FictionPress.com - let the words flow| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Around.about |
Author has written 65 stories for Family, Love, Life, War, Nature, General, Religion, Friendship, Politics, and General. 09 November 2009 WHAT?! A PIECE OF FICTION? Comments on grammar and style will be greatly appreciated. A bit about myself is in order, I do suppose. I'm of the male persuasion, and live in the great state of Texas. I write off and on, mainly for shits and giggles. I mainly write sub-par poetry, most of which makes me cringe upon rereading. No that you can tell, but I do write fiction. It often dies a few chapters in, and I don't bother posting. I have less than great grammar. In fact i'm sure this little monologue of mine is riddled with errors. I'm normally pretty good with punctuation though. I have no idea what the difference between "then" and "than" is, I tend to use which ever one strikes my fancy at the moment. I often use the word "where" when it should be "were," but never when it should be "we're." I believe that everyone should get a second chance, I'm just not the one whose going to give it to you. I try to return reviews, I often don't. Sorry 'bout that. If you'd like me to read a particular piece, or just think i'm a fascinating fellow feel free to PM me. | |||||||||||
1. The Aesthetic Hybridizing The Penetrated reviewsIt's my very own little piece of fiction, a little tale told from multiple perspectives. Maybe connected, maybe not, we'll just have to see where things take us. Rated M for language, violence, and god knows what else. All reviews welcome.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 890 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-09 - Published: 11-9-092. Go figureA possible/eventual collection of stuff that is, was, or never will be.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-18-09 - Published: 10-18-093. America reviewsI hope you weren't expecting an apology.Politics - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 441 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-16-09 - Published: 5-16-094. Vertebra reviewsAnd so and so and so? Perhaps one day i'll get off of this topicComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-09 - Published: 5-15-095. Desinscetisation reviewsAnd it rode down the Dallas street stewing in its own corruption.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-09 - Published: 5-15-096. Eulogia reviewsWhatever the hell that's supposed to mean.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-09 - Published: 5-15-097. Dog Seeks Omniscient DeityIn honor of a thinly bound play that arrived today.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-09 - Published: 5-15-098. pseduophilisophic rambaling & a halfhearted truthAnd what does it all mean? Damned if I know.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-11-09 - Published: 5-11-099. in the end it will all amount to nothingWith pedanticism and hypocrisies there lies a shallow hope.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-11-09 - Published: 5-11-0910. reflections in a dark room and uncomfortable chair reviewsPaper thin nudes and bizarre interpretations wander the halls of fine art.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-11-09 - Published: 5-11-0911. And to Think it Almost Made Some SenseThe past is a foreign country; they do things differently there -L.P. HartleyComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 537 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-31-09 - Published: 1-31-0912. at two in the morningSo I won't forget.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-0813. A Sloppy CollectionSeven pieces thrown together.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-0814. A Short HistoryBrevity is the soul of wit, right?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-0815. Alternate RealitiesSometimes you just need to wonder.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-0816. That world civ book is messin' with my headIt's all been done, before.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-13-08 - Published: 1-13-0817. I Never was One to Forgive reviewsJuvenile, and lacking. Not even a close to my best. But what can I say, it helps.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-07 - Published: 12-8-0718. A temperamental oblivion, a bashful philharmonic reviewsWhat's to say?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-1-07 - Published: 12-1-0719. Texas Summers and Midnight Dreams reviewsThe world is really all in loveComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-18-07 - Published: 6-18-0720. Like something of a dream reviewsMaybe the heat left me without a thing to possibly say, but then again who knows?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-18-07 - Published: 6-18-0721. Flames Licked the Page in a Passionate Censorship reviews...I lack wordsComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-11-07 - Published: 5-11-0722. An Ode to Murder Mysteries, and Tepid Techno reviewsDedicated to James Ellroy Author, voyeur, and survivor of youth. You deserve much more than I could ever give you.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-11-07 - Published: 5-11-0723. Words of words of words reviewsCan't get more pointless can we?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0724. For all intensive purposes this shall remain reviewsBehold the void!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0725. The door shook like my knees on our wedding eve reviewsAnd so and so.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0726. And so the obsession begins? reviewsI loved you like the maggots love your corpse.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0727. Self portrait done on MS Word in Times New Roman reviewsLeaves fall from the trees stricken with leprosy.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0728. Writing instead of taking 7th period notes reviewsWhat happens when you write poetry during your latest history course.Complete - War - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0729. My socks are warm like a corpse reviewsI've never posted something with a more pointless title.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0730. Will we remember past the bitterness? reviewsFor once fictionpress didn't ruin it. Hope you love it.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0731. Romance and angst with your coffee? reviewsMy my my.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0732. Eyes that make you feel so fucking lost reviewsI liked this idea, but i really don't think it was executed well. Damn fictionpress for messing up my formatting.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-23-07 - Published: 4-23-0733. Card board boxes and cans of beans line the pit reviewsNot much to say something thrown together at 4:03 AM enjoy.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-10-07 - Published: 3-10-0734. The musings of a boy who really shouldn't write reviewsMy my things got a bit nasty didn't they?Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-10-07 - Published: 3-10-0735. Missouri my misery reviewsA home I lostFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0636. Inquestion reviewsYou get tired of questions...Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0637. Independent reviewsJust my thoughtsFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0638. Equals reviewsA short little thing, but I rather like it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0639. Rage reviewsA poem about angerLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-3-06 - Published: 10-3-0640. Ignorance reviewsThe waste that is pop cultureLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0641. Reason reviewsI love this poem; I think it is one of my best.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0642. Friendship reviewsA bit cliché, but I think it a rather nice poem.Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0643. Untitled until further notice reviewsSee above.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0644. Equal reviewsPeople can always find a problem.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0645. Am reviewsAnger is weakGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-24-06 - Published: 5-24-0646. Hope reviewsWhen you just can't...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-06 - Published: 4-29-0647. Scratch reviewsPain is trueLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-29-06 - Published: 4-29-0648. Language reviews...insert witty summary hereGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-29-06 - Published: 4-29-0649. It reviewsThe insanity of everythingReligion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-24-06 - Published: 4-24-0650. Poet reviewsold thoughtsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-8-06 - Published: 4-8-0651. Deus reviewsan angry poermReligion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-8-06 - Published: 4-8-0652. Dribble reviewsSomethin' new and shiny for everyoneLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 26 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-8-06 - Published: 4-8-0653. Need reviewsA poem for a friend... that almost wasn'tLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0554. My Dear! reviewsA very bitter poem of mineFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0555. My reviewsA poem for my dear sisterFamily - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0556. Barren reviewsA poem for a new friendLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0557. Hearing reviewsA weird little poem... I am rather fond of it thoughGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0558. Crushed reviewsA poem about childhood gone wrongFamily - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0559. Capture reviewsShort and full of emotionNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0560. Your reviewsNot my best workLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0561. Silence of Arms reviewsA poem about the war on terriorismWar - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0562. Can You? reviewsA weird little thingLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-0563. Beauty reviewsFor an old friendLove - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-05 - Published: 11-9-05
United States