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Author has written 49 stories for Life, General, School, Love, Nature, Politics, Romance, and Family. To all who read me, here is a little insight into the person whose work you are critiquing and admiring. I am male, 17, and my passion is writing. My personality is very multi-faceted, kinda like a giant Yin Yang incarnated. I'm pretty down to earth, but a bit of a dreamer too, and though intellectual and compassionate, I have my own little twists of cynicism, malice, and sadomasochism that make my personality all the more acidic. Call me bittersweet, I guess. I'm always open to anyone who wants to contact me, and am always up for a good chat. So, if you come across me on the sight, feel free to ambush me on AIM or email whatever. As for this sight, this shows some of my poetry from the past two years, as well as a number of conversation pieces with my lover, Nyghts Dark Desire. I may even try and post some chapters from my auto-bio and my novel, as well as short stories, though these, if they show up, will come with no frequent routine or schedule. Below are my works, some complete, some in increments. Enjoy, or don't, but critiques are always valued. -Immortal Nyght | |||||||
1. Mad Man's Burden reviewsThis is a response to Rudyard Kipling's "The White Man's Burden." Any unfamiliar with it should goodgle it before reading this, because the two are closely entertwined.Politics - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 5-31-062. Tonight reviewsThis needs critiquing, as I'm trying some things new. So, any who are familiar with sonnets and with submission, constructive criticism is appreciated.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-18-06 - Published: 5-18-063. Mistress reviewsMy rarely-seen submissive side. Still working on how to capture this paradigm in words, so critiquing is appreciated.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-18-06 - Published: 5-18-064. My Pet reviewsNot your usual love poem. Though on this subject, in may be my tamest poem.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-065. Crow reviewsAbout the transformation one undergoes under love, this takes a lot of analyizing to make sense and get everything out of. If you're patient, please critiqueLove - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-066. Save Me reviewsRead the title if you want a summaryLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-9-06 - Published: 5-9-067. Lady reviewsTo the tune of London Bridge, you may sing this song of a broken houseFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-5-06 - Published: 4-5-068. Wakatashi reviewsWatching "Yojimbo" and having to explain the movie to my World Film teacher got me thinking this one up. First poem in too long. Damn writer's blockLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-5-06 - Published: 4-5-069. Sprite reviewsI can't get the words from an old poem out of my head. "She walks in beauty like the night" This is trying to capture the person I connect with that lineLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-15-06 - Published: 3-15-0610. Heretical Love reviewsLove is like a religion with its devotion, but like all relgions it can become as profane and unholyas it can be divine.Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-14-06 - Published: 3-14-0611. Immolate reviewsMost people are familiar with the buring alive of heretics during the Inquisition. Well, my first kiss with some one had such a flame that the whole relationship was like that.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-8-06 - Published: 3-8-0612. Torpor reviewsDoes a corpse hurt. Nay, it is numb, lonely, sorrowful, but numb from the senses rotting away.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-8-06 - Published: 3-8-0613. Limits reviewsStill rough. Please critique.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-7-06 - Published: 3-7-0614. Innocence reviewsI took something I can't return. m Should I regret it?Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-4-06 - Published: 3-4-0615. Pi reviewsApparently, Pi Day is a national holiday. I was assigned to do a project for it. Here's a poem, interpretting Pi as the result of the perfect little circle's true identity. Read, and you'll see what I mean.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-06 - Published: 2-28-0616. Welcome Back reviewsEver feel so stranded you're practically on a desert island? Physically and emotionally removed from everything meaningful against your will?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-27-06 - Published: 2-27-0617. Weep reviewsThis is borderline emo-sounding, so all emo haters, be warned. There is no cutting, but it has the "curled up in a fetal position in the corner" effect. And yes, yes, it is a love poem.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-25-06 - Published: 2-25-0618. Paper Hearts reviewsWhy do people feel that chocolates and cute cards with witty punchlines express love better than actually doing r saying something from the heart?Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-14-06 - Published: 2-14-0619. Obscene VisionDescribing something I just saw a few moent's ago...anything else gives the poem away.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-0620. AIM reviewsThis was my AIM away message, but some one told me it was one of the best thing's I've ever written. Decide for yourself, if the fact it was an away message doesn't scare you off.Romance - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 2-11-06 - Published: 2-11-0621. Impaled reviewsThis is about sex. I originally began it very, very, very differently so it could have been about rape, taking virginity, Ted Bundy, Vlad Tepes, or a number of other interpretations, but couldn't get the format to flow, so I scrapped it and began again.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-10-06 - Published: 2-10-0622. Last Supper reviewsA romantic piece blaspheming the Last Supper and the Holy Grail.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-10-06 - Published: 2-10-0623. Incubus and Succubus reviewsThe title should reveal this isn't the most Disney-like love piece ever, but it unfortunately isn't quite an Elizabeth Bathory romance either. I still need more virgin sacrifices and satan worship to get there.