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Hopeless-and-helpless01
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since: 02-17-05, id: 460343, Profile edited: 06-27-08
country: Australia
Author has written 66 stories for Fantasy, General, General, Life, Love, Friendship, and Supernatural.

Hello and welcome all to my humble abode. I am but a small part upon a large scale, and I hope that i can persuade many into my little world.
I am not to be feared, I just like to write... Alot.

I am a seventeen year old girl who has nothing in her life except school, writing, walking, drawing and more school. You have got to love year 12 and all it's charms (Homework). I have been writing stories since I was twleve years old as a matter of fact. It's been a long time. I have been drawing since I could hold a pen.

I am writing more fiction now because poetry is slowly deserting me... Or I am just lazy and can't be bothered putting any more cliche sounding poems on. Most of all the poems sound the same :) (Mine are pretty much all on the same line)

If you decide to review me, I will be more than obliged to review one of yours in kind. I love reading peoples own work. It gives me a kind of buzz to know that people other than famous book writers are keeping there talents. I enjoy that kind of thing.

Another thing I forgot to mention to those who are unaware of who I really am. I am a normal teenage girl, who, in despite of the seriousness of this text, actually does have a funny streak to her. (Apparantly I do anyways grins). I am laid back, genuinly friendly, easy to talk to about Anything.
I am me, I am Dani, who probably, right at this moment, has scared the pants off your closest companion :D
My fave animal is a Wombat (surprise, surprise lol), I love Monty Python. Oh how they make me laugh! I am not a vegetarian, but I love their company. But i do not eat meat every night. Can't do it.
I am afraid of most of everything everyone else is afraid of. Except snakes. I like them.

I like expressing myself alot, but I also sit at the back of the class doodling idly on a piece of paper. I might even one day try a poem with cryptic and you have to figure out the message behind it. Or maybe even a poem in Pig Latin "Ooklay in the agbay" = "Look in the Bag" hehe.

:updates:

The Night We Would Never Forget: A new-ish story that I have only just decided to put on. It has many chapters yet to go and is far off completion. I would like constructive criticism to know where I might improve on my writing. I do not appreciate downright putdowns on this one. Also it is written in a teenagers perspective, not that of a highly orthodoxed adult. This story is completely fictional. All characters and places are made up.
"It is about a girl who witness's her best friends murder, and must try to survive herself."

Ties Of Equality: A story about a man who must come to terms with love and hate to be a part of both worlds. This story is completely fictional. Again, constructive criticism. Not for all tastes. It has many more chapters to come, alot more canoodling from Leah and Ace for those who read it ;p
Again, love reviews for story and will review back asap.

Dismissals: I have dismissed a few poems and a story on here. I can't remember which poems I have been rid of, but the story I have dismissed is Kinalo. It had it's time on here. Anyways, happy days follows happy moments.

Enjoy your stay in my presence of writings (which date back to when I first started on here.. at the age of fourteen)

Many memories, Dani


Why do you drive me insane?
Maybe because I want you to drive me insane,
With your smile and your witty expressions.
You're driving me insane,
With your loving reasons,
Heart felt gestures and cold personality.
So insane, so crazy...
So desperate...

~~Always be yourself because the people who mind don't matter and the people who matter don't mind ~~


If we stand alone,
Who will we have to guide us?

If we stand up on a pedastool
Who will we have to bring us back?

