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since	: 10-17-05, id: 498204, Profile Updated: 12-26-08
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Author has written 75 stories for General, Life, Nature, Love, Humor, Song, Family, Politics, Friendship, and Young Adult.

"I Caught Fire"

Seemed to stop my breath...
My head on your chest, waiting to cave in.
From the bottom of my...
Hear your voice again.
Could we dim the sun and wonder where we've been?
Maybe you and me...
So kiss me like you did.
My heart stopped beating.
Such a softer sin...

I melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me now.

Never caught my breath...
Every second I'm without you I'm a mess.
Ever know each other...
Trust these words are stones, why cuts aren't healing.
Learning how to love...

I'm melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me now.

You could stay and watch me fall,
And of course I'll ask for help.
Just stay with me now...
We could take our heads off, stay in bed, just make love.
That's all.
Just stay with me now...

I'm melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me.

In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me.

In your eyes...
Let's sleep till the sun burns out.
I'm melting in your eyes.
Let's sleep till the sun burns out.
I'm melting in your eyes.

What I Listen To
The Used, Green Day, The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Saosin, 30SecondstoMars, My Chemical Romance, Hawthorne Heights, Panic! At the Disco, Lostprophets, Angels and Airwaves, Cute Is What We Aim For, Fall Out Boy, Switchfoot, Nickelback, Evanescence, Avenged Sevenfold, Staind, Good Charlotte, Atreyu, Stone Sour, Hinder, Breaking Benjamin, Three Days Grace, Flyleaf, Papa Roach, Aiden, Disturbed, Dance Gavin Dance, Coheed and Cambria, Linkin Park, Saliva, Naglfar, Through the Eyes of the Dead, The White Stripes, Amber Pacific, Tokyo Rose, Chiodos, Senses Fail, Bullet For My Valentine, The Number Twelve Looks Like You, Alexisonfire, Queen, HIM, Simple Plan, As I Lay Dying, Avril Lavigne, The Beatles, Beneath The Sky, Gordon Lightfoot, Madina Lake, Rise Against, Serj Tankian, Sick Puppies, Hellogoodbye, Boys Like Girls, Big & Rich, Rascal Flatts, Mark Wills, Audioslave, Aerosmith, Drop Dead Gorgeous, Skeletonwitch, Celtic Frost, The Red Chord, Say Anything, KoRn, The Devil Wears Prada, Job For A Cowboy, Enya, DragonForce, Black Tide, Tokio Hotel, Lifehouse, Apocalyptica, Story of the Year

L.i.f.e isn't about waiting for the storm to pass.
It's about learning to dance in the rain.

"Procrastination is a lot like masturbation.
It feels good at the time but later on you're like:
'Oh my god, I just fucked myself.'"
-thanks, kiya-

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1. Your First Appearance
the world is a stage and you are my star
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-30-08 - Published: 8-30-08

2. Ambition
where i want to be
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-30-08 - Published: 8-30-08

3. Walk reviews
oh these cool july nights
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-08 - Published: 7-6-08

4. Summer reviews
who says innocence is overrated?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-2-08 - Published: 7-2-08

5. Midnight reviews
everything
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-9-08 - Published: 6-9-08

6. Raw reviews
ceased to exist
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-27-08 - Published: 4-27-08

7. Tired reviews
and i can't get it back
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-27-08 - Published: 4-27-08

8. Grudge reviews
destroyer of hope
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-27-08 - Published: 4-27-08

9. Racing the Moon reviews
love personified
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-12-08 - Published: 4-12-08

10. You reviews
beautiful
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-12-08 - Published: 4-12-08

11. Rewind Repeat Rewind
fallfallfall 'cause it feels so good
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-11-08 - Published: 4-11-08

12. Romancing the Stone reviews
i never got a chance to wear it
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-2-08 - Published: 4-2-08

13. Hope
and i know i can fly
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-2-08 - Published: 4-2-08

14. There Is No Next Time This Time reviews
i may not hear the things you whisper about me behind my back but, believe me, they reach my ears
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-1-08 - Published: 3-1-08

15. Butterfly reviews
almost like they've forgotten
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-29-08 - Published: 2-29-08

16. Don't Sing reviews
overplayed
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-08 - Published: 2-28-08

17. Coward reviews
vulnerable
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-28-08 - Published: 2-28-08

18. Wish reviews
a flame holds nothing to the sparkle in your eyes
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 174 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-24-08 - Published: 2-24-08

19. Lips Smile Teeth reviews
show the stars just how it's done
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-08 - Published: 2-23-08

20. Mirror reviews
lobotomy
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-23-08 - Published: 2-23-08

21. What Do You Do reviews
so many things hit at once
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-22-08 - Published: 2-22-08

22. Mannequin reviews
so pretty it's ugly
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-22-08 - Published: 2-22-08

23. Let You Go reviews
i miss the person i thought you were
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-21-08 - Published: 2-21-08

24. Drink
words onetwo&three but who's counting?
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-21-08 - Published: 2-21-08

25. Replaceable reviews
each day drags
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-19-08 - Published: 2-19-08

26. You & Me reviews
everything looks perfect from far away
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-13-08 - Published: 2-13-08

