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Author has written 7 stories for Life, and Love. Unpleasant as Always. I'm walking in circles, it seems. But we'll see what I can't do to fix that. I've made this for poetry purposes, because I have a lot of it and very little good criticism. We'll see how this site works out. Be. Critical. Ican take it. Tear my work up, just have reason to and state your reasons. There's no way to get better if you're not told what's wrong. My reviews: I'm harsh. Deal with it. It doesn't mean that I think I'm the best, it just means that you're not. Look for Three Round Burst. You'll be blown away. Yeah. That's right. Blown. Away. --I am in love with my koi. This is a fact that everyone must deal with, because it will not change.-- Oorah! o.o | |||||||||
1. Tea for the Unbalanced reviewsMy fingers are calloused again...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-26-05 - Published: 3-26-052. Fading Colors of Memory reviewsThe watercolor's running..Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-20-05 - Published: 3-20-053. Skinned reviewsWobbling in slivers of bleeding dignity on, burning asphalt.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-20-05 - Published: 3-20-054. Cinnamon Ecstacy reviewsYou've lost me in your sweet, synthetic rhapsodies, darling...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-18-05 - Published: 3-18-055. Flurries reviewsA wintery poem, about a bride and a groom getting into a car accident on their wedding day.. Inspired by the biting winter weather.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-05 - Published: 3-17-056. Circling on Glass reviewsPoem I wrote awhile ago, based on a conversation I had with a girl who used to be my friend. Be critical. I can handle it.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-057. Liquid Melancholy 112404 reviewsA poem written a while back. Please critique. Be critical. I can take it. Just don't be stupid, serious commentation only, please.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-16-05 - Published: 3-16-05
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