Just a Thought
I have noticed that most Fantasy stories have dragons and elves and wizards. I have also noticed that most Supernatural stories have vampires and werewolves. We need a change!
UPDATE-4/22/08
I'm back for a while, because I just feel like writing. I will probably be on and off these next few months. One good thing to report: I'm making the story to an FPS which will be very scary. :) Multiple people are working on it with hopes of it getting made someday. I have my contacts. ;)
Also, I'm actionitizing my Kirth Chronicles. Basically, I'm rewriting the first installment for the third time. :)
Kirth Chronicles
Now is the time for my ultimate creation, the Kirth chronicles! I've been developing this story with a few friends since Fourth Grade, and that is like five years ago. The story has lots of action, plot twists, mythology and futuristic equipment all tied into one. In fact, I'm seriously going to submit a revised version of this series to an agent someday, hoping to be the one in a hundredth people who have their scripts chosen to be made into a movie. But that will have to wait, as I have to keep developing. The series itself spans six 140-page notebooks, and is written by four people, therefore keeping ideas fresh. However, it is filled with cheesy inside jokes that I will have to get rid of. Still, I am excited. Happy reading!
P.S. By the way, the first chapter of the chronicles, Kirth: Rise of a Hero, is set in a boot camp, and the original script is extremely cheesy, so I don't know how that will work out. (Hey, it was written five years ago)
The four who made it: Reflex, Rifle, Karusho(fanfiction.net) and Elliot (yes, he's a real person)
Plot Synopsis for All Six Stories:
Kirth: Rise of a Hero- Justin Wright joins the Army, hoping to get a chance to fight Devastian, an evil country at war with his country, Kokko-Lo. Part of the reason why he wants to fight is because of the mysterious disappearance of his sister, Meg Wright. However, the evil he seeks is also seeking him, and the boot camp he is sent to is more grueling than he thought. But the boot camp is not as it seems, as Justin will soon find out.
Kirth: Truth- The recruits graduate, and are sent to Eagle Base to replace some veterans. Justin, Elliot and company will now face the harsh realities of combat. Also, the evil comes back to haunt them, as Justin discovers the true identity of his worst nightmare.
Kirth: Vengeance- Elliot is now the leader he was prophesized to be, and the Kirbian troopers push the enemy forces back into Devastian. However, a new enemy surfaces, and he will stop at nothing until he gets the vengeance he desires. The Jamura also resurfaces on Kirth, with the power to bring peace or destroy the world.
Kirth: Veterans- The battered Kirbian troops are in trouble, as Devastian creates a new, more powerful army to combat them. Justin disappears as he goes hunting for Etna, and Elliot has orders to find Justin at all costs. Etna, on the other hand, is not his usual self. The Kirbians soon realize that the war is more vast than they had previously thought.
Kirth: Ground Zero- The Kirbians are losing the war, as the Devan armies march into Kokko-Lo, destroying entire cities and populations under a resurrected Etna. Elliot's troops are trapped in Devastian, in search of General Jared Isaac, who possesses the top-secret blueprints to the Jamura core. Meanwhile, a rogue asteroid is hurtling towards Kirth, sent by a more advanced race to quell the unrest on the planet. A new entity is also calling Justin for help.
Kirth: Marsol- All caught in the asteroid blast are transported to the planet of Marsozen, thanks to the capabilities of Justin's Jamura. There, they find a race of creatures far superior to anything they've ever encountered. Now, they must prevent the Marsols from unleashing an impossibly huge invasion force on Kirth. Also, an old nemesis returns in a different form, threatening the very soul of Justin.
Also, there are a few other scripts we created that aren't in the series but related to the storyline..
Kirth: Rediscovery- Takes place five years after Kirth: Marsol. Justin has become a legendary icon to the populace of Kokko-Lo, heightened by the fact that he sacrificed his physical self to keep the country safe. Elliot, on the other hand, knows the real story of their adventures, and remains uncredited. He lives in disgruntled anonymity until a mysterious group of commandos attack him. Elliot survives, but learns something about the commandos that sends him on another adventure. Meanwhile, the Kirbian troops are fighting insurgents in the Northern country of Civil Bilbo Botu. The insurgents there are building a giant superweapon that can demolish Kokko-Lo in days. They only need one more piece of the puzzle to make it operational...
Kirth: Jamura- Takes place after Vengeance and before Veterans. Justin goes on a quest, with a few of his loyal companions, to find the Jamura before Dark Anvelicus does, with Elliot pursuing him, trying to call him off the "wild goose chase". Justin accidentally falls into the trap of Ace, the poweruful demon who wants to enslave Kirth again.
If you think the storyline has potential, please say so. Any suggestions and critique would be appreciated.
About Me
My phone number is 911. Call me and tell me, "I know your social security number..." in a deep dark voice. And yes, I do a really good female impersonation. It comes from studying that wierd educational video entitled, "How to do a Weather Forecast". Oh, and tell me your address, too.
ok, I do not know what I am doing, writing this random pointless update. I barely even read other people's profiles! How should I know if people are reading this. If you are reading this, then you must have misplaced your attention. Go read my stories. Those stupid, boring, idiotic...fantastic, wonderful, rich stories. If you are still reading this, I would assume you are curious as to what I am typing. I would also assume that you are a cat, and curiosity is about to kill you with a half ton anvil. Fine, keep reading. I guess I will just have to type like this all day. I also forgot that this is an update, not a random section of my profile. Whatever, I'll just keep on writing. I should be doing homework right now, but I don't feel like it. Actually, the homework sounds really good. I think I'll start doing homework right now. It's not like I'm trying to make up an excuse to stop typing because my hands are tired, no it's not. It's because my dog comes home at 7 and if he sees my homework, he will eat it. My homework is to type some essay, so that means if my dog sees my homework, he's going to eat the computer. So I guess I'd better start writing that essay.
PS. I don't have a dog.
Me
My age? It's 15. And yes, I am male. NO, I AM NOT A SHEMALE, NO THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
DANG! MY PROFILE IS HUGE!
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