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Author has written 95 stories for Love, Life, Fantasy, General, Nature, Friendship, Family, and Romance. Well, about me... Yes, I realize that my poems are depressing. Please don't call me emo or put me down because of it. I mostly write for myself, but figure that they could be "entertaining" for some people. My poems are written off of my emotions, my strong emotions. That is why most of my poems are either about love or are depressing. It is a healthy way of dealing with my emotions, though (as you will notice in some of my poems) it is not always the only way I deal... Please provide me with feedback on my work. I would like to know what you thought of it, and how I could possibly change to make my work better. I hope to one day publish a book of poetry, so your help would be much appreciated. ~Lone Flame~ Another thing, please do not call me crazy or say that I need to see a psychiatrist. I am currently in therapy, I write the emotions that are strongest at the time of my writing. Please do not threaten to report me to authorities for my poems about self-mutilation. I am already getting help for it and that's all the authorities do anyway. Thank you. | |||||||||
1. A Heart So Marred reviewsI will always love the tender hands that mended me...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-20-06 - Published: 9-20-062. StonesMetaphorical look at the pressures of my lifeLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-20-06 - Published: 9-20-063. Dear Mom reviewsMy letter to my mother...Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-2-06 - Published: 8-2-064. Fateful NightNot really romance, but it has some of that element to it... Short StoryRomance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 627 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-17-06 - Published: 7-17-065. Kiss Me Goodbye reviewsNot sure what sparked this one... but I like it!Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-17-06 - Published: 7-17-066. In Dreams reviewsAbout dreams... and what I do in them...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-17-06 - Published: 7-17-067. Sweet Explosion reviewsHow I really feel...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-5-06 - Published: 6-5-068. Split Second reviewsThis is me... I wrote it with the help of a friend, and suddenly discovered who I was...Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-23-06 - Published: 4-23-069. The Girl of the SunStrange attempt at descriptive poetry... I think I should stick to my traditional style.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-6-06 - Published: 4-6-0610. No Longer reviewsI have really changed since 6th grade...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-6-06 - Published: 4-6-0611. Friendship to Love reviews...No I won't tell you who it is...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-9-06 - Published: 3-9-0612. Simple ThingsI just want a few basic, simple things... Is that too much to ask?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0613. Hidden reviews(old) I wrote it for someone a while ago... But now these feelings are applicable again, to someone else...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0614. Walking reviewsWill I be walking forever?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0615. Sun Light, Rising reviewsHere it comes...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0616. Sad and Lonely reviews(old) It was two different formula poems for my 7th grade English class... I liked them much better when combined! I hope you agree!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0617. My Life...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0618. Many Ways(old) By far one of my favorite poems... I didn't change ANYTHING when I was re-typing it...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0619. End reviews"Roses are red" with a twist...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0620. Different Faces...It's definetly trueLife - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0621. AwayOh how I wish...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0622. Goodbye reviewsI've had a few... bad ...relationships in the past. They make for good poetry.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0623. Scarlet Tears reviewsThis poem contains about 2 punctuations marks total, it can be read many different ways, and it should be.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0624. Spring reviewsMy feelings on this wonderful holiday!Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-4-06 - Published: 2-4-0625. Little Blade of Silver reviewsObvious from the title, this poem contains images that are inappropriate to immature audiences. You have been warned, so I am not liable for any offense that may be taken by this poem.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-0626. Forced Goodbye reviewsA short lived second go at love...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0627. What? reviewsThe uncertainty of everday life...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0628. Voices From Within reviewsStupid negativities...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0629. Uniquely Me! reviews(old) I altered one of my older poems slightly, to be more applicable to me now!Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0630. Survive Life reviews...just read it...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0631. Running reviewsWhy is everyone in such a rush these days...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0632. Wake Up To Pain reviewsHow I feel everyday...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0633. Oops reviewsBe careful what you tell to others...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0634. How It Feels reviewsWhat happens here, goes to paper...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0635. Flightless Bird reviews(old) It may be old, but it's still applicable to my feelings...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0636. Collapsed reviewsThe day my world collapsed...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0637. The Sun reviews(old) Needless to say, I've come a long way in my writing...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0638. The Rainbow reviews(old) One of my first poems...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0639. Mountain of Solitude reviewsAn English assignment, about our favorite place.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0640. You reviews(old) A poem I wrote when I was in a relationship that I thought was great, turned out I was wrong later, but w/e.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0641. Unattainable Love reviews(old) How I felt about someone, that is now my ex... :(Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0642. Red reviewsThere is only one true color left in this world...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0643. Heart Failure reviews(old-ish) What happens when you break a promise to yourself...