Hi. Right now I'm working on two stories. My first is Love's Shelter, but it's not very good. Rate that so I can get some assistance, and give me some tips on how to indent or whatever. I'm also trying to make a book for younger children called The Elephant That Forgot. if you have suggestions as to the plot, go ahead and tell me, I need all the help I can get, 'cos I'm completely blanked out. I'll give props. Thanks!

Polka-Dotted Bee(Aka: NonVacantSoul who now flies on Dying Wings(And remember, No Smoking, Babe.))