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Quitisential Bee
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since: 02-01-05, id: 457654, Profile edited: 04-18-08
Author has written 41 stories for Life, Love, Nature, and Friendship.

This includes poems written before I took a break, and poems written after my break. Just look at dates. You're a smart person. You'll figure it out. I'll try to improve the quality of my pieces, and I hope you enjoy some of them.




1. Walking Waltzing reviews
I don't really know if I like this one, but here it is. its a little different.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-6-08 - Published: 5-6-08
2. Typical reviews
No matter what seems to happen, compared to the big picture, what do your individual hurts mean? People are hardly unique in some senses.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-08 - Published: 4-26-08
3. Did Didn't matter reviews
Up to you.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-20-08 - Published: 4-20-08
4. Too much reviews
There's alot out there, I'm realizing. Who understands it at all?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-18-08 - Published: 4-18-08
5. Someday reviews
Inspired by someone who hates that word.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-3-08 - Published: 2-3-08
6. Reflecting reviews
Just that, reflections.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-1-08 - Published: 1-1-08
7. Sunshine reviews
no, not after the song. rr, this is a first in a while.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 7-17-07
8. I, the Fool reviews
Funny enough, it involved tarot cards.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 7-17-07
9. Chicken soup reviews
Only idealists beleive all new friends can be this nice.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-17-07 - Published: 7-17-07
10. I can't reviews
I can't freakin' draw. and other thoughts.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-14-07 - Published: 1-14-07
11. Who will I be? reviews
What do you have planned for your life? do you have a plan? That's the gist of it.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-14-07 - Published: 1-14-07
12. confuzzled reviews
to tell you the truth, its a little confused...but please read and review, its my first in a while
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-13-07 - Published: 1-13-07
13. Turn Around? reviews
wow it's not so great, but after this kind of break, you gotta start somewhere.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-27-06 - Published: 9-27-06
14. Misinterpreting reviews
the last line has the word spelled wrong on purpose...now R&R.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-05
15. Drowning in you? reviews
confusion in a relationship...not finding sense...approaching 'cold, 'dark'...oh, just read it and find out! R&R, please.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-27-05 - Published: 12-27-05
16. Pill reviews
Don't do drugs, but read this. R&R, please.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-10-05 - Published: 10-10-05
17. BloodFilled Mark reviews
this is a 'ballad' for english. about a person who loses some sort of female companion. hmmmmm...is this teacher friendly?...r&r please.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-26-05 - Published: 9-26-05
18. Feel it reviews
Just read it. R&R, please.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-05
19. Not My Own reviews
my messed feelings...in print.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-31-05 - Published: 7-31-05
20. Things Have Changed reviews
About a person who can't find out anything about someone they care about, and wants to find out. Please R&R.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-3-05 - Published: 6-3-05
21. Darkened Room reviews
I haven't wrote anything at all lately, so i'm proud of this one. about the effects of leaving a place barren for too long...kinda...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-26-05 - Published: 5-26-05
22. All Away reviews
This for anyone who has been strung along...to long...by someone they love. I don't know if this is what i feel or if it just came out of mixed emotions. please R&R!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-15-05 - Published: 5-15-05
23. long ago reviews
this is a kinda-song-poem thing that i wrote while whatching a french presentation. it holds not much personal meaning, just alot of pentup stuff that came out as this. Enjoy & R&R)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-6-05 - Published: 5-6-05
24. came reviews
this is one i can't judge...please R&R...let me know...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-21-05 - Published: 4-21-05
25. Stuck reviews
gasp i used the word 'dead! i guess i'll have to rate it T! Please R&R!
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-21-05 - Published: 4-21-05
26. Death reviews
GRIM Reaper is right...he's not a great conversationalist...this is a strange one...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 4-9-05
27. Lights reviews
hmmm...lights...enough said... now read it...please R&R...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 4-9-05
28. Snow reviews
Same idea as Run...i went for a long walk with my dog...thought i saw someone...special...and that got me thinking along these lines. i love snow falls. they make everything...quiet-like.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-18-05 - Published: 3-18-05
29. Run reviews
i'm trying to force stuff out of my self...this is forced...sortof...but i still like it. this is how i feel when i run. all is left behind. it's absolute bliss!...try it...although it might just be runner's high...ah well...still good...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-05
30. I come again reviews
i don't know if this is my present situation...it could be...but it seemed like a good poem idea...so R&R...i don't know if this is my last edition of this poem...so please R&R...or...just R&R
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-10-05 - Published: 3-10-05
31. Something faded reviews
i don't have the energy to say why...why i wrote this...sigh...life's not easy...STAY HAPPY...must...STAY HAPPY...MUST...sigh...
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-9-05 - Published: 3-9-05
32. After reviews
about a person who is killed...or something...and is with his...person?...again...i think it's an after death experience...or something. Open for interpertation. R&R (not one of my betters...)
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-2-05 - Published: 3-2-05
33. all taken reviews
it's better with the paragraphs bunched,,,will improve...just wrote this...so bored...HELP ME...plz...or...hmmm...let me think on that...it's about a guy(i think)who lost/is abandonded (by)someone...kinda sad...to me at least...does everyone else suck at
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-26-05 - Published: 2-26-05
34. Let Me Rage reviews
the point is about someone hating someone else after a betrayal or something...i don't know...I don't feel this way now...but I have...read it...or...i'll...continue...the...regime...of...the...dots...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-16-05 - Published: 2-16-05
35. Burning Away reviews
this is the original of val dance. It has two versions(1)my past feelings (2)my current feelings. It's ok...i guess...maybe...
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-13-05 - Published: 2-13-05
36. Val dance reviews
This is about the BEST DAY OF MY LIFE. I mean a pleasent experience. This is a variation on another poem I wrote but haven't put on this site yet. OMG I FEEL HAPPY. I mean joyful.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-11-05 - Published: 2-11-05
37. Somewhere? reviews
...well...this came after a L O N G work period. My brain was going off on a tangent...somewhere...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-7-05 - Published: 2-7-05
38. Approach reviews
when approaching...someone...some pretty funny stuff happens in my head. Kids, let this happen to you.
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-7-05 - Published: 2-7-05
39. When the fire goes out reviews
This is a review on my situation-Verdict: deep shit
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-7-05 - Published: 2-7-05
40. Swinging reviews
THIS one is a bit scary. I have no clue where it came from. "Always look on the bright side of death..."
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-7-05 - Published: 2-7-05
41. My Road reviews
I'm kind of depressed alot lately, so this one came naturally. Hence the name Eternally Hopeful...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-7-05 - Published: 2-7-05
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