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Author has written 36 stories for Friendship, General, Fantasy, Love, Life, Nature, Thriller, Family, and Song. I am a student studying to do medicine. I like to write poems and try stories but they don't turn out right in my opinion. My poems have a lot depth to them in the way it is structured so they do seem to look different from other people's angle who normally read poems that has a rhyme scheme. I write very differently in language as well so I apologize in advance if you don't like them but it would be nice to get reviews like that. I try to reply back to my reviewers but if they are anonymous then that's their problem. I want reviews and I'll give one of your poem/story a shot and review but I prefer constructive criticism e.g. I like it but you can improve by ... OR I don't like this but this part was... Also I make a lot of typos so don't sue me for them!! So enjoy reading AND REVIEW!! Okay here is where I say my thank yous to those you are faithful to my poetry. First and foremost has to go to me dearest writer and friend Carnivalgirl who is the first person to have read my poetry (and she edits most of them for me!) but most importantly is that without her I wouldn't exactly have an account here and actually acknowledge my writing fit for others to read. Also the fact that I discuss all my future story plots with her, which will all be up here soon. The next has to go to my second editor and another person who reads the poems first, which has to be Xakke. She always gives me her opinion in the nicest way possible for which I love. Last but not least goes to Mimi who has always been supportive of my writing, makes me write more when I think I'm lacking in inspiration and pretty much helps me get through to finishing a story. And obviously the last people, who I love with all my heart and can never really explain in words, go to my friends and family who give me the inspiration to write all of the things below. If the sky that we look upon ~STAND BY ME by Ben E. King | |||||||
1. Untitled reviewsThe workings of a teenager... sorry had to repost! R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-26-07 - Published: 5-26-072. Little Snippets of the Past reviewsstarted as a song but is permenantely incomplete, just a string of ords put togeather in a coherent sentence... R&RComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-16-07 - Published: 4-16-073. The hidden pretences of the pen reviewsWhen try to you wake up to be something your not.... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-16-07 - Published: 4-16-074. Strike the happy dagger and let me die reviewsA bit emo, the ramblings of a deranged teenager... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-16-07 - Published: 4-16-075. My name, My identity, My existance reviewsthe growing woman in her diffrent phases of life.... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-24-07 - Published: 2-24-076. Changing customsthe different states of mind of a teenage girl....Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-24-07 - Published: 2-24-077. My long forgotten peace of mindthe bitter sorrow that I feel in the words of Mother Nature.. R&RComplete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-078. Lost reviewsThe hidden impossibilities of sanity... R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-19-07 - Published: 1-19-079. Hawk LineDo you know my eyes wait to feast on you?Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-19-07 - Published: 1-19-0710. The future between the stars and the world reviewsa little something I wrote in the light of the everlasting darkness...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-29-06 - Published: 11-29-0611. Summer Storm reviewsTHe hot summer's day when it finally rained and my world was full of hope again...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-29-06 - Published: 11-29-0612. The hidden child reviewsThe inner lost child trying to find a way out.... R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-14-06 - Published: 11-14-0613. Descending reviewsA vicious thunder storm.......Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-22-06 - Published: 10-22-0614. this is how you will remember me reviewsthe title says it all... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 6-17-0615. Stuck behind bars reviewsthe battle between you and the parents...Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 6-17-0616. My wishing well reviewsthe battles of family life...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 6-17-0617. Cold Fury reviewsIs a one shot, may be extended if there are enough reviews. About the mind playing tricks on the criminally insane. Interpret as you wish... R&RComplete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-21-06 - Published: 4-21-0618. Seperation from an early birth reviewswhat everyone feels... R&RComplete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-4-06 - Published: 4-4-0619. Anon reviewsmotivation to rid the world of one thing... R&RComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-4-06 - Published: 4-4-0620. Revenge's backfire reviewsanger that builds up over the years making a beas, monster that is not of this world... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-4-06 - Published: 4-4-0621. Love's War & affection of Opposition reviewswhat one does for love...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-4-06 - Published: 4-4-0622. Finality reviewsevil is within us all... R&R!Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-25-06 - Published: 2-25-0623. Rebellion reviewshuman nature, how bizarre...Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0624. Looking at the girl next door reviewsinvisbility can be something we all seekComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-18-06 - Published: 2-18-0625. World of Joy reviewsI love to see the world cry in such a way that... R&RComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-8-06 - Published: 2-8-0626. Nothing but a white lie reviewsfamily values... R&R please!Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-3-06 - Published: 2-3-0627. Love, Death & Infatuation reviewsin my opinion based on Romeo and Juliet written in a physics lesson, dedicated to my loving friend Arma, who came up with the title R&R...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-25-06 - Published: 1-25-0628. None reviewssomething i came up as my trail of thoughts rambled on...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-25-06 - Published: 1-25-0629. Finding advice reviewsthe word love and its implicationsComplete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-20-06 - Published: 1-20-0630. feasting on darkness reviewsa pair of dull cow eyes...Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-0631. Sacrifice reviewsfor everyone who knows how it feels like... R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-6-06 - Published: 1-6-0632. WiTCH reviewsa little taster... R&R greatly apreciatedComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-3-06 - Published: 1-3-0633. star fate reviewssomething i came up with on the spot R&RComplete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-1-06 - Published: 1-1-0634. Watching you reviewsa prey feasting... R&RComplete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-31-05 - Published: 12-31-0535. Earth reviewssomething i see...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-0536. A friends Touch reviewsa friend leaving...Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-29-05 - Published: 12-29-05
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