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Author has written 33 stories for Life, Friendship, General, Love, Song, and Nature. My poetry describes who i am much more acuratly than i ever could. If you read a bit of my work, you might know me better than people who actually know me. I'm somewhat shy about my writting. I like having a acount with a pen name where i can be compleatly anonymous. Everyone uses their fiction press acount diffenertly, so if you are looking for polished ready for publication peices you probably won't find what your looking for in me. I post most things, i tend to feel that things are finished and i don't really like to change them. But i love critisizm. i value that much more than "great poem! keep writting." But really, i hate most all things that are generic. I can't guarentee that i will review you if you review me-like so many others do. But i will do my best. | |||||||||
1. our island of happines reviewsmy memory of himLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-06 - Published: 6-27-062. fire reviewsthe words that the camp fire spoke in my ear...Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-063. nest of the past reviewssentimentality. memories. thoughts...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-064. Doors reviewsthe doors of the ghost townGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-065. A comparison of our compositions reviewswhat is it that makes you unatainable?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-2-06 - Published: 4-2-066. Moon reviewsA molment of solitude on the night after the full moon in Death ValleyNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-067. Fall canyon reviewsa short poem written after a grueling hike in Death ValleyNature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-068. green and grey reviewsthings that came to my head on a long long driveGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-21-06 - Published: 3-21-069. the last watered down sip reviewsa little something i wrote a long time ago.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-27-06 - Published: 2-27-0610. hoping for a marigold reviewsa poem about things i canot have.Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-27-06 - Published: 2-27-0611. love poem reviewsa english assignment for valentines day. please R&RLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-14-06 - Published: 2-14-0612. Morning becomes Mourning reviewsi had hoped maybe i could prove that nagging voice wrongLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-0613. the lie we live reviews...the lie we live...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-8-06 - Published: 1-8-0614. i'm not me i'm ME reviewsi was in a horrible mood. it's hard to explain. just read it.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-0615. Who am i on he dance floor? reviewshow do i appear to others?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-18-05 - Published: 12-18-0516. a girl i don't know reviewsinsight into the pain of a girl. a certin girl.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-14-05 - Published: 12-14-0517. ticktacktoe: my February reflections reviewsjust something i needed to get out. Please R&R, i'm trying to improve my song writing skills.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-30-05 - Published: 11-30-0518. The view through a mirror reviewsi have a really hard time writting songs, and this may be considered more of a poem than a song. it's definatly not one of my favorites. Anyways, it's very personal, it's about me and the other part of me.Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 302 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-13-05 - Published: 11-13-0519. a sonnet questioning the saddness reviewsanother sonnet, these are hard for me so i would love some criticizm. please R&R-Thanks!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-05 - Published: 10-28-0520. the sonnet of orderly confusion reviewsi really need help with this! i have to turn in a sonnet for school, and it's been giving me a lot of trouble. So i you could R+R that would be absolutly fabulous! THANKS!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-26-05 - Published: 10-26-0521. come on in reviewsthis is kind of bizzare. It's about someone who was abused by there lover, but can't get over them. Please read and respond! ThanksLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-23-05 - Published: 10-23-0522. i am not reviewsand who i am notLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-11-05 - Published: 10-11-0523. i am reviewsmy views on who i amLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-11-05 - Published: 10-11-0524. joy reviewsjust some of my thoughts on joy. Please R&R, Thanks!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-4-05 - Published: 10-4-0525. When sorrow blooms reviewsa short piece that i wrote for school and need some imediate feed back on. Thanks!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-4-05 - Published: 10-4-0526. why reviewsthis is just a searies of questions masquerading as a poem. Please R&R-Thanks!General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-20-05 - Published: 9-20-0527. running in place reviewsthese are a bunch of lines about myself put together to create a poem. I need input on this one. Please R&R-Thanks!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-19-05 - Published: 9-19-0528. all the chaos within me reviewsthis is just something that sort of came out. it started as one thing and evolved to another. i would love some ideas for it.- thanks!Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-17-05 - Published: 9-17-0529. forgotten dream reviewsThis is basicly a re-write of slouching Ink(both the original and the re-write where for english class). I would love your oppinion on this piece. i feel like this poem somehow has some significance, like i have to get it just right. your comments would bLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-12-05 - Published: 9-12-0530. eating laughter reviewsthis is a chaotic little poem that i wrote after babysiting 25 kids for 3 hoursGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 9-2-05 - Published: 9-2-0531. Blubbering trombone reviewsThis is fairly light hearted, another one for english class. Please review-ThanksGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-0532. why love your lemons? reviewsthis is a piece that i have been wanting to write for a long while. i finally got it down at camp, so here it is. I would love some suggesions for improvement!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-31-05 - Published: 8-31-0533. Slouching ink reviewsThis is a piece that is giving me some serious trouble. i need to know if it is good enough for my eighth grade english class. If it is not, than please give some constructive critisizm. ThanksLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-30-05 - Published: 8-30-05
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