Just a bit of randomness... :D





1. I Think So
What has happened to us? : R&R Please :
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-08
2. The Night We Would Never Forget
A party is happening in town, everyone is invited. What were the consequences of a small town party in the park?
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-27-08 - Published: 6-27-08
3. Dribbled Paint
I hope to paint the walls with only a spur of hatred...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-08
4. I am your doll reviews
What does it feel like to be put upon a shelf, and brought down only to be battered?
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 736 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-08 - Published: 6-25-08
5. Ties Of Equality »
A man named Ace has grown up in a world of hate. Hate and anger give him the ability to see things that aren't there. He must find a balance between both love and hate to see both worlds.
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,676 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-28-08 - Published: 11-29-07
6. As High As I reviews
No matter how high, we seem to fall...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-24-08 - Published: 2-24-08
7. Contradictor
Have you ever had one of these people before? Contradicting everything they say? R&R!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-14-07 - Published: 9-14-07
8. You want what! reviews
Do we really want to be that perfect magazine woman, the same copy as the rest...? Really? raises eyebrows R&R plz
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-07
9. Happy Valentine, My Love reviews
I'll give you a rose this Valentines...I hope you like it.....
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-15-07 - Published: 2-15-07
10. Ignore me reviews
What have I done... you're starting to ignore me.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-13-07 - Published: 2-13-07
11. Smile reviews
A smile can make the world go round, but yours makes my world go round. A smile can be a show of affection. R&R and tell me what you think. My bro was non stop talking to me so i couldn't think of a summary!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-20-06 - Published: 10-20-06
12. It's All Good reviews
Everything will be alright, it is what it is, nothing can change that...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-25-06 - Published: 9-25-06
13. To Trust? reviews
I wrote this really quickly. About being cheated on... should I trust him again or not? (Not really a love thing but it wasn't really life either...) plz R&R :)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-7-06 - Published: 8-7-06
14. Poisoned reviews
hm... he poisoned me with his touch as you poisined me with your problems... R&R please!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-06 - Published: 4-29-06
15. You'll never see me cry reviews
If you want to see me cry... think again... because you'll never see me cry...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
16. Uncontrolled reviews
I wish I could take my actions back... but it was so uncontrolled... R&R please and tell me what you think! Thanks!
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
17. Porcelain Girl reviews
So fake, So very fake... Like the porcelain doll that sits by my bed... oh how i despise you...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
18. I told you almostand you believed me reviews
Basically what the name of the poem is called. Read and review and tell me what you think...
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-15-06 - Published: 4-15-06
19. Forgotten reviews
I'll do things to make you forget who I am... (Short and sweet) R&R! thanks! Dani
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-10-06 - Published: 3-10-06
20. Memories of You reviews
Thinking of only you, the only person on my mind. I was at a friends place when this happened. Plz R&R thanks guys!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-7-06 - Published: 3-7-06
21. Protector reviews
Wrapped up in someones arms, feeling the protection they are giving before you nod off. Please R&R! thank you! Dani
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
22. Will You Be There? reviews
Wil you be there for me? I want to know. So please answer me one question. 4 months ago i worte this poem so don't blame me)
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-13-06 - Published: 2-13-06
23. I am reviews
All about me and who I am. R&R! thanks! :)
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-2-06 - Published: 2-2-06
24. Fighting myself reviews
Fighting myself with what I have done wrong for a second time
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-2-06 - Published: 2-2-06
25. Missing Girl reviews
A girl misisng someone so close to her to almost be her...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-06
26. Held Back reviews
Just a feeling of keeping you back from a life you could enjoy... R&R plz!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-21-05 - Published: 11-21-05
27. Black reviews
Plain name I know. People always judge people by what they wear not by who they are. R&R and tell me what you think...
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
28. Lifes Key reviews
A poem of self discovery. It's a bit of life and nature. (I hate summaries) Hope you enjoy! It's a happy one and my dad wrote it too! :D :)
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-19-05 - Published: 10-19-05
29. The Head Vampires reviews
Some a girl, a boy and a bunch of vampires... read and you can find out...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 734 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-11-05 - Published: 10-11-05
30. Councilors reviews
Just stop prying into my private life! your not helping me!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-11-05 - Published: 10-11-05
31. The Voices reviews
Oh who knows... those bloody voices again! They just won't leave me alone!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-11-05 - Published: 10-11-05
32. Slice reviews
Couldn't think of a name for it so I came up with this name. read it and find out what it's all about...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-5-05 - Published: 10-5-05
33. My Friends reviews
They are there with every happy face to enjoy. Especially when your down in the dumps. Just thanking them for being there when I needed them most... (This one is for you guys! mags! nach! lauren! loz! aaron! jade) hehe!
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-23-05 - Published: 9-23-05
34. Is It Me? reviews
Trust me? Please? You know I wouldn't do it... a jealous lover and a very close male friend... lover not like male friend and than it get's awkward...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-05 - Published: 9-23-05
35. Child's Play reviews