27. ess aych ee reviews
she's me
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-13-08 - Published: 2-13-08

28. Smile reviews
a smile succeeds where a thousand words might fail
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-10-08 - Published: 2-10-08

29. Canvas Me reviews
i gave you my heart
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-9-08 - Published: 2-9-08

30. Aspirin
exhausted from pain and frustration
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-9-08 - Published: 2-9-08

31. Laugh reviews
you know you want to
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 23 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-2-08 - Published: 2-2-08

32. Ladybug
flying away
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-2-08 - Published: 2-2-08

33. Alone reviews
And this is how I feel.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08

34. Her Addiction reviews
I am not disappointed in you but in myself.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-23-07 - Published: 7-23-07

35. Betrayed reviews
I just figured it out...
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-23-07 - Published: 7-23-07

36. Dance reviews
I wish it would last forever.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07

37. Missing reviews
But I can't forget you and your GerardWaylookalike face.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07

38. Smiley Face reviews
That's where it all started.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07

39. Goodbye, McKenzie reviews
There's no doubt that your death has affected us all.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-15-07 - Published: 7-15-07

40. When The Stars Fall reviews
What would you be doing in the time that the world ended?
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 293 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-13-07 - Published: 7-13-07

41. What You Didn't Know reviews
You wanted me to hurt, but you have no idea...
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-12-07 - Published: 7-12-07

42. This Is The Last Time reviews
You ruined me.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-11-07 - Published: 7-11-07

43. Keeley Marie reviews
She's the one and only.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-11-07 - Published: 7-11-07

44. Too Much For A Town This Small »
This is a true story.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,174 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-07

45. Death Is Here reviews
Death sucks.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-23-07 - Published: 6-23-07

46. Pyro Technicality
They'd never catch you, no....
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-20-07 - Published: 6-20-07

47. Hey, You Guys reviews
it's just not fun to be here like this & be remembering these things, wondering if you think of them too
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 611 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-07 - Published: 6-18-07

48. Untitled reviews
...and I hope that it will get better...
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-07 - Published: 6-18-07

49. Crawling reviews
The constant nagging in my bloodstream tells me I have to move.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-9-07 - Published: 5-9-07

50. For Those Who Care reviews
...this is for those who don't.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-9-07 - Published: 5-9-07

51. You Are My Sunshine reviews
You are the greeting of my day, the warmth on my face.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-29-07 - Published: 4-29-07

52. Sleep reviews
I just want to close my eyes and drift off to where I can dream of a better place.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-26-07 - Published: 4-26-07

53. Government
Forget about your worries, forget about your fears. As long as they control us, the end of life comes near.
Complete - Politics - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-18-07 - Published: 4-18-07

54. Mommy Dearest reviews
Isn't it funny how you see them in the way that I wish you would see me? Isn't it funny how I would kill to have to say those things about me, even if it was just once? Even if you didn't mean it...
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-7-07 - Published: 4-7-07

55. Modern reviews
Even when it seems ridiculous to you, you find yourself doing what everyone else is…Nonconformist or not.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-28-06 - Published: 7-28-06

56. Hiding
Not real sure what I was thinking...but it's all true.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-28-06 - Published: 7-28-06

57. Rage reviews
When alcohol destroys everything a man used to love, where does he go? This is a poem I am rather attached to so please read it.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 504 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06

58. No More reviews
How far is someone willing to go?
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06

59. Sleep Tight
The creak you hear while you lay awake in your bed at night...the soft laughter...the movements in the shadows... It's just your imagination.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06

60. Heard reviews
It's come to play...but just don't make it mad.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06

61. Sweet Children
So many children around the world suffer...This is for everyone.
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-1-06 - Published: 7-1-06

62. Deadly Escape
I locked myself in here and lost the key. Now I want out.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-06

63. A Poem reviews
I really didn't know what to call this one. I wrote it maybe in fourth grade. I'm not entirely sure what I was thinking at the time I wrote it.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-06

64. Cirque Du Freaks reviews
Come watch the show. We're here all year round.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-06

65. Fall Again to Darkness reviews
If I die before I wake, I don't want anyone my soul to take.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-06

66. Time reviews
It's...time.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-20-06 - Published: 3-20-06

67. Men In White Coats reviews
Short..It's also one of my favorites.
Complete - Humor - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 3-19-06

68. Gone Forever reviews
I don't want to be hurt any longer. But we can't always get what we want, can we?
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 3-19-06

69. I Didn't Do It reviews
Through the eyes of someone who has seen the unthinkable happen... only to be met with a nasty surprise.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 3-19-06

70. A Careless Whisper reviews
I remember writing this when I was in like third grade.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-19-06 - Published: 3-19-06

71. Disappear reviews
Why isn't someone always there?
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-29-06 - Published: 1-29-06

72. Keep Walking reviews
Represents life.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-17-06 - Published: 1-17-06

73. This Is Life reviews
The coming and passing of humans through a short poem.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-30-05 - Published: 10-30-05

74. Take Me As I Am reviews
How I think dying might be. Description through nature.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-30-05 - Published: 10-30-05

75. Inspiration reviews
This is a poem I wrote a while back. R&R please!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-21-05 - Published: 10-21-05