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since: 10-25-05, id: 499184
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Author has written 80 stories for War, Life, Love, General, Family, Song, Nature, Friendship, Essay, Haiku, and Sci-Fi.

hey all.

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Im a Lost Soul swimming in a Fish Bowl, Year After Year.

name: kiri

age: 15

ROCK - the sound of the DEAD

Instuments I Can Play- recorder, violin, piano,i was in choir - but i quit, i have just started learning guitar - it has steal strings and hurts my fingers so bad, it once made them bleed - thats dedication for you!

country: Australia - that does NOT meanI am a little bumpkin who knows nothing about the worlld.

Music I Like:Green Day, The Used, Blink 182, The Offspring, Behind Crimson Eyes, Sum 41, My Chemical Romance, Mudvayne,Red Hot Chilli Peppers, Linkin Park, P.O.D, Gavin DeGraw, Evanescence, Good Charlotte, Marilyn Manson, and more I can't remember.

right now my most fave song is Personal Jesus by Marilyn Manson - go listen to it - tis good, doont be scared just because its marilyn manson, the lyrics are really good, and so is the beat.

STUPID DUMSHIT GODDAMN MOTHERFUCKER "THE OFFSPRING"

Movies: Pirates of the Carribean, Shaun of the Dead, Pitch Back, Snatch, Kill bill 1 - didn't like number two much, Troy, The Land Before Time - I know its a little kidlet show, butI love em and watch every new one they put out. MWAHAHA.

Tv shows: Lost, Desperate House Wives, Greys Anatemy, House, Glass House, Ramdom shows that come on late at night.

I just want to highlight some of my favorite poems thatI have written:

Darkness And Light - my complete fave!!!! READ IT!!!!
Watch The Blood Fall
Caged
You're Not Listening
Deluded
No Reality 1 - not the one with many chapters- the first one
Why Did You Leave Us, Dad?
Just Before The Dawn
Guarding The White Bones
Blanks In The Picture
Just A Game?

these are my faves - so check em out, and then review, even if you didn't like them so i know what you didn't like.

Stupid Quotes I have said - or what my mum, and friends call "blonde moments" which is really scary - COZ IM NOT BLONDE, i have dark brown hair - thank you very much, that is when it isn't dyed anything!

Friend: do you like milo flakes??
Me: no, milo flakes taste like cardboard. I like nutra grain.
Friend: Nutragrain tastes like card board
Me: I like cardboard.

Some Person: What school do you go to??
Me: I go to Melbourne Girls College. Thats in Melbourne. (i have also said on another acasion " i go toMelbourne Girls College, thats a girl school.")

While at movies with friend
Me: I'm not listening to the movie... Im watching the music.

At movies with friend after throwing lollies at people in rows below us. one of the people who was rightously annoyed screamed up at us
"WHy don't you F*(^(^kers, go and grow up!"
My comback was " We ARE growing up!"

Some dude was knocking on the door of our classroom and like usual, no one was paying attention, and me being the smart one i was scream out " THERE IS SOME CRAZZY DUDE AT THE DOOR." keep in mind the fact that i was sitting right next to the door.

thats about it. Oh yeah,I also write harry potter fanfiction with Foolish Beloved, so check em out. (im a bit of a Snape fan, but dont let that stop you. I also HATE and DESPISE DANIEL RADCLIFFE