Oh you know the usual... the unexplained cuts and briuses that end up on your body.. it's only a little game, just a bit of Child's Play
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-05 - Published: 9-23-05
36. Driving Lessons reviews
It's a really strange poem that I wrote when listening to people talk about cars and stuff. Got bored and wrote it... enjoy... if you can...
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-23-05 - Published: 9-23-05
37. Pretty Girl reviews
Stop it pretty girl I can see what you are doing...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-15-05 - Published: 9-15-05
38. Don't reviews
Just please don't worry about me...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-15-05 - Published: 9-15-05
39. As Pale as paper reviews
mainly about someone who is hurting themselves. Either way, if they live or die, they are already dead.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-11-05 - Published: 9-11-05
40. Broken Families reviews
A family losing a daughter and feeling like they hadn't done something right...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-10-05 - Published: 9-10-05
41. Stop Dieing reviews
Dieing from the inside before the outside...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-10-05 - Published: 9-10-05
42. Please reviews
Getting beaten up by your lover when he's drunk... Just keep saying please
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-8-05 - Published: 9-8-05
43. You reviews
To love somebody and tell them that in poem format. I actually sent this to my bf. I might as well let people say what they think. hmmmm... read it and tell me what chya think! Cheers, Dani
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-6-05 - Published: 9-6-05
44. See through reviews
Feeling like you'll never get noticed by the one you love. Feeling like a whisp of smoke, just plain see through...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-5-05 - Published: 9-5-05
45. We, the same reviews
Two people, doing the same things but one knowing what the other did not
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-4-05 - Published: 9-4-05
46. Wars reviews
The voices in your head, the battles that you fight everyday when you are depressed...Ok yeah sure they can be annoying but will they drive you to the most drastic thing? who knows...you'll have to fight them off... (rated for one small swear word...shees
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-4-05 - Published: 9-4-05
47. Clean reviews
cleaning up the mess i have made. Getting rid of the wrongs for the rights... read and you'll know what i'm on about...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 9-3-05
48. Right around again reviews
It's about someone wanting to see you happy for their own happiness. And seeing them unhappy just brings you right around again
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-1-05 - Published: 9-1-05
49. Falling Back reviews
Well you just get out of your depressed state only to have something happen again...You end up Falling Back again into the hands of the cold...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-1-05 - Published: 9-1-05
50. Numb reviews
Completely and utterely numb. Not a good feeling. Well the leasst to say is that i don't like it...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-05
51. No Particular Reason reviews
Just holding on for no particular reason...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-05
52. Nothing reviews
Feeling like you are nothing. Just plain nothing (by the way the word nothing gets repeated just so's ya know)
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-05
53. Hollow reviews
It's mainly for a friend to see how i feel about the way she is. And i miss her and i want the real her back. Anyway R&R and let me see what you think. Becusemising a friend who is there standing beside you that is really hollow hurts more than anything..
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-28-05 - Published: 8-28-05
54. You can run reviews
It's about first hand rape... as i said i don't like summaries
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 237 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-20-05 - Published: 8-20-05
55. Mistake reviews
Feeling like a mistake to everyone... does that help? probably not...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-20-05 - Published: 8-20-05
56. Is this love? reviews
I think it's romance... I wouldn't have a clue. It's just questioning my feelings... If you want plz R&R. Ta!dani
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-20-05 - Published: 8-20-05
57. I need to get over him reviews
It's just one that i worte coz I could. Basically it's telling someone I'm not totally over them but I'm going to stick to the choice i have now. plz R&R
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-3-05 - Published: 8-3-05
58. Ever Wonder reviews
It's just basically what it says. "ever wonder why we are here" you cna tell what it is about. Plz R&R thanks Dani
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-1-05 - Published: 8-1-05
59. no name reviews
Someone help me think of a name for this one! Anyway i think it's about someone getting over depression. Oh i don't know. Please R&R. thanks Dani
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-28-05 - Published: 7-28-05
60. Get over me reviews
It's about a bf who breaks up with a gf but wants her back after two months of no word and she's got a new bf. Plz R&R
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-27-05 - Published: 7-27-05
61. What is wrong with me? reviews
Just some stuff... you'll understand when you read it. It tells you down the bottom... plz R&R thanks dani
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-27-05 - Published: 7-27-05
62. I'm Sorry reviews
It's about just someone being sorry to their Ex or something. You can figure it out... R&R pwweeaasssee!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-26-05 - Published: 7-26-05
63. Pain reviews
I didn't know what to call it so i just called it one of the words in the poem. Hope you like! dani
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-24-05 - Published: 7-24-05
64. Black Cadillac reviews
it was just something i had to do for a school thing. She's just gone on holidays (in her dreams) and stuff happens.. plz R&R i want to see what u think!
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,173 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-13-05 - Published: 7-13-05
65. A plead on paper reviews
a girl who pleeds for help whilst describing what's going on. R&R if you like
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-2-05 - Published: 6-2-05
66. Vampire reviews
A girl is having dreams of the bloodsucking lords of the night. I rated it M for future references.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,041 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-2-05 - Published: 6-2-05
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