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Author has written 95 stories for Love, Friendship, General, General, Romance, Family, Life, and Nature. "There are no tigers -Alice Walker Goals: -20,000 words archived (achieved!) -At least one review on each thing I've written -1,000 reviews on other people's work (ambitious-right now I have about 750) To my reviewers, thank you so much. The way my writing has progressed has been so dependent on the comments I get. I love critiques-bring 'em on! Also, I try to critique anything that I can. You review me, I review you. (If I don't get back to you, feel free to email me and not-so-politely remind me that I'm a lying brat. Then I'll hit myself over the head and review your work) If you know me from outside of the internet and think you or someone you know is in one of the stories, you're probably right. I use real events, people, and experiences to write. I do, however, take considerable license-I combine my ideas with memory and what I write is the combination of all that. I hope you don't take offense if you see a strange part of yourself here. Recommended- A lot of the stuff I put on this site is in a state of limbo until I stop being lazy and rewrite it, but there are a few pieces I'm actually happy with. They are: Pairs, it really means:, paint, predatory smile, Reformation, We Pay, Writing, you called, I Would, Dancing, and Stones. Everything else you read at your own risk :) Newest Work: Spark I was writing a lot when I was on vacation but this felt the best- I actually needed to write it. I don't know, though... it still feels a little forced to me. sorry for being lazy-I currently owe reviews to Nobody-n-particular, fontanellemonster, anovelworld, Renss, and KG Jonta. I'll get on it ASAP :) Enjoy! | |||||||
1. Nocturne reviewsonly a small thing, instead of letting this ripple of our shouldersGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-14-07 - Published: 9-14-072. Choose reviewsI will not splash my insides with your faultsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-24-07 - Published: 8-24-073. Caught reviewsvoyeur, sadist, lover, lossLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-074. Collectors reviewsshould be simpleGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-07 - Published: 7-19-075. Countdown reviewskissing a boy is not a strategic manueverGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-07 - Published: 7-19-076. Audience reviewsit was hating the absence of applauseLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-07 - Published: 7-19-077. Stainless Steel reviewsI am buildingGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-19-07 - Published: 7-19-078. Smalltalk reviews...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-7-07 - Published: 3-7-079. Pressure Points reviewsblue and white bloodstream can't breatheGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-17-07 - Published: 1-17-0710. Excuse reviewsone excuse I will never use...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-20-06 - Published: 11-20-0611. Paint reviewsthis is a revised and lengthened version of a poem I've previously postedGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-22-06 - Published: 9-22-0612. Spark reviewshot springs=illogical joyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-17-06 - Published: 8-17-0613. Like That reviewsyou may have been something kind of like thatGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0614. Synthesized Betrayals reviewsshe had to tell herself something, didn't she?General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-12-06 - Published: 7-12-0615. continental divide reviewsI hope this hits you like a tidal waveGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-8-06 - Published: 7-8-0616. Untitled 8 reviewsnot an explanation, exactlyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-9-06 - Published: 6-9-0617. gift reviewssomething for your graduationGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-4-06 - Published: 6-4-0618. Still » reviewsa growing set of pieces with my mother as subjectFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 657 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 9-2-0519. I Would reviewsI haven't written in a while, and this is certainly different...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-11-06 - Published: 5-11-0620. if you were you, as me reviewssenior boys in springGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-27-06 - Published: 4-27-0621. In All Things reviewsno summaryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-26-06 - Published: 4-26-0622. Doors reviews"all the lunacy of kindness"General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-0623. symphony reviewshow to really seeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-0624. Reformation reviewsviva la revolution!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-1-06 - Published: 4-1-0625. you called reviewsno summaryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-0626. predatory smile reviewsby now, he was hungryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 3-19-0627. to reel reviews"verb: to be thrown off balance or fall back"General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-4-06 - Published: 3-4-0628. interfaith reviewskind of sacrilegious... sorryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-1-06 - Published: 3-1-0629. ripples reviewsopus of my own insomniaLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-19-06 - Published: 2-19-0630. Sound reviews"I let the words "I missed you" breathe and wait for the stars to fall"Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-0631. About a Girl » reviewslife let her down, but she never noticedGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 2-3-06 - Published: 12-28-0532. Corrections » reviewsshe never wanted anyone to prove her right...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 5,247 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 1-21-06 - Published: 10-9-0533. We Pay reviewssomething that ticks me off about my friendsLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-16-06 - Published: 1-16-0634. On Purity reviewsit was never himLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-14-06 - Published: 1-14-0635. Campaigning for my Candidate reviewsoh revere him! so generous and so distant!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 12-20-05 - Published: 12-20-0536. Poetic Anatomy reviews(write a fascinating summary)General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 12-19-05 - Published: 12-19-0537. Our Own Salvation » reviewsNot mine, not yours...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 12-16-05 - Published: 10-17-0538. American reviewsI must be going insane.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-12-05 - Published: 12-12-0539. spoke reviewsthis is another of my new style, although admittedly very short. read and review!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 12-2-05 - Published: 12-2-0540. Spotless Falls reviewswinsome, spotless... not aliveGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 11-10-05 - Published: 11-10-0541. it really means: » reviewsthis is the reason for my insomnia :) enjoyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 11-2-05 - Published: 10-25-0542. This Scarf reviewsThis was the result of two pretty random magazine clippings-try it some time, it's amusing...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 10-10-05 - Published: 10-10-0543. Portrait reviewsOnce you knew him, you couldn't help but want him for your own...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-6-05 - Published: 10-6-0544. Untitled 7 reviewsleavingLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 10-5-05 - Published: 10-5-0545. Dilution reviewsa falling leaf tumbles weightlessly- my first look in the mirrorGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-29-05 - Published: 9-29-0546. Words reviewsno summaryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-25-05 - Published: 9-25-0547. Stones reviewsI carry you... read and review!