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-9-06 - Published: 2-9-0624. Scalpel reviewsSometimes a lover is all that can heal you, and the love's pain and cruelty is all that distracts you from the hurting. This takes that concept to a sadomasochistic extreme.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-9-06 - Published: 2-9-0625. Butterfly Spirits reviewsYes, its a love poem with a sappy name like some second-grade hippie child on opiates made it. Its not that. I couldn't think of a title and took words from the text. Its one of my few love poems that the sane can empathize with.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-6-06 - Published: 2-6-0626. 55 reviewsIn 55 words, my lover asked me to summarize my feelings. It is a scientific law of the universe that I am incapable of being concise, and many have tested their thesises to disprove this law and been proven that their hopes were futile. Here are my 55 wLove - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-6-06 - Published: 2-6-0627. Shoes reviewsThis is a series of metaphors for ways I've tried to live my life. Rough in format, I admit to having written it to stay awake in Pre-calc, and would like literary critique. ThanksLife - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-2-06 - Published: 2-2-0628. Lessons' Secrets reviewsThis is written as part of a conversation with another author on the sight. Before reading it, please read Nyghts Dark Desire's piece entitled "Secret Lessons" otherwise this will make no sense on its own.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-2-06 - Published: 2-2-0629. Razorblade Love reviewsLove at its most sadomaniacal form and the deepest levels devotion and sacrifice for that love. A Valentine's Day poem posted early, for Nyghts Dark Desire. I am experimenting with formatting on the sight, so coment if the formatting is off.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 1-26-0630. My Desire reviewsThis is written about the authot Nyghts Dark Desire, in response to the poem posted entitled "My Immortal" and though anyone may read this, they should first read "My Immortal" for clarity as this is a conversation.Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0631. Doomed Candles reviewsThis is about a loved one, but it is written to make reference to anyone who is loved and beyond the grave. I tried not to make it clechéd.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0632. Mountain Climbing reviewsI titled this about life because it's how I live my life. Always facing my inner demons and always running from them at the same time.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-10-06 - Published: 1-10-0633. Crimson Jewel reviewsA cheesy love-poem to a Goth chick I dated. The closest to saying something sweet that wasn't total horseshit I ever got.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-0634. Angelic Eyes reviewsThis was written for an ex, who I told I could write a whole poem about such perfect eyes. I have since rewritten it many times for many people.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-0635. Hollow Dawn reviewsInsanity and depression can make one forget feeling, and the nerve-endings of the soul are scorched useless. Only empty memories and meaningless facts remain.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 339 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-0636. America reviewsMaybe a bit satyrical, this displays my political beliefs about what America has become.Politics - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 1-2-06 - Published: 1-2-0637. Remorseless Kiss reviewsThis is about love, though not incest as metaphors might suggest. But it is a tale of infidelity and overlapping love, while lovers are swept out of their own control by greater forces.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 461 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-0638. Time reviewsMan built the clock to measure time, and our creation has man enslaved.Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0539. Ungodly Seven reviewsAbout the time I was unfaithful to a love-one. Maybe a bit clechéd, but at least emotional.Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0540. Sleeping Doll reviewsPeople often strive for perfection. Some think they've acheived it. Those people only acheived doublethink, illusions.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0541. Painting reviewsJust a twisted piece about masochistic artworkGeneral - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0542. My Rose reviewsThis saying that the "bad" qualities of some one are just as beautiful and wonderful, as the "good".Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-0543. Warmth in the World of Winter reviewsThis is about some one who helped wake me up and who I helped heal the hurts of.Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-11-05 - Published: 11-11-0544. F reviewsFailing sucks. But when somebody fails, its usually because of more than stupidity.School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-10-05 - Published: 11-10-0545. Bonfire reviewsI think of the soul as a Bonfire. It burns brightly, can be put out, can dull to embers, can be salvaged from embers, and if it is to keep burning then it will need resources.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-10-05 - Published: 11-10-0546. Hitler reviewsThis is very controversial, and no I'm not a nazi. I just don't believe in any human as being wholly evil and I do believe in causality.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-0547. Iron and Salt reviewsHappy knife in my life. Happy blood and its flood.Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-0548. Internal Flame reviewsI describe my passion of life as a fire. All of my love, hate, anger, joy, hope, determination, hunger, and lust burns, consuming my surroundings at times, or diminishing under the rains of external pressures.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-0549. Dreamer reviewsI am a dreamer by nature, so this is about following your heart, and is built from simplicity because your dreams may be the only clear thing in your heart at times.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-6-05 - Published: 11-6-05