1. Cats and Dogs reviews
of Cats and Dogs from out of space
Sci-Fi - Fiction Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 483 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-21-07 - Published: 9-21-07
2. Place Your Hands Upon Me
please stay with me... for a little while
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-11-06 - Published: 11-11-06
3. How Mad Am I?
i thought i try a different style of writing and just wrote the first thoughts that cam into my head, them patched them up a bit, so if its seams to jump about well...exert Phantom fears,Pleading voices,Masking tears…
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-23-06 - Published: 10-23-06
4. Gentle Tyrant reviews
you seemed so giving, but when you smiled, something was missing
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
5. Bitter, Old and Tired reviews
hanging on after your time
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-14-06 - Published: 7-14-06
6. Monster In My Closet reviews
There is a monster in my closet
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-14-06 - Published: 7-14-06
7. Take Away My Angel reviews
Take away my angel
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-29-06 - Published: 6-29-06
8. Still Feel Numb? reviews
no one has lost, but you haven't won
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-29-06 - Published: 6-29-06
9. Space of Separation
Of something broken and old that won't keep, an frienship incomplete
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-29-06 - Published: 6-29-06
10. Waste Away
Lie forever still, just for you - i'll waste away
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-29-06 - Published: 6-29-06
11. Blame reviews
notice that the ones pointing the fingers are usually the ones who have somthing to hide
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-8-06 - Published: 3-8-06
12. Independant, Together reviews
As one, you are on your own
Haiku - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-8-06 - Published: 3-8-06
13. Prison of Perfection reviews
Living somewhere in between
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-7-06 - Published: 3-7-06
14. I'm Alright reviews
and all i can hear is heart beat.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-4-06 - Published: 3-4-06
15. This Man
an essay for english, about my father and the night i drove away.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 500 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-06
16. So Silently, He Screams reviews
Flawed little butterfly, Silently... he screams
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-06
17. PeekABoo reviews
My childish fantasy. Because i can't see you, you cant see me!
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-12-06 - Published: 2-12-06
18. Tug Of War reviews
Push and Pull, Tare me inTwo
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-06
19. And Rub REAL Hard reviews
Bullimia- the shower will hide the sound
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-12-06 - Published: 1-12-06
20. You Cope reviews
you cope, and you keep on living
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-12-06 - Published: 1-12-06
21. Without A Second Thought reviews
you left me in the wildest winds
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-5-06 - Published: 1-5-06
22. I Want To Scream reviews
I want to believe
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
23. Brutal Ignorance reviews
Living in a world of niceties,
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
24. Hope Eternal reviews
down trodden, unwanted...
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-30-05 - Published: 12-30-05
25. My Broken Bleeding reviews
Can’t let my broken heart, end up bleeding on the floor... it might stain.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-19-05 - Published: 12-19-05
26. Little Devil reviews
Did you know he is a big fucking star?
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-19-05 - Published: 12-19-05
27. Can You Feel My Pain? reviews
Honey, can you feel my pain? The burning of the candle flame?
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-18-05 - Published: 12-18-05
28. Lifetime reviews
I'm here for a lifetime.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-17-05 - Published: 12-17-05
29. Will Keep On reviews
The sun will keep on burning, when i am done
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-05
30. All The Same reviews
Cut Me, I'll Bleed
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-05
31. Still Beating reviews
Driving to the morgue? What the HELL is going ON?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-15-05 - Published: 12-15-05
32. All I've Got reviews
these scars are all i've got
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-05 - Published: 12-10-05
33. All Alone reviews
on this dance floor, i dance alone
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-10-05 - Published: 12-10-05
34. Stop and Stare reviews
stop, stare and leave you there
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-10-05 - Published: 12-10-05
35. Drive By reviews
you shot me down, and drove away. I will have to thank you some day.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-9-05 - Published: 12-9-05
36. I Just Don't Wanna reviews
I want to be a bum. not work, no responsibility, nothing. JUST FUN> JUST ANOTHER TEEN BUM
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-9-05 - Published: 12-9-05
37. Rope reviews
I wrote this when i was thinking of my friends brother, who commited suicide by hanging himself on a tree in his mothers farm
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-05 - Published: 12-6-05
38. Like Never Before reviews
walking to school, every day
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-6-05 - Published: 12-6-05
39. War With One reviews
Waging a War with My Mind, now edited so that it doesn't sound as bad (actually i just took out the s)
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-5-05 - Published: 12-5-05
40. The Real reviews
