| Killing Karma |
Author has written 40 stories for Life, Biography, Love, Fantasy, Humor, and Song. My name is Jeremy-Koai, but I'd prefer not to be called that.. you can call me Jerry, Jer, or Koai--whichever suits you, so long as you don't say my full name.. Since I've been asked this question a few times, I'll say it--as far as I'm aware, all of my poems are based on actual events.. not all of them have necessarily happened to me, but 99.9 of them have. After such a long time of being on hiatus, I've finally returned. Where have I been all this time? I guess that's really not your business--but I care (dare) to tell you.. The last several months have been like a rollercoaster--I've had ups, I've had downs, I've had turn-arounds.. I've suffered losses, experienced new--some being very positive things--and unexpected things, and during that entire time period, I've written absolutely nothing.. hopefully I'll get some new stuff up, and old (and maybe new) reviewers can see if they like it. If not, oh, well.. I actually don't care. I think I had a desire for reviews in the past due to my desire for approval.. if I get a review in the next (insert time space here) or so, it'll be a blessing.. so.. enough of my mindless talk.. I want to thank the people that reviewed my poems.. I know it sounds as though I'm accepting some.. Academy Award or something like that, but.. truly, I thank you, because you are the people who have made me want to continue posting my work on this website, despite the fact that I've always doubted any glimmer of talent that I might possibly have pertaining to poetry.. On that note, I still think I lack any talent in this area--unlike the several reviewers I have had whose poetry is bright and beautiful enough to light up the stars. | |||||||
1. Shelves of Books and Aisles of Produce reviewsYou compare me to the likes of fruit; you read me like a book, from cover to cover.Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-22-08 - Complete2. My Disease Is Your Mistake reviewshis words ricochet off of the walls of my grey matter like bricks: sometimes i just want to grind your bones, make you bleed your words flow gently through my mind like symphonies: although i'd like to punish you, i think you've learned your lesson.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-2-07 - Complete3. Mythology reviewsforgiveme.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-2-07 - Complete4. first offenses and second nature reviewsa drunken night may not count as statutory rape, but thinking i could ever love your pathetic existence is a first offense...Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 499 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-25-065. When the Pain Starts Sinking In reviewsabout acceptance, believe it or not.Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 379 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-066. love lust within hate reviewsdespite what you say, i hate you, and frankly... you love (lust) that..Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-067. lemons & limes reviews... to think that lemons & limes would make the pain stop swelling like an infected wound...Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-068. sparrows & eagles reviewsbecause, after all, you always said you could flyPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 356 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-069. i never knew him reviewsand i fear that one day, you'll love him, and then i'll be the one with a death wishPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-0610. Headlights & Stoplights Of Yellow & Red reviewsit doesn't hurt a bit, i swearPoetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-0611. Bmovie Horror reviewsdon't you wish you had've chickened out now?Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-27-0612. karma's so much sweeter when it's doused in carame reviewsand even Jesus would agree you look great in thorn crownsPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-27-0613. Ravens Only Come Out At Twilight reviewsoh, and the ravens laugh with me as your cheap blue wallpaper unfolds and deterioratesPoetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 554 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-27-0614. pale moonlit skies & golden sand reviewsi'm not ready to love another, because i'm still in love with youPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-27-0615. with death comes denial reviewsand the last thing i see is your face as sharp pangs replace my fear...Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 363 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-1-0616. Pulp Fiction reviewswho ever said sarcasm only applied to frivolous situations?Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-28-0617. love can't be repelled by bulletproof vests reviewstrust me, baby, i'm much more of a threat to you than you could ever be to mePoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-28-0618. downpours from grated waterfalls reviewsi stand beneath grated waterfalls ... and i am glad because no one can see me cryingPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-27-0619. emprisonnant Eden et natation à Atlantis » reviewsvery difficult piece to understand.. my first time writing a foreign poem, so forgive me if my words are a little offPoetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-27-0620. anorexia not a diagnosis an addiction reviewsanorexia is not a diagnosis.. it's an addictionPoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 5-27-0621. Dead Queen Without a Seatbelt reviewsyou are forever just a Dead Queen without a seatbeltPoetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-26-0622. Hush reviewshush, my sweet lover, it will all be over soonPoetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-26-0623. Opaque Transparencies reviewsif only it were the other way aroundPoetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-26-0624. Swing Sets and Cold Drags reviewsand sometimes i wonder if it was for revenge, or if he really did like to play with little boys, and i was just his first choicePoetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 287 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-8-0625. Echoing Poetry, Dancing Shadows, and Carl Sandburg reviewsand you play poetry and she plays a shadow [because poetry is an echo asking a shadow to dance] but you question Sandburg's knowledge of poetry...Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 780 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-7-0626. And Karma Goes Around and Comes Around... but I guess it missed me this time. [Don't judge by the title. Also, don't judge by the words. Words that may seem to say one thing are probably saying something else.]Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Published: 5-6-0627. Tormenting Rifles and Bullet Proof Skin reviewsConcrete poem; how to face criticism, abuse, and pain.Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-0628. Douse Us In Your Pixie Dust reviewsI think we all need a bit of chastity...Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-0629. Souless Raven reviewsI am not your marionette..Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-5-0630. PTSD I Get It Now[Rated 13 for subtle violence]Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Published: 4-5-0631. Guileful Pollen and Golden Fireflies...i should have listened to the indecisive shadows...Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 4-5-0632. Nightmares reviewsMemories..Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-2-0633. September Strawberries and February Tears reviewsand cry if it floods into February with our broken hearts and decaying knuckles...Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-0634. Gun Trilogy reviewsThree Guns: to your heart, to your throat, to your head..Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,234 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-0635. But Jealousy Is Just a Game reviews...which my mind loves to play with me...Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 566 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-0636. I Wanted Strawberries and You Gave Me Lemons reviewsRated 16 for Mature Themes.. Don't confuse Strawberries with Lemons..Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-0637. I Did reviewsI did not murder him [I swear..]Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-0638. 14:1:8:12:5 And It Still Hurts reviews14 years, 1 day, 8 hours, 12 minutes, and 5 seconds...Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-0639. Skin and Bones reviewsMy Thoughts of the Previous Evening..Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 638 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-12-0640. Into The Mind Of The Raven »A collection of reflective poems..Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 1,790 - Published: 12-23-05