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0644. However reviews(old) A relationship that I was very torn up about... Slightly relates to a newer one too...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0645. More Than You Could Know reviewsThis is a poem I wrote for my ex, someone I wish I could still have...Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0646. I Wish reviews(old) I write when I have no other options...Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0647. Can It Be? reviewsWhat is love, honestly?Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-0648. Just the Girl reviewsIt's mystery because no one knows who this poem is about... 'cept meLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-0649. My Heart reviewsWhat is my heart exactly?Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-06 - Published: 1-19-0650. Words Within reviewsShort lines. A small glimpse of what was inside at the moment.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-05 - Published: 12-8-0551. Pain Filled Void reviewsFor my best friend, who got uprooted and didn't get to say goodbye, none of us did.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-05 - Published: 12-8-0552. Toxin for the Heart reviewsAnother outlook on love.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-05 - Published: 12-8-0553. For You reviewsA poem I wrote for my best friend, who is having a hard time now, to let him know how much he means to meFriendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-05 - Published: 12-8-0554. Silver reviewsSweet escape from the pain... (from beginning of 9th grade) (M for a mature topic)Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0555. Change reviewsComing out of my shell...General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0556. Pain Forever reviewsHow this pain will stay with me forever... and not go away...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0557. Torture reviewsSo much... stuff...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0558. Crash reviewsIt's not the kind of crash you would think...Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0559. The Lonely One reviewsI originally wrote this poem awhile ago, but I revised it a little and now I want to share it with you!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0560. Secrets reviews...the feelings of secretsLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-12-05 - Published: 8-12-0561. Cries reviewsThe empty hollow left behind.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-26-05 - Published: 7-26-0562. Fallen reviewsIt's hard to summarize this poem... Just read it and see for yourself what it's like.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-0563. Long Journey reviewsThis is more or a narrative poem so I decided to put it as a story because it's LONG!Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 375 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-16-05 - Published: 7-16-0564. Trapped reviewsThis took me MONTHS to write, normally I just sit down and write a poem, but this one... Well you'll see. (Only rated T because I do not think that younger audiences will completely "get" the poem, but it is suitable.)Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-05 - Published: 7-11-0565. Steak Knife reviewsNo, not about steak.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0566. Heartshattered reviewsBreakups hurt.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0567. Won't Give Up reviewsNo matter how hard I try, I'll never be good enough.Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0568. Why This Girl? reviewsWhen the person I loved told me I was wonderful, I didn't understand why.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0569. What Are Friends For? reviewsThe good things about our friends, the ones that are true friends anyway.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0570. True Love reviewsQuestions for someone I loved, wanting to know if their love was true.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0571. Torturous Love reviewsThe drama that accompanied my love.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0572. To You From Me reviewsA poem I wrote to the boy I love... even though he just broke my heart 6/30/05Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0573. Suffocating reviewsThe oppresion in the world today, from my p.o.v.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0574. Spirit reviewsWhat someone once did to mine.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0575. Sorry reviewsA message to anyone that needs it.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0576. Secretly In Love reviewsWhat hiding love can do to you inside.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0577. Rainbow Emotions reviewsDifferent emotions=Different colorsLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0578. Plains Within reviewsWhat it's like for me... metaphorically of course.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0579. Optimist or Pessimist reviewsHow I feel about each one.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0580. No Words reviewsHow sometimes, certain words just aren't good enough.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0581. My Great Escape reviewsYes, a poem about poems.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0582. My Abuse reviewsWhat goes on that no one really understands.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0583. Looking reviewsThe world from my window.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0584. Little Girl reviewsWell... You'll see...General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0585. Life reviewsAnother metaphorical account of life.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0586. Leave Now reviewsAgain, about that certain person that I can't stand in my life.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0587. Inner Explosion reviewsMore of my mixed emotions about a certain person.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0588. I Cry reviewsThe feelings and memories that I must deal with on a daily basis, and how they can get overwhelming.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0589. Hurting reviewsThe feelings that accompany love, that is being kept a secret from the world.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0590. Grey Sky reviewsMy feelings about the rain.Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0591. Get Out reviewsHow I feel about someone in my life.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0592. For Love and Dreams reviewsAbout my dreams and a, now ex, boyfriend.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0593. Fairy Tale Life reviewsWhat I think life would be like if it was just like a fairy tale.Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0594. Drowning reviewsMetaphorical outlook on life.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 335 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-0595. Cool Breeze Talks reviewsWhile I was sitting in my tree, waiting. And a summary of our front yard chats.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-05 - Published: 7-2-05
