Killing Karma
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since: 08-27-05, id: 492083, Profile Updated: 02-19-08
country: USA
Author has written 40 stories for Life, Biography, Love, Fantasy, Humor, and Song.

My name is Jeremy-Koai, but I'd prefer not to be called that.. you can call me Jerry, Jer, or Koai--whichever suits you, so long as you don't say my full name.. Since I've been asked this question a few times, I'll say it--as far as I'm aware, all of my poems are based on actual events.. not all of them have necessarily happened to me, but 99.9 of them have.

After such a long time of being on hiatus, I've finally returned. Where have I been all this time? I guess that's really not your business--but I care (dare) to tell you.. The last several months have been like a rollercoaster--I've had ups, I've had downs, I've had turn-arounds.. I've suffered losses, experienced new--some being very positive things--and unexpected things, and during that entire time period, I've written absolutely nothing.. hopefully I'll get some new stuff up, and old (and maybe new) reviewers can see if they like it. If not, oh, well.. I actually don't care. I think I had a desire for reviews in the past due to my desire for approval.. if I get a review in the next (insert time space here) or so, it'll be a blessing.. so.. enough of my mindless talk..

I want to thank the people that reviewed my poems.. I know it sounds as though I'm accepting some.. Academy Award or something like that, but.. truly, I thank you, because you are the people who have made me want to continue posting my work on this website, despite the fact that I've always doubted any glimmer of talent that I might possibly have pertaining to poetry.. On that note, I still think I lack any talent in this area--unlike the several reviewers I have had whose poetry is bright and beautiful enough to light up the stars.


1. Shelves of Books and Aisles of Produce reviews
You compare me to the likes of fruit; you read me like a book, from cover to cover.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-22-08 - Complete
2. My Disease Is Your Mistake reviews
his words ricochet off of the walls of my grey matter like bricks: sometimes i just want to grind your bones, make you bleed your words flow gently through my mind like symphonies: although i'd like to punish you, i think you've learned your lesson.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-2-07 - Complete
3. Mythology reviews
forgiveme.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-2-07 - Complete
4. first offenses and second nature reviews
a drunken night may not count as statutory rape, but thinking i could ever love your pathetic existence is a first offense...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 499 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 7-25-06
5. When the Pain Starts Sinking In reviews
about acceptance, believe it or not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 379 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-06
6. love lust within hate reviews
despite what you say, i hate you, and frankly... you love (lust) that..
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-06
7. lemons & limes reviews
... to think that lemons & limes would make the pain stop swelling like an infected wound...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-06
8. sparrows & eagles reviews
because, after all, you always said you could fly
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 356 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-06
9. i never knew him reviews
and i fear that one day, you'll love him, and then i'll be the one with a death wish
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-28-06
10. Headlights & Stoplights Of Yellow & Red reviews
it doesn't hurt a bit, i swear
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-28-06
11. Bmovie Horror reviews
don't you wish you had've chickened out now?
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-27-06
12. karma's so much sweeter when it's doused in carame reviews
and even Jesus would agree you look great in thorn crowns
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-27-06
13. Ravens Only Come Out At Twilight reviews
oh, and the ravens laugh with me as your cheap blue wallpaper unfolds and deteriorates
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 554 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-27-06
14. pale moonlit skies & golden sand reviews
i'm not ready to love another, because i'm still in love with you
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-27-06
15. with death comes denial reviews
and the last thing i see is your face as sharp pangs replace my fear...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 363 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-1-06
16. Pulp Fiction reviews
who ever said sarcasm only applied to frivolous situations?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-28-06
17. love can't be repelled by bulletproof vests reviews
trust me, baby, i'm much more of a threat to you than you could ever be to me
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-28-06
18. downpours from grated waterfalls reviews
i stand beneath grated waterfalls ... and i am glad because no one can see me crying
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-27-06
19. emprisonnant Eden et natation à Atlantis » reviews
very difficult piece to understand.. my first time writing a foreign poem, so forgive me if my words are a little off
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-27-06
20. anorexia not a diagnosis an addiction reviews
anorexia is not a diagnosis.. it's an addiction
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 5-27-06
21. Dead Queen Without a Seatbelt reviews
you are forever just a Dead Queen without a seatbelt
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-26-06
22. Hush reviews
hush, my sweet lover, it will all be over soon
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-26-06
23. Opaque Transparencies reviews
if only it were the other way around
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-26-06
24. Swing Sets and Cold Drags reviews
and sometimes i wonder if it was for revenge, or if he really did like to play with little boys, and i was just his first choice
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 287 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-8-06
25. Echoing Poetry, Dancing Shadows, and Carl Sandburg reviews
and you play poetry and she plays a shadow [because poetry is an echo asking a shadow to dance] but you question Sandburg's knowledge of poetry...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 780 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-7-06
26. And Karma Goes Around and Comes Around
... but I guess it missed me this time. [Don't judge by the title. Also, don't judge by the words. Words that may seem to say one thing are probably saying something else.]
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Published: 5-6-06
27. Tormenting Rifles and Bullet Proof Skin reviews
Concrete poem; how to face criticism, abuse, and pain.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-06
28. Douse Us In Your Pixie Dust reviews
I think we all need a bit of chastity...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-6-06
29. Souless Raven reviews
I am not your marionette..
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-5-06
30. PTSD I Get It Now
[Rated 13 for subtle violence]
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Published: 4-5-06
31. Guileful Pollen and Golden Fireflies
...i should have listened to the indecisive shadows...
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 4-5-06
32. Nightmares reviews
Memories..
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-2-06
33. September Strawberries and February Tears reviews
and cry if it floods into February with our broken hearts and decaying knuckles...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-06
34. Gun Trilogy reviews
Three Guns: to your heart, to your throat, to your head..
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,234 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-06
35. But Jealousy Is Just a Game reviews
...which my mind loves to play with me...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 566 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-06
36. I Wanted Strawberries and You Gave Me Lemons reviews
Rated 16 for Mature Themes.. Don't confuse Strawberries with Lemons..
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-06
37. I Did reviews
I did not murder him [I swear..]
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-2-06
38. 14:1:8:12:5 And It Still Hurts reviews
14 years, 1 day, 8 hours, 12 minutes, and 5 seconds...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-2-06
39. Skin and Bones reviews
My Thoughts of the Previous Evening..
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 638 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-12-06
40. Into The Mind Of The Raven »
A collection of reflective poems..
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 1,790 - Published: 12-23-05