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Saral Hylor
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since: 11-25-05, id: 502975
Author has written 18 stories for Romance, General, Life, Historical, Biography, and Friendship.

Review Responses to Anonymous “Teenaged Wildlife” Reviewers (up to chapter 34)

shhsilence: thank you for the many reviews that I received from you. I do appreciate when someone does review more than just the last chapter.
The plastic knives and pool noodles actually came from a series of conversations I’ve had with friends, about what would cause the most painful deaths. And it was too good an opportunity to miss when the situation arose; I just had to include it in story.

crowagain: that is unfortunate that you have forgotten your password. Must make life hard for you.
Anyway, thank you for reviewing regardless, I like reviews in all shapes and forms, even anonymous ones.
As for Noah, he is a little bit of a whore, I never realised until these later chapters were written. But can you blame him? He’s a teenager, and those damn hormones make things hard…
That was a terrible choice of words, I must admit. Sorry.
Back to TW. I don’t know why I chose to end it up as it is, but something just seemed right. The more I wrote about Noah and Mitch together, the less I liked it, and the more wrong they seemed as a couple. I tried to translate that all into the writing, but the workings in my head aren’t always as clear on paper.

kiki: thanks as always for the reviews. The last few chapters aren’t too far away, so I hope that you will like them as much as I assume you like the rest.

News:

October 3 2007: I posted up the last chapter of Teenaged Wildlife last week, and I want to thank everyone for their support during the posting of it on this sight. I want to thank everyone who reviewed, and even those who didn't. Now I want everyone to thank Kizuna, because without her, it wouldn't have gotten posted.

Also, now that TW is finished, I am going to be sharing my time between study for exams and writing Farewell The AshTray Girl. And once exams are over, I'll focus on a few other stories, including a few side stories to TW, for those that are interested.




1. Teenaged Wildlife » reviews
Suffering from an abusive home life, and discrimination at school, Noah Page turned to self mutilation as a release. But can the appearance of a purple haired stranger save him from himself. MM Slash
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 37 - Words: 94,710 - Reviews: 244 - Updated: 9-24-07 - Published: 7-20-06
2. Farewell The AshTray Girl » reviews
I can still remember the first day I met her. I can remember the way she was so different from everyone else. I remember the friendship too. FF SLASH
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 15,685 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 9-12-07 - Published: 4-16-07
3. The Destruction Series » reviews
Seven parts about the mess of seven individuals.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 904 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 7-8-07
4. My Guardian Angel reviews
For my Guardian Angel. A Floating Angel who walks among us. For everything you have done. This is but an attempt to say thank you.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-9-07 - Published: 5-9-07
5. Dear Ana reviews
A love letter of a different kind. A love. An infatuation. A cause of death.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 718 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-19-07 - Published: 4-19-07
6. I Know reviews
This is a story to say two things. To say I love you. And to say that I'm sorry for not being able to change that.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,172 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-12-07 - Published: 1-12-07
7. Truth or Dare reviews
It was just a game. That’s all it started off being. So how did it turn out like this? ff Oneshot
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,931 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-13-06 - Published: 12-13-06
8. My Life, My Essence, My Reason For Living reviews
Sequel to My Heart, My Soul, My Everything “…I watch you sleeping form, your pale face framed by your black hair, against the bleached white pillow. I can feel my heart ache as I watch you, so frail, so delicate. I don’t like seeing you like this, but I
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,796 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-6-06 - Published: 12-6-06
9. My Heart, My Soul, My Everything reviews
...I looked at you, making out your face it the darkened room, seeing you so beautiful in your sleep, so peaceful. How could things be so perfect, but so hard? Watching you makes me happy, it makes me happy to know that you are mine, and that you will nev
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,822 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-6-06 - Published: 12-6-06
10. Keep On Loving You reviews
Left wheelchair bound after being in an accident, Clark all but gives up on life. His boyfriend Mark has tried everything to make things better.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,415 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-17-06 - Published: 7-17-06
11. Love: BackToFront and No Sides reviews
Nothing is predictable. That’s part of life. That’s what David found out. It all started with helping someone out after school. Then, was almost over by three o’clock the next morning. Almost. SLASH. Previously Titled: 'Is Heaven Really There'
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,004 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-7-06 - Published: 7-7-06
12. I Am But A Writer reviews
This is but part of my story
Biography - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,868 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-22-06 - Published: 6-22-06
13. A Journal Of A Soldier reviews
An ANZAC Day special. A short few journal enteries of a soldier in the trenchs of World War One
Complete - Historical - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,313 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-25-06 - Published: 4-25-06
14. The Flower reviews
Life is like a flower
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-06
15. Let Me Live Again
Life is falling away
Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-06
16. Wake reviews
For those who need to wake up to the world
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 288 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-06
17. Why Does It Hurt So? reviews
Love can be a killer WARNINGS: Slash, Language, Death
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,581 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-19-06 - Published: 4-19-06
18. Unspoken Love For Someone Who Can Not Know reviews
Loving a friend can be hard. ONE SHOT
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 687 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-16-06 - Published: 4-16-06
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