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Author has written 16 stories for Life, General, Action, General, Sci-Fi, and Essay. I'm a harsh critic. I won't lie and tell you that something is good if it's not, but I will tell you how to improve it. If you get a harsh review from me, don't be offended. I'm not attacking anyone or anything, I'm pointing out, however bluntly, what can be done to improve it. I try to be mature and honest in my criticisms, and I hope that anyone critiquing my work will provide the same courtesy. Everything else you could want to know about me can be figured out by a discerning mind set to my writing. | |||||||
1. The Witches of West Neptune »Neptune is the final stronghold of humanity on a ruined planet, a safe haven where society continues to function. Two teenagers caught between civilization and freedom will bring about a final war. Complete Summary inside. Reviews welcome.Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 21,964 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-21-09 - Published: 8-23-072. We the People reviewsThe simple truth is that we the people have failed to maintain democracy."Complete - Essay - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Crime/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 430 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-25-08 - Published: 2-25-083. Warren Number Eight » reviewsWhat if the world became such a terrible place that 20 million people migrated to live underground? An exploration of love across the bounds of culture, society, and spirituality, as it occurs between two people from utterly different worlds.Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,309 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-9-074. The Shelter reviewsThings were kind of like a movie, really. That’s what I thought. Watching the cities blow up, all red puff of flame and curling plumes of smoke, was like watching the White House blow up in Independence Day. Not real. Rated for sex, drugs, & violence.Complete - Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,535 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-7-07 - Published: 4-7-075. 40 » reviewsOpen fire on a warehouse full of hitmen. And follow the next 40 hours, running through a dark city, of the survivors. Warning for extreme violence, drug use, profanity, and sexual references. Ch 1 edited, Ch 2 added.Action - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,465 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-12-07 - Published: 1-22-076. The butterfly jar reviewsPreservation instincts.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-24-07 - Published: 1-24-077. Comedy of ErrorsA simplified recollection of vivid details. Be warned for drug use and some language.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,121 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-19-06 - Published: 7-19-068. Ritualistic ScarringThe deepest cuts don't come from a razorblade.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-069. Ben and Cassidy » reviewsThe story of two kids growing up during World War III.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,136 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-5-0610. Night Shift reviewsWorking food service. And ranting about it.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-5-06 - Published: 7-5-0611. Prattie reviewsWhen you have to say everything all at once.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,072 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-5-06 - Published: 7-5-0612. Tin SoldierThese things happen. Warning for nonspecific drug reference.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-6-06 - Published: 2-6-0613. She Was reviewsSitting against a wall and staring.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-24-06 - Published: 1-24-0614. Habitual reviewsThis is real love.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 276 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-06 - Published: 1-23-0615. Rattle reviewsProzac, Lithium, Seroquel, Geodon, Depakote, Celexa...Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-23-06 - Published: 1-23-0616. The Peacock reviewsExposure of vanity.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-23-06 - Published: 1-23-06
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