| Victor Vestitor |
Author has written 31 stories for General, Life, Love, General, Humor, Nature, Action, Humor, Politics, Spiritual, and Friendship. Hello, Dear Readers! I am Victor. It is not my real name. But a prize to anyone who can guess why it's my pen name! I live in a place full of beautiful trees. I like music, art, writing, and anything creative. I am kind of old-fashioned in many ways. I speak Old English a little. I like living things. I love getting reviews, and constructive criticism is always a great thing. So if you review my writing, I promise to review you in return! If you like my writing, you might also want to take a look at my webcomic, "Everything Will Be Okay". It's an ongoing story, which I update on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays. It's a little funny, and a little sad. Check it out, and, as here, leave comments. All my love, ~Victor | |||||||
1. Diplopia reviewsYou trust your own eyes? But... don't you see those squishy magenta thingies all the time?Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-28-10 - Complete2. There Are Times reviewsThere are times when it's a good thing she can't hear you.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-24-103. The Tallest Man in the UniverseHe was very tall.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Published: 8-24-10 - Complete4. How Inconceivable reviewsI thought it was just me...Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-23-10 - Complete5. Wild Dogs reviewsI can't be bothered. Read it and find out.Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-14-106. Circular Breathing reviewsA secret place.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-14-107. Go »A long poem I wrote last summer on a train trip from New York to California. In the interest of preserving the spontaneity of travel, I've kept everything exactly as I originally wrote it. So I won't be making any changes... but comments are still welcomePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 17 - Words: 2,830 - Published: 6-12-108. Ghost reviewsHow I'd come back if I died before You.Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-099. All Our Bodies In the Grass reviewsA woman's life as told by her family. The title is a line from "Passing Afternoon," one of my favorite songs by Iron and Wine. R&R as always.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,857 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-5-0910. Preparations reviewsDid this for my creative writing class. A woman arrives in heaven and finds it is not exactly what she expected. R&R as always.Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-25-0811. Oh Great Mystery reviewsSomething I wrote for Christmas. It still need some work, so suggestions are appreciated.Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,362 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-24-0712. Life unadorned reviewsLooks like Victor's not dead after all! Here I am, back with a new poem at last. This one just sort of came to me as I was walking across campus one day. RR as always, please.Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-2-0713. Ataduras Pasajeras reviewsA short story based on some things that happened to me in Peru this summer. The story follows a traveler as observed by three people he meets on the road. This is a first draft, so please critique!Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,312 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-24-0714. After Eden » reviewsAdam and Eve find themselves banished from Eden and unsure of how to survive. Their chances look grim until they stumble upon a discovery that launches them down a path that will shape the world as we know it today. A story done in verse. Please critique!Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,088 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-25-07 - Published: 4-16-0715. Viva reviewsThis has been rolling around my head for a while... I'm not going to say to much about what it means. Tell me what you think.Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-27-0716. Granola reviewsA story of redemption. Hilarity ensues when Mike Fagin proposes a somewhat unconventional competition.Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,762 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-7-07 - Complete17. Gedichten aus Deutchland » reviewsThree poems I wrote during my spring break trip to East Germany. They're English, if the title counfused anyone.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-7-0718. Sneak Preview: Bells of the Dutchman reviewsThis is a peak at my upcoming novel, which is tentatively titled The Bells of the Dutchman. The story follows the adventures of Lewis Wagner, a British historian who is recruited by the adventurous Captain Flint for his pursuit of the most famous ghost shFiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 696 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-12-0619. Water reviewsI'd rather not say exactly what this is about, because i'd like to leave it open. Feel free to tell me your interpretation. And, as always, review.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-0620. Death of an Animist reviewsDeath from a different perspective.Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-12-0621. a poem without a title reviewsI have nothing to say about this one, but i like it a lot. Tell me what you think.Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-12-0622. Conspiracy reviewsDr. Rossbaum makes a startling discovery. A humourous poem, hope it amuses you.Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6-12-0623. Almost reviewsOne more poem for my favorite Muse.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-12-0624. Rain reviewsNot much to say about this one. R&R please.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-3-0625. To My Microwave Oven reviewsThe epic battle between Man and that loathsome, radioactive, carcinogenic beast: The Microwave. In this case man loses. May you, dear reader, have better fortune.Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-27-0626. Surreal reviewsNot much to say about this one...if only because i like to be mysterious. I actually attempted to rhyme this one. Tell me what you think.Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-27-0627. Love reviewsA series. Just musings on the subject. Only one finished so far.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-27-0628. I'd Like To reviewsDedicated to the most wonderful human i know of.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-18-0629. Poet's Dilemma reviewsA love poem. Not much else to it.Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-26-0530. Streetlights reviewsMusings on lifePoetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-26-0531. Dying For: A Painting of Adrianne Woods reviewsA story about... well, lots of stuff. I could go into more depth but then again you could just read it. And please review.Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,528 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-25-05