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| beti213 |
Author has written 95 stories for Love, Friendship, General, General, Romance, Family, Life, and Nature. "There are no tigers -Alice Walker Goals: -20,000 words archived (achieved!) -At least one review on each thing I've written -1,000 reviews on other people's work (ambitious-right now I have about 750) To my reviewers, thank you so much. The way my writing has progressed has been so dependent on the comments I get. I love critiques-bring 'em on! Also, I try to critique anything that I can. You review me, I review you. (If I don't get back to you, feel free to email me and not-so-politely remind me that I'm a lying brat. Then I'll hit myself over the head and review your work) If you know me from outside of the internet and think you or someone you know is in one of the stories, you're probably right. I use real events, people, and experiences to write. I do, however, take considerable license-I combine my ideas with memory and what I write is the combination of all that. I hope you don't take offense if you see a strange part of yourself here. Recommended- A lot of the stuff I put on this site is in a state of limbo until I stop being lazy and rewrite it, but there are a few pieces I'm actually happy with. They are: Pairs, it really means, paint, predatory smile, Reformation, We Pay, Writing, you called, I Would, Dancing, and Stones. Everything else you read at your own risk :) Newest Work: Spark I was writing a lot when I was on vacation but this felt the best- I actually needed to write it. I don't know, though... it still feels a little forced to me. sorry for being lazy-I currently owe reviews to Nobody-n-particular, fontanellemonster, anovelworld, Renss, and KG Jonta. I'll get on it ASAP :) Enjoy! | |||||
1. Nocturne reviewsonly a small thing, instead of letting this ripple of our shouldersPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-14-072. Choose reviewsI will not splash my insides with your faultsPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-24-073. Caught reviewsvoyeur, sadist, lover, lossPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-1-074. Collectors reviewsshould be simplePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-075. Countdown reviewskissing a boy is not a strategic manueverPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-076. Audience reviewsit was hating the absence of applausePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-077. Stainless Steel reviewsI am buildingPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-078. Smalltalk reviews...Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-7-079. Pressure Points reviewsblue and white bloodstream can't breathePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-17-0710. Excuse reviewsone excuse I will never use...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-20-0611. Paint reviewsthis is a revised and lengthened version of a poem I've previously postedPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 9-22-0612. Spark reviewshot springs illogical joyPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-17-0613. Like That reviewsyou may have been something kind of like thatPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-25-0614. Synthesized Betrayals reviewsshe had to tell herself something, didn't she?Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-12-0615. continental divide reviewsI hope this hits you like a tidal wavePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-8-0616. Untitled 8 reviewsnot an explanation, exactlyPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-9-0617. gift reviewssomething for your graduationPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-4-0618. Still » reviewsa growing set of pieces with my mother as subjectPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 686 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 9-2-0519. I Would reviewsI haven't written in a while, and this is certainly different...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-11-0620. if you were you, as me reviewssenior boys in springPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-27-0621. In All Things reviewsno summaryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-26-0622. Doors reviews"all the lunacy of kindness"Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-20-0623. symphony reviewshow to really seePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-2-0624. Reformation reviewsviva la revolution!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-1-0625. you called reviewsno summaryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 3-20-0626. predatory smile reviewsby now, he was hungryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-19-0627. to reel reviews"verb: to be thrown off balance or fall back"Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-4-0628. interfaith reviewskind of sacrilegious... sorryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-1-0629. ripples reviewsopus of my own insomniaPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 2-19-0630. Sound reviews"I let the words "I missed you" breathe and wait for the stars to fall"Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 2-12-0631. About a Girl » reviewslife let her down, but she never noticedPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 2-3-06 - Published: 12-28-0532. Corrections » reviewsshe never wanted anyone to prove her right...Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 5,381 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 1-21-06 - Published: 10-9-0533. We Pay reviewssomething that ticks me off about my friendsPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-16-0634. On Purity reviewsit was never himPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-14-0635. Campaigning for my Candidate reviewsoh revere him! so generous and so distant!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-20-0536. Poetic Anatomy reviews(write a fascinating summary)Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 12-19-0537. Our Own Salvation » reviewsNot mine, not yours...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 409 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 12-16-05 - Published: 10-17-0538. American reviewsI must be going insane.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-12-0539. spoke reviewsthis is another of my new style, although admittedly very short. read and review!Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12-2-0540. Spotless Falls reviewswinsome, spotless... not alivePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11-10-0541. it really means: » reviewsthis is the reason for my insomnia :) enjoyPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 11-2-05 - Published: 10-25-0542. This Scarf reviewsThis was the result of two pretty random magazine clippings-try it some time, it's amusing...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-10-0543. Portrait reviewsOnce you knew him, you couldn't help but want him for your own...Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-6-0544. Untitled 7 reviewsleavingPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-5-0545. Dilution reviewsa falling leaf tumbles weightlessly- my first look in the mirrorPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-29-0546. Words reviewsno summaryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-25-0547. Stones reviewsI carry you... read and review!Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-16-0548. For What It's Worth » reviewsTrying to figure out where it all went...Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 4,477 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 9-7-05 - Published: 3-18-0549. Dancing » reviewsa story through vignettesFiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,139 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 6-24-0550. Sister reviewswatching her, there was a lifetime of distance between quiet shade and bright, untempered sunlight...Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-22-0551. Pairs reviews"if you love the way i dance through words and heartbeats/i apologize"Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 8-14-0552. Theme Park Lights reviewsshort but hopefully thought-provoking-please R&R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 8-5-0553. I Don't reviewsIf I were to list the ways your skin shocks off mine... please R&RPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7-30-0554. Words in Watercolor reviews...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7-26-0555. A Plethora of Paradelles » reviewsexploration of an intriguing form of poetryPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 4 - Words: 621 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-25-05 - Published: 7-24-0556. Daybreak reviewsMemories of Summer... first I've written in a while. R and R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 7-19-0557. Untitled 6 reviewssomething else I remembered and went looking for-short and clearPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-15-0558. Writing reviewsa scribbling I found concerning inspirationPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7-15-0559. Untitled 5 » reviewsAwake, flourescent... cause and effect.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 6-19-0560. Prayer reviewsI didn't wonder then/But now I ask the question:/Could I... Would you?Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 7-10-0561. His Hands reviewsthis was inspired by a poem titled this and I figured I'd give it a spinPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7-7-0562. I’m Thinking reviewsanother draft whoopee! getting tunnel vision, help out, please!Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-3-0563. Rain, Your Words, and the Agony of Being Right reviewssee title... kind of a mess of thoughts and imagesPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-1-0564. Sunless Tanner reviews...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-17-0565. Beneath the Wind reviewstrying to decide between drafts here-very open to critique!Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6-12-0566. Squares and Circles reviewssome revelations after the rain and interacting with an old friend... please R&R-I review back.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-30-0567. Untitled 4 reviewsThese 'untitleds' are having progressively less to do with eachother...Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-27-0568. Untitled 3 reviewsmy (short) reaction to a dance I went toPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-17-0569. Grafitti reviewsI'm seeing something grow/that would flourish better left to its own devices/so I disentangle my mind from you...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-11-0570. Choosing reviewsPlaying mind tricks with myself... a little different for mePoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-29-0571. Untitled 2 reviewsAnother dramatization of an isolated incident... wow... that sounded kinda smart... anyway, it'd be nice if I got some reviews! :) (also, I kinda need another name)Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-27-0572. Memory reviewsthe power of a scent... please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-24-0573. Untitled 1 reviewsA bit of an experimentation in free verse... hopefully more to come, review and I will review yours :)Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-17-0574. Thievery in Progress reviewsReworked! Yay!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-10-0575. Antsy reviewsan incident-no summary :) please R&R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-10-0576. Inside reviewsanother of this new style-please R&R as I'm thinking of publishing itPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-9-0577. The Cross reviewsa bit of a painful change in style for me... please read and review, since I'm planning on editing this until either it dies or I do!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 407 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-8-0578. You and I reviewsmy best friend... something I wrote for english...Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 719 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-4-0579. What It's Worth reviewsan entirely new edit-read if you dare!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-26-05 - Published: 3-17-0580. Spring reviewsnot one of those cutesy poems about spring, seriously!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-23-0581. Heart In Hands reviewsAbout my muse... please Review!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-21-0582. Lifeline reviewsif only he would trust her...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-21-0583. Between the Lines reviewslate-night emotions... please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-20-0584. Tears reviewsthought of an idea and ran with it... not one of my best though. please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-17-0585. Premature Nostalgia reviewsAn interesting topic for me-please R&R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3-13-0586. That Moment reviewssomething I just wrote- please R&R!Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-12-0587. I Believe in Love reviews.Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-7-0588. The Library reviewsa strange metaphor-please R&R!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-7-0589. All That Rises Must Converge: The Next Scene reviewsthe last scene to the storyFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,010 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-4-0590. It Calls reviewsI'm not a huge fan of this one-please critique!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 3-3-0591. What If Someone Told You? reviewsno summaryPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 3-3-0592. Elaborate Dream reviewsA true storyFiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-3-0593. A Strange Compromise reviewsanother about this new guy :) but not head-over-heels, you know? please criticize-I desperately need critiquePoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 3-3-0594. Tale of 30 Seconds reviewssome old memories floating around...Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-2-05
