. For Laughs and Other Short Stories » reviews
A collection of all my short stories, in case you don't want to click individual links on my page. These stories range from poetic, to sad, to humorous, to frightening.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,602 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-22-08 - Published: 4-22-08
7. Wisdom Teeth reviews
A one-line piece about going to oral surgery
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 363 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-22-08 - Published: 4-22-08
8. For Laughs reviews
A short story about a very messed up wedding
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
9. Life's Tapestry reviews
A short poem about the tapestry of your life
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-21-08
10. Wings & Wishes » reviews
Arisa is a mute girl who is stolen away to be the next master of the Dragon's Jewel. On her adventure she may find a love she never thought possible and a voice of her own.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,663 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-21-08 - Published: 4-11-08
11. Wings and Wishes » reviews
Arisa has just begun a new life at her brother's public high school. She watches a mysterious boy from the windows of her classroom on her first day. A few weeks later, she stolen away for the journey of her life. Only she can control the Dragons Jewel.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 16 - Words: 23,913 - Reviews: 102 - Updated: 4-11-08 - Published: 2-14-05
12. Guardian Angel » reviews
A series of letters written to a guardian angel from a girl I created in a story not yet published.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 2 - Words: 785 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-24-07 - Published: 5-22-07
13. Water Dancer » reviews
A girl who accidentally starts a war? A manor in the mountains that harvests many secrets? A girl dancing in a fountain at midnight? Maybe...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,538 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-11-05 - Published: 2-23-05
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