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-16-05 - Published: 9-16-0548. For What It's Worth » reviewsTrying to figure out where it all went...Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 4,398 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 9-7-05 - Published: 3-18-0549. Dancing » reviewsa story through vignettesRomance - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,058 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 9-3-05 - Published: 6-24-0550. Sister reviewswatching her, there was a lifetime of distance between quiet shade and bright, untempered sunlight...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-22-05 - Published: 8-22-0551. Pairs reviews"if you love the way i dance through words and heartbeats/i apologize"Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 8-14-05 - Published: 8-14-0552. Theme Park Lights reviewsshort but hopefully thought-provoking-please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 8-5-05 - Published: 8-5-0553. I Don't reviewsIf I were to list the ways your skin shocks off mine... please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-30-05 - Published: 7-30-0554. Words in Watercolor reviews...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-26-05 - Published: 7-26-0555. A Plethora of Paradelles » reviewsexploration of an intriguing form of poetryLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 4 - Words: 591 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-25-05 - Published: 7-24-0556. Daybreak reviewsMemories of Summer... first I've written in a while. R and R!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 289 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-19-05 - Published: 7-19-0557. Untitled 6 reviewssomething else I remembered and went looking for-short and clearLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-0558. Writing reviewsa scribbling I found concerning inspirationGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 7-15-0559. Untitled 5 » reviewsAwake, flourescent... cause and effect.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-15-05 - Published: 6-19-0560. Prayer reviewsI didn't wonder then/But now I ask the question:/Could I... Would you?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-10-05 - Published: 7-10-0561. His Hands reviewsthis was inspired by a poem titled this and I figured I'd give it a spinLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-7-05 - Published: 7-7-0562. I’m Thinking reviewsanother draft whoopee! getting tunnel vision, help out, please!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0563. Rain, Your Words, and the Agony of Being Right reviewssee title... kind of a mess of thoughts and imagesLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-1-05 - Published: 7-1-0564. Sunless Tanner reviews...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-17-05 - Published: 6-17-0565. Beneath the Wind reviewstrying to decide between drafts here-very open to critique!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-12-05 - Published: 6-12-0566. Squares and Circles reviewssome revelations after the rain and interacting with an old friend... please R&R-I review back.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0567. Untitled 4 reviewsThese 'untitleds' are having progressively less to do with eachother...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-27-05 - Published: 5-27-0568. Untitled 3 reviewsmy (short) reaction to a dance I went toLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-17-05 - Published: 5-17-0569. Grafitti reviewsI'm seeing something grow/that would flourish better left to its own devices/so I disentangle my mind from you...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5-11-05 - Published: 5-11-0570. Choosing reviewsPlaying mind tricks with myself... a little different for meGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-05 - Published: 4-29-0571. Untitled 2 reviewsAnother dramatization of an isolated incident... wow... that sounded kinda smart... anyway, it'd be nice if I got some reviews! :) (also, I kinda need another name)Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-27-05 - Published: 4-27-0572. Memory reviewsthe power of a scent... please R&R!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-24-05 - Published: 4-24-0573. Untitled 1 reviewsA bit of an experimentation in free verse... hopefully more to come, review and I will review yours :)Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-17-05 - Published: 4-17-0574. Thievery in Progress reviewsReworked! Yay!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-10-05 - Published: 4-10-0575. Antsy reviewsan incident-no summary :) please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-10-05 - Published: 4-10-0576. Inside reviewsanother of this new style-please R&R as I'm thinking of publishing itFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-9-05 - Published: 4-9-0577. The Cross reviewsa bit of a painful change in style for me... please read and review, since I'm planning on editing this until either it dies or I do!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-8-05 - Published: 4-8-0578. You and I reviewsmy best friend... something I wrote for english...General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 701 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-4-05 - Published: 4-4-0579. What It's Worth reviewsan entirely new edit-read if you dare!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-26-05 - Published: 3-17-0580. Spring reviewsnot one of those cutesy poems about spring, seriously!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-23-05 - Published: 3-23-0581. Heart In Hands reviewsAbout my muse... please Review!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-21-05 - Published: 3-21-0582. Lifeline reviewsif only he would trust her...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-21-05 - Published: 3-21-0583. Between the Lines reviewslate-night emotions... please R&R!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-20-05 - Published: 3-20-0584. Tears reviewsthought of an idea and ran with it... not one of my best though. please R&R!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-17-05 - Published: 3-17-0585. Premature Nostalgia reviewsAn interesting topic for me-please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-13-05 - Published: 3-13-0586. That Moment reviewssomething I just wrote- please R&R!Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-12-05 - Published: 3-12-0587. I Believe in Love reviews.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-7-05 - Published: 3-7-0588. The Library reviewsa strange metaphor-please R&R!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 3-7-05 - Published: 3-7-0589. All That Rises Must Converge: The Next Scene reviewsthe last scene to the storyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,007 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-4-05 - Published: 3-4-0590. It Calls reviewsI'm not a huge fan of this one-please critique!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0591. What If Someone Told You? reviewsno summaryGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0592. Elaborate Dream reviewsA true storyGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0593. A Strange Compromise reviewsanother about this new guy :) but not head-over-heels, you know? please criticize-I desperately need critiqueLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 3-3-05 - Published: 3-3-0594. Tale of 30 Seconds reviewssome old memories floating around...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-2-05 - Published: 3-2-05
