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Author has written 41 stories for Love, Life, Humor, Essay, Family, Nature, General, General, Thriller, Friendship, and Song. Please REVIEW! It makes me happy ^.^ I disappeared from FP for a while, I know, but I AM back! It's been a tough year for me, lots of new things going on, plenty to write about, that is for sure. IF ANY OF YOU WOULD LIKE TO HELP ME....READ BELOW As you all may know, over the past few months I have begun to write a little more ofstory/essay/monologue type works, and have quit focusing on /only/ poetry. I have recently started working on a story of mine, which I have titled "More than a Kill." However, as you may or may not have noticed, I have not made an update on it in quite a while. It is not writers block, as some might believe. In fact, I actually have written chapter seven. I have not yet submitted it though, because I am not sure that it is the turn I want my story to take. I have thus-far only recieved reviews from friends of mine, in which case the reviews could very easily be bias, not to mention, many of them are just words of encouragement, and really are not reviews at all. Reviews, at this point and time though, are what I really want and need most. I need criticism, ideas, pointers, etc. While I do appreciate words of encouragement, I would really like help and opinions involving where I should let this story lead. Reviews would be VERY much appreciated. I thank you all. Love and /lots/ of Snoopy dances. ~Me Below is a poem written by my favourite, Ogden Nash, entitled "The Turtle" The turtle lives 'twixt plated decks Love and Snoopy dances to all "IF YOU WANT OTHERS TO BE HAPPY, PRACTICE COMPASSION; IF YOU WANT TO BE HAPPY, PRACICE COMPASSION." "BE WHO YOU ARE AND SAY WHAT YOU FEEL, BECAUSE THOSE WHO MIND DON'T MATTER, AND THOSE WHO MATTER DON'T MIND." -THEODOR SEUSS GEISEL (DR. SEUSS) Lastly, please respect me and everyone else on this website. To many, their poetry is their hearts, often their lives, and their thoughts. Everyone deserves to be treated with respect. As a transgendered FtM from a broken family (aren't they all nowadays...) I know what it's like to be hated, and I have seen much disrespect. Love is love. Love is poetry. Poetry is me. Or part of me. So again, thanks, and always remember to be kind. Snoopy dances galore, -S.F.A. III | |||||||||
1. Fear of Acceptance reviewsIt's supposed to be a good thing to be yourself, but sometimes it's hard when you know most of society will shun you away.deals with transgender issues. don't like, don't read.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 932 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-23-06 - Published: 5-23-062. The Way Things Were reviewsjust as it sounds. The Way things /were/. R&R if you please, it is appreciated.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 316 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-23-06 - Published: 5-23-063. Her reviewsIt was late and I was thinking about her, so I wrote her a song.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-064. Hmm reviewsyou know...I really don't know.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-065. Happy Fucking Birthday reviewsI meant what I said and I said what I meant, an elephant's faithful one-hundred percent! -Dr. Seuss. TRUTH.Family - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 12-5-056. Forever reviewsWhat? Read it or don't...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-26-05 - Published: 11-26-057. Hey There, You! reviewsIf this isn't for you, feel free to ignore...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-2-05 - Published: 8-2-058. Deceit reviewswhat? Me? Nah.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-1-05 - Published: 8-1-059. Thrill reviewsr&r if you wantLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-1-05 - Published: 8-1-0510. United reviewsWe are united...right?Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-31-05 - Published: 7-31-0511. Tell Me reviewsumm. Ha. R&R, will returnLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-31-05 - Published: 7-31-0512. More than a Kill » reviewsA lady-killer's attempt to make it in the die-hard, male dominated hit-man industry. (ch. 7 up soon)Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,613 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 7-9-05 - Published: 6-25-0513. I'm Sorry reviewsfuck a summaryLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-8-05 - Published: 7-8-0514. Sex and Cigarettes reviewsi don't know...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 7-7-05 - Published: 7-7-0515. Transfixed reviewspoem. Shocker, eh? Word to your mother, yo! please R&RGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-6-05 - Published: 7-6-0516. Soda reviewsyou sniffed in my root beer!Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 848 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 7-3-0517. Thoughts that No One Should Get Caught Thinking » reviewsThis is a bit of writing I did that really can't be fit into a category - Thus why I placed it in 'General'. It is not really fictional, since it is my thoughts, but anyway, enjoy. please R&R it will be appreciated and returned (this could have been placeGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,496 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 5-19-0518. VOID » reviewsRandomness bits of 'myself' that you may or may not want to read. R&R if you wishGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 895 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-1-05 - Published: 6-24-0519. What a Deal! reviewsr&rHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6-23-05 - Published: 6-23-0520. Dumb Mistake reviewsFor Jaimie. Mistakes can't be erased. But they can be looked upon as lessons, and help to awaken one to their fortune, to their sometimes very lucky and merciful fate.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-22-05 - Published: 6-22-0521. I'm Not Fooled reviewsa little bit of something I think everyone has experienced in one form or another. please r&rGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-19-05 - Published: 6-19-0522. Who's Laughing Now? reviewsWeird reason for writing it and all. It was written on no sleep, between 630 and 730 in the morning, Weird, but interesting I guess. A bit obsessive, seemingly. please r&rGeneral - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,920 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-8-05 - Published: 6-8-0523. Why Care? reviewsIt's memorial day, so I thought it appropriate. Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0524. She reviewsOkay... so it sucks. But it's an expression, and it's me. R&R if you wish. Love and Snoopy dances to all.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0525. Stupid reviewsSometimes I wish I could better control my thoughts, decisions, and especially, feelings. Please R&R, it is appreciatedLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-30-05 - Published: 5-30-0526. The Game of Life reviewsreads rough, but I like it. r&rLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-18-05 - Published: 5-18-0527. Just Give Me a Little More Time reviewsThe way I feel; I've never understood everyone's rush with it. Please R&R, if you wish.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 389 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-17-05 - Published: 5-17-0528. Please Don't Forget reviewsA bit fragmented and such, but from the heart R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 296 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-8-05 - Published: 5-8-0529. I Didn't Win reviewsA struggle for importance in the eyes of someone specialLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-3-05 - Published: 5-3-0530. Clouds reviewsI love clouds...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-26-05 - Published: 4-26-0531. Sensing a Problem reviewsplease R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-25-05 - Published: 4-25-0532. In All Seriousness reviewsJust something I found myself thinking while testing at school. This is what came of it. R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-0533. Looking for a Caregiver reviewsMy twin sister wrote this for me, she's leaving out of state soon -tear- so I thought I'd put it up. R&RFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-23-05 - Published: 4-23-0534. My Twin, My Twinkie reviewsShe is my twin sister, she is my Twinkie. R&REssay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 719 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0535. Please Don't Go reviewsIt's self-explanitory. Please don't go! R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-16-05 - Published: 4-16-0536. Nothing Left reviewsJust like it says... Nothing left... Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 4-15-05 - Published: 4-15-0537. Artificial reviewsme. Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-15-05 - Published: 4-15-0538. Sexy Sam reviewsa dorky -get away from the depressing thoughts for a while- poem. Please R&RHumor - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-14-05 - Published: 4-14-0539. It Didn't Work reviewsplease R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-13-05 - Published: 4-13-0540. Just Another reviewseh. all too many feelings. Please R&RLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-13-05 - Published: 4-13-05
