Author has written 3 stories for Romance, and Horror.
If it offends you that I left a rather critical review of your story, I'm sorry.
I just know that personally, I appreciate reviews that nitpick at me so I can actually get better. Fangirl reviews make me smile alright, but they don't really help at all.
If it really bothers you that much, send me a PM, and I'll be happy to boost your ego by lavishing you with praise alright?
Don't hate, appreciate.
Oh yeah. I adore constructive criticism for my own works, so feel free to bash away. (: