| ChiquitoPanda |
Author has written 41 stories for Love, Life, Humor, Essay, Family, Nature, General, General, Thriller, Friendship, and Song. Please REVIEW! It makes me happy ^.^ I disappeared from FP for a while, I know, but I AM back! It's been a tough year for me, lots of new things going on, plenty to write about, that is for sure. IF ANY OF YOU WOULD LIKE TO HELP ME...READ BELOW As you all may know, over the past few months I have begun to write a little more ofstory/essay/monologue type works, and have quit focusing on /only/ poetry. I have recently started working on a story of mine, which I have titled "More than a Kill." However, as you may or may not have noticed, I have not made an update on it in quite a while. It is not writers block, as some might believe. In fact, I actually have written chapter seven. I have not yet submitted it though, because I am not sure that it is the turn I want my story to take. I have thus-far only recieved reviews from friends of mine, in which case the reviews could very easily be bias, not to mention, many of them are just words of encouragement, and really are not reviews at all. Reviews, at this point and time though, are what I really want and need most. I need criticism, ideas, pointers, etc. While I do appreciate words of encouragement, I would really like help and opinions involving where I should let this story lead. Reviews would be VERY much appreciated. I thank you all. Love and /lots/ of Snoopy dances. ~Me Below is a poem written by my favourite, Ogden Nash, entitled "The Turtle" The turtle lives 'twixt plated decks Love and Snoopy dances to all "IF YOU WANT OTHERS TO BE HAPPY, PRACTICE COMPASSION; IF YOU WANT TO BE HAPPY, PRACICE COMPASSION." "BE WHO YOU ARE AND SAY WHAT YOU FEEL, BECAUSE THOSE WHO MIND DON'T MATTER, AND THOSE WHO MATTER DON'T MIND." -THEODOR SEUSS GEISEL (DR. SEUSS) Lastly, please respect me and everyone else on this website. To many, their poetry is their hearts, often their lives, and their thoughts. Everyone deserves to be treated with respect. As a transgendered FtM from a broken family (aren't they all nowadays...) I know what it's like to be hated, and I have seen much disrespect. Love is love. Love is poetry. Poetry is me. Or part of me. So again, thanks, and always remember to be kind. Snoopy dances galore, -S.F.A. III | |||||||
1. Fear of Acceptance reviewsIt's supposed to be a good thing to be yourself, but sometimes it's hard when you know most of society will shun you als with transgender issues. don't like, don't read.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 878 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-23-062. The Way Things Were reviewsjust as it sounds. The Way things /were/. R&R if you please, it is appreciated.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-23-063. Her reviewsIt was late and I was thinking about her, so I wrote her a song.Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-1-064. Hmm reviewsyou know...I really don't know.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-1-065. Happy Fucking Birthday reviewsI meant what I said and I said what I meant, an elephant's faithful one-hundred percent! -Dr. Seuss. TRUTH.Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-5-056. Forever reviewsWhat? Read it or don't...Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 416 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-26-057. Hey There, You! reviewsIf this isn't for you, feel free to ignore...Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-2-058. Deceit reviewswhat? Me? Nah.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-1-059. Thrill reviewsr&r if you wantPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-1-0510. United reviewsWe are united...right?Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-31-0511. Tell Me reviewsumm. Ha. R&R, will returnPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-31-0512. More than a Kill » reviewsA lady-killer's attempt to make it in the die-hard, male dominated hit-man industry. (ch. 7 up soon)Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,798 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 7-9-05 - Published: 6-25-0513. I'm Sorry reviewsfuck a summaryPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-8-0514. Sex and Cigarettes reviewsi don't know...Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7-7-0515. Transfixed reviewspoem. Shocker, eh? Word to your mother, yo! please R&RPoetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-6-0516. Soda reviewsyou sniffed in my root beer!Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 845 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-3-0517. Thoughts that No One Should Get Caught Thinking » reviewsThis is a bit of writing I did that really can't be fit into a category - Thus why I placed it in 'General'. It is not really fictional, since it is my thoughts, but anyway, enjoy. please R&R it will be appreciated and returned (this could have been placeFiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,655 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-05 - Published: 5-19-0518. VOID » reviewsRandomness bits of 'myself' that you may or may not want to read. R&R if you wishFiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 909 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-1-05 - Published: 6-24-0519. What a Deal! reviewsr&rPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-23-0520. Dumb Mistake reviewsFor Jaimie. Mistakes can't be erased. But they can be looked upon as lessons, and help to awaken one to their fortune, to their sometimes very lucky and merciful fate.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-22-0521. I'm Not Fooled reviewsa little bit of something I think everyone has experienced in one form or another. please r&rPoetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6-19-0522. Who's Laughing Now? reviewsWeird reason for writing it and all. It was written on no sleep, between 630 and 730 in the morning, Weird, but interesting I guess. A bit obsessive, seemingly. please r&rFiction: General - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,929 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-8-0523. Why Care? reviewsIt's memorial day, so I thought it appropriate. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-30-0524. She reviewsOkay... so it sucks. But it's an expression, and it's me. R&R if you wish. Love and Snoopy dances to all.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 5-30-0525. Stupid reviewsSometimes I wish I could better control my thoughts, decisions, and especially, feelings. Please R&R, it is appreciatedPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-30-0526. The Game of Life reviewsreads rough, but I like it. r&rPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-18-0527. Just Give Me a Little More Time reviewsThe way I feel; I've never understood everyone's rush with it. Please R&R, if you wish.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 403 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-17-0528. Please Don't Forget reviewsA bit fragmented and such, but from the heart R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-8-0529. I Didn't Win reviewsA struggle for importance in the eyes of someone specialPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-3-0530. Clouds reviewsI love clouds...Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-26-0531. Sensing a Problem reviewsplease R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-25-0532. In All Seriousness reviewsJust something I found myself thinking while testing at school. This is what came of it. R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-23-0533. Looking for a Caregiver reviewsMy twin sister wrote this for me, she's leaving out of state soon -tear- so I thought I'd put it up. R&RPoetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-23-0534. My Twin, My Twinkie reviewsShe is my twin sister, she is my Twinkie. R&RFiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-16-0535. Please Don't Go reviewsIt's self-explanitory. Please don't go! R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-16-0536. Nothing Left reviewsJust like it says... Nothing left... Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-15-0537. Artificial reviewsme. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-15-0538. Sexy Sam reviewsa dorky -get away from the depressing thoughts for a while- poem. Please R&RPoetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-14-0539. It Didn't Work reviewsplease R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-13-0540. Just Another reviewseh. all too many feelings. Please R&RPoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-13-05