Lain Dolohov
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since: 02-15-05, id: 460043
country: New Zealand
Author has written 7 stories for Historical.

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Yes:

Thoughtful and detailed, and constructive critiques (for my work or anyone else's: we need more of it).

Requests to critique your work (though be warned that I'm less competent critiquing sci-fi).

Inventiveness and originality.

In-depth characterization.

No:

One-word/line reviews or reviews that don't say anything helpful.

Insane spelling and grammar errors.

The same old sword-and-magic shit, and cliched characters.

Mindless trolling and flaming.


1. King Philippe reviews
Philippe Auguste, 14 years old, has been recently crowned king of France. He faces a certain diplomatic challenge in Richard, prince of England, who is his rival, but also his admirer and somewhat more than eccentric.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,413 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-27-07
2. In and out the Door reviews
Elinor of Aquitaine meets her husband's lover, Rosamund. Or: the Beauty of Christendom meets the lover of Henry II of England, Fair Rosamund. Either way, it's brief, and takes place in the 1100s.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-7-07 - Complete
3. Saintliness
Philippe Auguste, Henry II, Thomas Becket, in some anonymous castle, room and time. The times are messed up, I know. It's for the sake of interaction and fiction.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,838 - Published: 12-12-05
4. After the Crusade reviews
Richard the Lionheart returns to 'confront' two traitors: his lover, Philippe Auguste, and his brother John. Warning: Rather unorthadox characterization of all three.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,326 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-19-05
5. The Garden
Henry II and Becket in the eye of the storm, so to speak. France, 1168.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,545 - Published: 10-3-05
6. The King's Harem reviews
Elinor of Aquitaine gets drunk too. Will Henry finally get the better of her? (Elinor/Henry/William Marshal/Alys/I think that's enough.)
Fiction: Historical - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,299 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-29-05
7. Onry reviews
Henry II goes in search of his missing eldest son in France. Henry/Becket subtext. Woo.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,768 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-17-05