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since: 08-23-05, id: 491597, Profile edited: 06-07-08
Author has written 7 stories for Romance, and Young Adult.

If you are a dreamer,

Come in,

If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar, a hoper, a prayer, a magic bean buyer

If you are a pretender,

Come sit by my fire

For we have some flax golden tales to spin,

Come in. Come in.

~ x~o~x~

~~ I lived to write - and wrote to live ~~ Samuel Rogers

~~ Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish ~~ John Jakes

~~ Write without pay until somebody offers to pay ~~ Mark Twain

~~ Write only what you love - love only what you write ~~ Ray Bradbury

~~ You never have to change anything you got up in the middle of the night to write ~~ Saul Bellow

Aloha fellow writers/readers! About moi? Let's commencer avec this!

NAME: Carina

Well...where to start? Naturally, I love reading and writing. In my opinion, my writing skills aren't shipshape, but...just to give y'all a heads up, everything that is posted here is a first draft...which needs MAJOR editing and proofreading. See, the first draft is only to jot down ideas for me. So...it's not the the final thing, don't expect it to be, please. If you're a writer, you'll understand that you know your work is at it's best when you just feel it is. Sometimes I feel it, others I may have stories that are really dead, so don't mind me. You'll see that One Last Song and Forgotten Smiles are both finished, but...the writing style is quite elementary as I have started that once upon a time. If you want to read something of better quality, I would recommend my latest and greatest If You Loved Me Enough that I have just finished. Again the writing style is amateur in this story and need to be fixed up, but I promise you that if you muddle through it, it's actually quite good.

Please tell me what you think of my stories in a civilized manner so you can save yourself the embarrassment because anything otherwise will be deleted or reported, constructive criticism would be good, and always try to review! That's pretty much it! Hope you like my work!

BTW,

I'm sure most of you have heard of Fanfiction, so if you'd be kind enough to go and check it out:D http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2739800/1/

NOTE: Sorry to all readers, I will be taking an absence from Fictionpress as I am writing a to-be manuscript that cannot be posted. Sorry. I really love you guys!


Story Summaries:

If You Loved Me Enough (formally called I Remember): Leanna Collings is the smart, collected, studious, and conservative British nerdlette/nerdling in her school that knows six different languagues. But her past is not as simple as she lets on. She has a secret that's related to the famous British star Harmony Rachelles that's vanished off the face of Earth a year ago. Brenden Evermore is the rich, planless, jerk and player extraodinaire in the school with a dark secret, also best friends with Adam Ackerman. Adam is just like Leanna, smart, collected, studious and conservative. Perfect match? Far from it. Not if Brenden has something to do with it.

One Last Song: Dior and Devante met at a park years before. Since then, neither has loved another, declaring that they were each other's soulmate. Now Dior meets Devante again. But he is nothing but a guy who has a band with no educational background. How is a rich smart and witty girl supposed to love this beautiful disaster? Not only is their love on the line, but so are their lives. With a guy who will stop at NOTHING to win Dior's riches and love and Devante's lovesick brother in the way, how will these two end?

Forgotten Smiles: Everlyn vowed never to smile again after she killed her most beloved person on the earth with her drop-dead gorgeous smile. But tables are about to turn when Dreiden Landon-Reeves, filthy rich manipulative boy's next victim is no other than Everlyn herself. Can he make her see that it was not her fault? Or will she continue to torment herself and perhaps one day, suicide?

The History of An Angel: Angelique's always been the insecure loser no one cares about. After a harsh day, her guardian angel appears and tells her that he loves her. What's a girl gotta do? But that's not the end. Throw in a few devils, a forgotten legend, a weird plant and a few pitchforks and you got yourself a full time crisis.

Untittled: Madeline has nothing. She wins no awards. She barely gets past school. And she's not pretty. The one thing she can always depend on? Love from her family. But what happens when that too shatters on her like everything else has? She runs away. Leaving her poor little sister to cope with it. Her little sister's last resort? Give her private, personal, be caught dead if anyone read it diary to her crush.

Magical Lists: Jaykob's sister is extremely ill. To give her the money to do the operation, he promises a rich boy in his school to stalk Carina and give a list of all the things she loves and hates to him. But this kid isn't that simple, there are things he does to these girls that Jay finds out. Will he hand Carina over even when he loves her? Or will he leave his sister to die?



Story Progressions:

One Last Song: Completed

Forgotten Smiles: Completed

The History of An Angel: Discontinued

Untittled: Discontinued

Magical List: Discontinued

If You Loved Me Enough (formally called I Remember): Completed

~~ To write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write ~~ Gertrude Stein

~~ If you do not breathe through writing, if you do not cry out in writing, or sing in writing, then don't write, because our culture has no use for it~~ Anais Nin

~~ If you're going to write, don't pretend to write down.It's going to be the best you can do, and it's the fact that it's the best you can do that kills you~~ Dorothy Parker

~~ Every piece of writing... starts from what I call a grit...a sight or sound, a sentence or happening that does not pass away...but quite inexplicably lodges in the mind ~~ Rummer Godden




1. If You Loved Me Enough » reviews
It isn't fair that Brenden Evermorepopular,flunking,playboyshould get everything he wants.But he does,until Leanna Collingsnerdy overachievercomes into picture.But both don't have such easy lives as they let on.Throw in a celeb&soulmate nerd and wait.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 36 - Words: 114,161 - Reviews: 132 - Updated: 4-8-07 - Published: 8-15-06
2. What's Lost is Lost » reviews
He loved her from afar.Admiring her beauty from away was enough to fufill his need for her.It all worked out wonderfully,until news spread through the school 'she died.' But little did he know,she loved him too,and he was the cause of her death.
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,702 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 2-28-06 - Published: 2-15-06
3. Magical Lists » reviews
He needs 6 grand or his sister dies.Who should help him but the filthy rich stuck-up kid.Yes,the rich kid will help,but for a price.He must give him a list of her likes and dislikes,will he accept it?And if he does,will he only gain more than he bargained
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,969 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 2-16-06 - Published: 1-31-06
4. Forgotten Smiles » reviews
She use to smile and laugh at everything.Her smile melted everyone's troubles away.Then It happened, she never smiled again afraid she might kill another.But then she meets another him,and he's making her laugh again...so what will happen?Will he die...?
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 26,454 - Reviews: 86 - Updated: 1-26-06 - Published: 9-15-05
5. Untittled » reviews
Finally,I made up my mind, I was going to run away.Run away,and never come back.For this was what my so-called “parents” deserved.They had put me through this,and did they actually think I’d make it through,setting me up and convincing me to believe that
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 5,517 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-12-05 - Published: 8-27-05
6. The History of An Angel » reviews
Angelique hates her life. Period. She hates middle school too. But then everything changes, she finds out that she has a guardian angel that tells her about her forgotten past. She has already wasted 13 years of her life, she must complete her task befo
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,063 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-7-05 - Published: 8-26-05
7. One Last Song » reviews
I love him more than I've EVER loved anyone.I spend 6yrs waiting to meet him again,but he was only trash.I do not love him anymore.The 6yrs I lost I'll never be able to live again,but too bad I didn't know how much time I REALLY had...
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 24,608 - Reviews: 97 - Updated: 9-25-05 - Published: 8-26-05
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