Because I could not stop for death-
He kindly stopped for me.
And the carrige held but just ourselfes-
And Immortality.

We slowly drove-He knew no haste
And I had put away
My labor and my leisure too,
For him Civility-

We passes the School, where Children strove
At recess-in the Ring-
We passed the Fields og Gazing Grain-
We passed the Setting Sun-

Or rather-He passed Us-
The Dews drew quivering and chill-
For only Gossamer, my Gown-
My Tippet- only Tulle-

We paused before a House that seemed
A Swelling of the Ground-
The Roof was scarcely visable-
The Cornice- in the Ground-

Since then- 'tis Centuries- and yet
Feels shorter than the Day
I first surmised the Horses' Heads-
We toward Eternity-

"712" by Emily Dickinson

Please, please review my poems as seeing that poetry really is a big part of me. I want to know what to work on and stuff.

I write poems based on what I feel, and what others feel. For example, I'll be watching a movie, and this girl could be dying. Well, I'll write a poem about it. Sometimes, things just pop into my head. So basicly, what I write isnt ALWAYS what I feel.

I have one story out called, "Senior Year". It's about a girl who has an older twin brother and a best friend who she is convinced, should get together. It had drama, humor and Romance.

Please review!!!

P.S.S.- I want to thank ALL my reviewers! You guys are what keeps me writting! When you read my work, please review!

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Book: One Last Wish series, by Lurlene McDaniel

Music Artist: Queen

Person: Me!