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Faithful Jewel
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since: 07-19-05, id: 486325
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Author has written 41 stories for Life, Song, Horror, Fantasy, Essay, Family, Friendship, Action, General, and General.
Updates:

20th November:- Uploaded "Safe Amongst the Lies", which was the first poem I've ever written on a phone. Whilst in the Great Hall. During a Drama competition... My priorities are messed up, eh?

26th October:- Uploaded "World of Dreams" and "Release". "WoD" was written a couple of weeks ago for a friend, at a request, and "Release" was written about half an hour ago... (whilst playing Solitaire). Who says you can't multitask when writing poetry.

14th August:- Name change from "Dariston" to "Dahrilon". I really need get back to updating, eh? I have admittedly been busy with exams and two new webcomics, but it's not real excuse... Bah!

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Me:

Reason can answer questions, but imagination has to ask them - Ralph Gerard. That is probably the quote that can define me in some way or another. My logic makes me do the things I do, whilst my creativity reflects upon it later. They are reversed, and probably have no link to that quote whatsoever, but both play a big part in what work I've uploaded here.

A lot of my work is either based upon my feelings or the influences of those around me. Rarely, I get some inspiration from other music/films/poems etc but I see this as plagiarism and mostly write them before deleting them. I am also a perfectionist, so any points about my grammar, spelling and such will be taken into account and altered as necessary.

Sometimes you may get an e-mail from me in reply to a review. This is usually only if I have an urge to answer any questions you may pose about the piece and it's the only controlled way of answering them. Of course, that wouldn't work if the review has no e-mail... Pretty obvious, eh?

As one last final note, before I direct you to my sad, internet geek webpage, I'd like to point out some of my "rules" of FictionPress. All reviews will be read; all reviewers will be looked at; most reviewers will be reviewed by myself; all reviews will be taken into account. Those are pretty simple, but sometime I wonder how many people disregard the politeness that the unwritten rules revolve around.

Some links I have the magic of commanding are:
Myspace (not often used) - http://www.myspace.com/faithful_jewel
Bebo (not often used) - http://www.bebo.com/faithful-jewel
FanFiction (half abandoned!) - http://www.fanfiction.net/~lupusbane
Less Than 3 (my main webcomic) - http://www.less-than-3.co.nr
Big Wide World (my other webcomic) - http://bigwideworld.thewebcomic.com
Webcomic Community (the forum I run) - http://www.webcomiccommunity.co.nr
Deviant Art (often used!) - http://faithful-jewel.deviantart.com/

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Story/Poems Information:

My essays (Creative Writing Entries and other Essays) were done for my GCSE English lessons a couple of years ago now and I decided to upload them for reference for others. I found it useful to look at others essays about the same subject as mine, despite being on different topics, as I still found some material that proved helpful.

"Dahrilon" is my ongoing novel project... I'm completely rewriting it at the moment so that is why most of the chapters have been removed. I hope to repost it bit by bit, to a much better quality for very harsh yet constructive criticism. Every bit so far is planned in my mind, as I come up with new plot twists and adaptations everyday, so suggestions may be taken into account for the plot, but it is unlikely. Someone who isn't afraid to sugar the pill would be a great help to me whilst I write this and I will gladly return any favours you may ask.

"Drop the Facade" was deleted for various reasons, and it's been completely forgotten. Not on any computer, in any recycle bin, the paper I printed it off on is ripped up etc. Don't think that really affects anyone, but just to let you know.




