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since: 11-29-05, id: 503492, Profile edited: 02-15-08
Author has written 30 stories for General, Life, Haiku, Love, and Friendship.

Name: Dion
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: July 18th
Hometown: Melbourne, Australia.

There’s no such thing as too many reviews...

I love them, no matter if it's just to say how bad it was and how I could improve.

I've been using Fictionpress since December the 16th, and I wouldn't have started it without my awesome inspiration Laura =) Of course... without you, I can't write.

If you could review some that would be great, and I hope your life is as far of from them as possible.

Hehe no matter how much my poems make you think i'm goth, i'm not, although they do encourage the myth. xD

Oh and 1 more thing... I can turn almost any 1 word into a poem... so i'll take requests...

New Favourites: Laura and Trapped In My Dreams

Check them out... it makes the rest seem lighter


Stories Authored: (30) . Favorite Authors: (15) . Favorite Stories: (0) . C2 Communities (0) .


1. Lost Paradise reviews
A poem I started not long ago, which I decided to finish today. She was my paradise.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 4-28-08 - Published: 4-28-08
2. Beneath The Skin reviews
3 words that sounded like they deserved a poem. R&R For me!
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-24-08 - Published: 3-24-08
3. Ludicrous reviews
Ludicrous to dream for so much.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-21-08 - Published: 3-21-08
4. Demented Jigsaw reviews
She was puzzled… and I had lost the pieces...
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-22-08 - Published: 2-22-08
5. Trapped In My Dreams reviews
Disturbed to passive, a look into thrall and giving up.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-15-08 - Published: 2-15-08
6. Laura reviews
To my sweet friend Laura
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-15-08 - Published: 2-15-08
7. Obsession reviews
A sad poem written with my friend Chris, about an obsession beyond comprehension.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 1-27-08 - Published: 1-27-08
8. Angel reviews
A poem written for my friend Angel, I didn’t know I could write like this either. I say this a lot, but its my new favourite, ‘cause I improve after every poem.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-19-08 - Published: 1-19-08
9. CursePlagued reviews
A string of haiku, all about the title. People seemed to like my last haiku so I thought I might give it another try. R&R my new favourite haiku.
Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-10-08 - Published: 1-10-08
10. Her Silence reviews
My first Haiku... best haiku i've written so far, R&R, Thanks!
Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 1-10-08 - Published: 1-10-08
11. If I Would Die Tomorrow reviews
What would you think...? R&R Please... one of the best I've written
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 30 - Updated: 1-6-08 - Published: 1-6-08
12. My Message To You reviews
A clear message I want you to know... R&R Please!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-5-08 - Published: 1-5-08
13. Traitor reviews
A darker side to the lurid... R&R Please.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
14. Grey reviews
Yes, Laura tells me 'Grey', I write a story about 'Grey'... R&R Please
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-08
15. Marionette reviews
I'm just a puppet... what more can I say? R&R Thanks.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-08
16. Worthless reviews
This is one of the best I've written... Yes, yet again, quite sad...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-08
17. When You Left reviews
Yes, another tragic poem. One of the best one I’ve ever written. R&R please.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-2-08 - Published: 1-2-08
18. Restricted Desire reviews
Yes... my first rhyming poem, name says it all, like 'Out of Reach' but with a stronger, more tense meaning.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-27-07 - Published: 12-27-07
19. Out of Reach reviews
Tragic that most of our wants end up like this... I can relate, tell me if you can as well.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-22-07 - Published: 12-22-07
20. Death's Abyss reviews
Worst place in Earth... a fissure with vindictive intent.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-21-07 - Published: 12-21-07
21. Hollow reviews
I asked Laura what to give me a word, she said hollow, and so I wrote a meaningful poem about it. Review, thanks.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 12-18-07
22. Nerve Dead reviews
Nerve dead... effortless... given up...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
23. Caught in Suspension reviews
Ever had this feeling? I should hope not... please review, thanks.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
24. Twisted Nightmare reviews
A later developed poem, evolved from earlier work Fear. The pulse of a Twisted Nightmare
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
25. Unheard Echoes reviews
The demented melody... of unheard echoes
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
26. Blind reviews
Blinded by the luminous hate
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
27. Arid reviews
Corruption of her mind
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
28. The Exiled reviews
Banished from life...
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
29. Cold Sweat reviews
A quick read. 50 words and less. Selfexplanatory title.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
30. Sensation reviews
For those who are willing to guess what this particular poem is about.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 12-13-07 - Published: 12-13-07
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