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Author has written 31 stories for General, Haiku, Love, Life, and Friendship. Name: Dion There’s no such thing as too many reviews... Criticism, improvements, punctuation etc etc. A review is a review. I've been using Fictionpress since December the 16th, and I wouldn't have started it without my awesome inspiration Laura, of course... without you, I can't write. If you could review some that would be great, and I hope your life is as far of from them as possible. So, as they get higher, they get better than the last, so... avoid the ones to start with. I could take requests, as some of them were already based off words. | |||||||||
1. Taken What Was Never Mine reviewsBased off a one word request Taken I was meant to start months ago. I've finally finished as of now.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 252 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-29-08 - Published: 7-29-082. Lost Paradise reviewsA poem I started not long ago, which I decided to finish today. She was my paradise.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 4-28-08 - Published: 4-28-083. Beneath The Skin reviews3 words that sounded like they deserved a poem. R&R For me!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-24-08 - Published: 3-24-084. Ludicrous reviewsLudicrous to dream for so much.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-21-08 - Published: 3-21-085. Demented Jigsaw reviewsShe was puzzled… and I had lost the pieces...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 2-22-08 - Published: 2-22-086. Trapped In My Dreams reviewsDisturbed to passive, a look into thrall and giving up.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-15-08 - Published: 2-15-087. Laura reviewsTo my sweet friend LauraComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 284 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-15-08 - Published: 2-15-088. Obsession reviewsA sad poem written with my friend Chris, about an obsession beyond comprehension.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 1-27-08 - Published: 1-27-089. Angel reviewsA poem written for my friend Angel, I didn’t know I could write like this either. I say this a lot, but its my new favourite, ‘cause I improve after every poem.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-19-08 - Published: 1-19-0810. CursePlagued reviewsA string of haiku, all about the title. People seemed to like my last haiku so I thought I might give it another try. R&R my new favourite haiku.Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-10-08 - Published: 1-10-0811. Her Silence reviewsMy first Haiku... best haiku i've written so far, R&R, Thanks!Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 1-10-08 - Published: 1-10-0812. If I Would Die Tomorrow reviewsWhat would you think...? R&R Please... one of the best I've writtenComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 30 - Updated: 1-6-08 - Published: 1-6-0813. My Message To You reviewsA clear message I want you to know... R&R Please!Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-5-08 - Published: 1-5-0814. Traitor reviewsA darker side to the lurid... R&R Please.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-0815. Grey reviewsYes, Laura tells me 'Grey', I write a story about 'Grey'... R&R PleaseComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 1-4-0816. Marionette reviewsI'm just a puppet... what more can I say? R&R Thanks.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-0817. Worthless reviewsThis is one of the best I've written... Yes, yet again, quite sad...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-0818. When You Left reviewsYes, another tragic poem. One of the best one I’ve ever written. R&R please.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-2-08 - Published: 1-2-0819. Restricted Desire reviewsYes... my first rhyming poem, name says it all, like 'Out of Reach' but with a stronger, more tense meaning.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-27-07 - Published: 12-27-0720. Out of Reach reviewsTragic that most of our wants end up like this... I can relate, tell me if you can as well.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-22-07 - Published: 12-22-0721. Death's Abyss reviewsWorst place in Earth... a fissure with vindictive intent.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-21-07 - Published: 12-21-0722. Hollow reviewsI asked Laura what to give me a word, she said hollow, and so I wrote a meaningful poem about it. Review, thanks.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 12-18-0723. Nerve Dead reviewsNerve dead... effortless... given up...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0724. Caught in Suspension reviewsEver had this feeling? I should hope not... please review, thanks.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0725. Twisted Nightmare reviewsA later developed poem, evolved from earlier work Fear. The pulse of a Twisted NightmareComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0726. Unheard Echoes reviewsThe demented melody... of unheard echoesComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0727. Blind reviewsBlinded by the luminous hateComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0728. Arid reviewsCorruption of her mindComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0729. The Exiled reviewsBanished from life...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-0730. Cold Sweat reviewsA quick read. 50 words and less. Selfexplanatory title.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-17-07 - Published: 12-17-07
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