1. Safe Amongst the Lies reviews
The first poem written on my phone then typed up when I got home. Halfway between life and friendship.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-20-07 - Published: 11-20-07
2. Release reviews
A short one I can't really sum up as its meaning has confused even the poet who wrote it it could be worse though!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-26-07 - Published: 10-26-07
3. World of Dreams reviews
A poem, written by request, for a friend based on the theme of dreams.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-26-07 - Published: 10-26-07
4. Resting reviews
Quick short one that just came to me at work. Not much else to say, really. Aren't I an informative little wolf...!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-21-07 - Published: 8-21-07
5. We'll Go Far
Another two liner that I developed. I was debating whether to put this in friendship, but put it in life as it's more about that than friends. I tried hard while keeping a relaxed flow going, so hence some very weird word combinations. Short and sweet.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-07
6. Shadows reviews
I wrote this a while back, but the site was down so I couldn't upload it. Just one of my Hmm, that's weird, let's write a quick something down about it moments.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-7-07 - Published: 4-7-07
7. From the Brink reviews
A short one about the fight to survive... written in a fictional frame of mind, so it's a first for me.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-17-07 - Published: 3-17-07
8. Spoken Peace reviews
A short poem I wrote and struggled to complete. A first for me. It has more meanings than I can talk about.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-12-07 - Published: 3-12-07
9. Legacy
A young girl's village is destroyed by an unknown killer. This short story follows her through the event and the horrors of the night that changed her life. It's more bloodthirsty than horror, written in a one off session. Feedback much appreciated.
Complete - Horror - Fiction Rated: T - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,133 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-7-07 - Published: 3-7-07
10. Faith of the Unique reviews
Eek, I am scaring myself! Anyway, a quick little awkward poem I wrote when I was halfway between a poetic mood and a nothing mood. Little bit of Life and Spiritual theme.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-5-07 - Published: 3-5-07
11. Digital Thoughts of Madness
I've put this in General, I feel dirty My thoughts at the moment, just like a warm up to get me into writing again. Bit of swearing, sorry about that, it doesn't really make sense and is more of a conversational text than anything else.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,019 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-4-07 - Published: 3-4-07
12. Tunnel Vision reviews
My little "rant" about the tunnel vision of all of us. It's quite jovial actually!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-30-06 - Published: 8-30-06
13. Frankenstein Essay reviews
Look at the significance of chapter five of the novel as a whole. Focus on the relevance and effect of the writer’s use of language to describe setting, character and what it shows about social and historical influences.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,961 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-22-06 - Published: 8-22-06
14. Chased reviews
A young man is running through the streets late at night... But why is he running so desperately? And what is behind him...?
Action - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 700 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-06
15. Forever Fooling reviews
A weird kind of question I thought of, developed into a first verse and then wrote some more verses to follow it - are we fooling each other?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-9-06 - Published: 7-9-06
16. A Block of Questions reviews
An ironic kind of poem, written just after some form of writer's block... You might have to be on my wavelength to understand why I find it ironically funny
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-27-06 - Published: 6-27-06
17. The Night Owl's Mind reviews
Me being nocturnal and writing some weird poem about it - Couldn't decide about "Nature" or "Life" category...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-10-06 - Published: 6-10-06
18. Twilight Aid reviews
If you're a person who everyone relies on to keep their secrets etc (Sorry, the name for it has slipped my mind) then you may understand this... When everyone goes to you for advice
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-10-06 - Published: 6-10-06
19. Dahrilon » reviews
My story in production A teenage girl disappears without a trace. Years later her friend is thrown back into the mystery, where only hope, friendship and acceptance can overcome the darkness that rules. BEING COMPLETELY REWRITTEN, at some point...!
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,391 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-1-06 - Published: 6-1-06
20. See Me
Simplicity is probably its downfall, but I like how it's short - perhaps a plea?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
21. Dreaming of Freedom reviews
For my family... And it's not a nice "I love you" one so be warned
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
22. Standing Fast
Written for a friend on a game, but I liked it and decided to keep it
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
23. Sorry
For my friends (who are now enemies) and everyone else I know
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
24. You Think You Know Me
Slight rant, put into poetic form at my family
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
25. Forever reviews
The beginning of a story found when it was about to be deleted. Any ideas about where it could go would be useful, but it just starts with a simple old man...
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
26. Creative Writing Entry: Blood on My Hands reviews
Bit of blood, got to rate it a bit higher. English lesson work again, for my creative writing project.
Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 471 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
27. Creative Writing Entry: Tennant is the new Tenant reviews
Ok, no idea if this is actually allowed (Please tell me so I can promptly remove it if so) but it was a creative writing interview kind of thing for my English lesson
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,032 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
28. Great Expectations Essay
Watch the opening sequences of “great expectations” – the 1947 film by David Lean and the 1997 film by Alfonso Cuaron. Which do you think is more successful?
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,831 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
29. An Inspector Calls Essay
To what extent does J.B. Priestley use the “whodunit” formula to deliver a moral message in “An Inspector Calls”?
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,660 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
30. Blossom to Snow reviews
I just wrote this when I couldn't bring myself to write anything else - For some reason it came to me whilst walking home from school...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-06
31. Lighting Up Hope reviews
No idea why I wrote this again, perhaps just because I got bored and the events of the last few days were playing on my mind
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-10-06 - Published: 4-10-06
32. Shards reviews
(Reposted under a new name, the old one has been deleted don't worry) - Written perhaps for a friend after something was told to me that really made me think...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-7-06 - Published: 4-7-06
33. The Knock of Nightmares
Written when I was 9 (6 years ago) so it's got a childish air about it, but it's basically about a very weird treehouse... Watch for the adult recollection of it, out soon! Minus the Kiddy moments
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,526 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-28-06 - Published: 3-28-06
34. Old Dogs New Hunts
Written for a friend about two years ago, it was based on one of his favourite games with me twisting alot of it - I felt to upload it but remember all credit for the main plot goes to JAGex LTD
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,386 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-28-06 - Published: 3-28-06
35. Can't Stop Me Now reviews
Terrible... Forced... Evil... No sense... AKA - My second shot at lyrics
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-24-06 - Published: 3-24-06
36. Longing to be Noticed reviews
Not about wanting to be noticed by someone you like etc, it's about being noticed for your ACTIONS - and how annoyed you get when you're ignored for doing something bad...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 331 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-23-06 - Published: 3-23-06
37. Living In Luck
My life at the moment, which revolves around me being awesomely happy! No reason, just a friday feeling. The rhyming is terrible, and the timing may be out but it's great fun to write!
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-10-06 - Published: 3-10-06
38. Survive Through The Dark
This was found in my diary from about a year ago when (according to my truthful friend) I seemed really down - after reading this it made me realise some things about back then...
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-9-06 - Published: 3-9-06
39. Not Everyone Knows You reviews
Small piece that just got written down for the hell of it - not meant to rhyme or have rhythm
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-06
40. Why Don't You Remember? reviews
A recent shot at trying to write lyrics - It is my first time so bear that in mind. Pleading, longing and accepting.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
41. Flames reviews
A short piece I wrote not long ago. The name was just the first thing I thought of, but it's content is more than fire.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-4-06 - Published: 1-4-06
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