i hate this one - have no idea why i put it up.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-2-05 - Published: 12-2-05
41. Paint Me reviews
when I was writing this I was thinking of celebrities and how the press paints pictures of them, and how most of it is lies.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-29-05 - Published: 11-29-05
42. Revisiting Denial reviews
crying on a rainy day, what a clishe, buts it's happening anyway.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-29-05 - Published: 11-29-05
43. See My Soul reviews
Short, Short Short - the last of my three short poems. read, and review - even if you hate it, i'll want to know.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-28-05 - Published: 11-28-05
44. Perfect As They Are reviews
another really short poem, please review.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-28-05 - Published: 11-28-05
45. Something Bigger reviews
very very short, only a couple of words, wont take long for you to read and reveiw.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 11-27-05
46. Watch The Blood Fall reviews
cut your hand, watch the blood fall. - imagine it to heavy metal kinda stuff - youll get the gist of it. It is dark,
Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 11-27-05
47. But I Will Go On reviews
my footsteps have faded, and each step is taking me further away from you.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-27-05 - Published: 11-27-05
48. Put A Bullet In My Head reviews
grab a knife - cut my throat!
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-26-05 - Published: 11-26-05
49. Loosing My Reality » reviews
this is a collection of poems that i have done over the years, lots of them relate to me, lots of them don't.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 336 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-24-05
50. Pretty, Little, Dances reviews
when the wind catches them, the leaves make such, pretty, little, dances
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-05
51. Forgotten Girl reviews
She is stuck in her head
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-05
52. You Hold The Knife At My Throat reviews
you are my executioner, my guardian
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-05
53. Caged reviews
I wonder what it would be like to be free.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-25-05 - Published: 11-25-05
54. You're Not Listening reviews
why do you do this, why do you kill me?
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-24-05 - Published: 11-24-05
55. The Things I Get Up To reviews
I've just killed another!
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-24-05 - Published: 11-24-05
56. Mistakess That We Make reviews
how long will it take bfore it's too late to look back.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-24-05 - Published: 11-24-05
57. Fallen Angels Are Flying reviews
Fly with me
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
58. Deluded reviews
iIt's too hard to grasp!
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
59. Follow Me reviews
follow me into insanity
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
60. Corn On A Cob reviews
limerick
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
61. Grandfather reviews
He was, is and allways will be, my grandfather - his name is Chris
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
62. Darkness And Light reviews
She was darkness, he was light
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
63. No Reality reviews
Im surrounded by nightmares - no reality to save me.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-05 - Published: 11-14-05
64. Red Tears Fallen reviews
Its not my choice I keep crawling back to you.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-2-05 - Published: 11-2-05
65. Why Did You Leave Us, Dad? reviews
My father left us, and now i want to know why! This is real, dad... Why?
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
66. These Walls reviews
These walls, they see things they shouldn't.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
67. When Your Heart Is Still reviews
I will live again.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
68. Just Before The Dawn reviews
Can you hear the drumming?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
69. He Was My Father Once reviews
Not my father no more, he has no right to that name. true
Family - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
70. Lost, Gone reviews
if I were to dispear... would you care?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-05 - Published: 10-31-05
71. Take Me Somewhere Else reviews
let your book take you
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-30-05 - Published: 10-30-05
72. I'll Never Be Your Leader reviews
expectations my family have of me.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
73. Its Crossing Over reviews
ever been somewhere spooky?
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
74. I Face A Path reviews
Lifes path.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
75. Guarding The White Bones reviews
the flowers you put on graves. think lord of the rings, movie 2 at the graves with all the little white flowers.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
76. Foolish Beloved reviews
Don't fall in love
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
77. Don't Want To Be reviews
About someone who just can't handle life anymore. Has an underlining suicide theme.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
78. Destroyed By The One You Loved Most reviews
ABout how your trusted can destroy you without a second thought. kind of evil.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
79. Blanks In The Picture reviews
the hidden heroes.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
80. Just A Game? reviews
i can't really write poetry summaries, but its about chess and its kinda cold.
War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-29-05 - Published: 10-29-05
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