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since: 01-07-06, id: 508387
Author has written 37 stories for General, Love, School, Life, Friendship, Religion, Romance, Haiku, and Family.

First off, thank you for bothering to read my profile and possibly my work.
Secondly, my ratings aren't necessarily based on the content of my work, but rather the audience I intend it for. FP's ratings system is stupid, if you ask me.
Thirdly, if you've reviewed my work, thank you. I'll review some of yours when I find the time. It may take awhile, but I'll find it.

1.27.07: I went back and added the dates I wrote most of my poems to the descriptions. If there isn't one, it's because I didn't write down the date when I wrote the poem in my spiral.

If you ended up here, please review something that hasn't gotten any reviews yet. Seeing hits without reviews irks me and makes me wonder what anyone thought of the piece.

So I just checked my email after my posting torrent the other day (it's Nov. 11th as I type this) and I must have a dozen reviews. In two-ish days.
HOLY FREAKING CRAP you guys are awesome. Many, many less-than-threes to you all.

I feel a need to explain my recent "trilogy," if you will, of "Apostasy"/"Dethroned Princess"/"A Path Stained Crimson." "Apostasy" and "Dethroned Princess" are about the same person, while "A Path Stained Crimson" is about someone else entirely. The girl in "Apostasy" basically used an entire string of people and ended up ruining herself in the process. "A Path Stained Crimson" is about a friend of mine that moved away and got into the wrong crowd: drugs, alcohol, all of that. She hasn't actually committed suicide, but at the time I wrote that poem, I hadn't heard anything about her for awhile. I do hold myself at least a little responsible for what she got herself into, since I pretty much blew her off after she moved. I referenced "Path"in "Dethroned Princess" because that girl was basically headed down that direction, but on a slightly different path, if that makes any sense.

Again, thankyouthankyouthankyou for your reviews.

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1. Photographs Redux
Another box of old photographs, except I actually cried this time. Written 11.9.07.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
2. Reason reviews
You are my reason for everything. Written 8.8.07.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
3. Undercurrent
Flowing beneath the veneer of humanity. Written 8.3.07.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
4. Train Wreck in Slow Motion
I've seen this coming for years now. Written 7.24.07.
Complete - Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
5. Triad
Just a bystander amidst the trust and betrayal. Written 6.29.07.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
6. Illusion reviews
It's always just an illusion, unless it's not. Written 6.29.07.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
7. A Path Stained Crimson reviews
I failed you, and I'm sorry. Written 6.29.07.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
8. Inherence
Inherently, we are incompatible. I've known this the entire time. Written 6.28.07.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
9. Dethroned Princess
How does one summarize a haiku? Companion to Apostasy. Written 6.28.07.
Complete - Haiku - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
10. Apostasy reviews
Apostasy, noun: Departure from or abandonment of one's religious faith or moral principles. Companion to Dethroned Princess. Written 6.28.07.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 363 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-9-07 - Published: 11-9-07
11. Mirror reviews
There is something fundamentally wrong with me. Written 3.19.07.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-12-07
12. Fake Star reviews
This is what you are now, and this is what you did to yourself. Written 2.24.07.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-12-07
13. False Idol reviews
This is what separates me from my God. Written 5.10.07.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-12-07
14. Desperation reviews
I almost broke my promise to myself. Then again, maybe I did. Written 1.30.07.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-12-07
15. One Hundred Eighty reviews
There are so many people that I could have written this about. Written 1.30.07.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-12-07 - Published: 5-12-07
16. Requiem
The person of just a year ago is dead. Written 1.27.07.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-27-07 - Published: 1-27-07
17. Oniichan
I figured out what was in my head. Thanks, oniichan. Note: oniichan is Japanese for older brother. Written 1.27.07.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-27-07 - Published: 1-27-07
18. Release and Acceptance reviews
I've decided that I'm letting this go. Written 1.9.07.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-27-07 - Published: 1-27-07
19. Aftershock
Everything's changed, yet everything's the same. Written 1.9.07.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-27-07 - Published: 1-27-07
20. Photographs reviews
Trying to hold on to the past makes you lose your grip on the present. Written 11.6.06.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
21. Perception reviews
What do you really think of me? Written 12.3.06.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
22. Hopeless
I have yet to figure out why I love you when I know it'll never work. Written 12.2.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
23. Silver Despair reviews
I never thought a plain silver ring could crush any hope I had left. Written 11.17.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
24. Empty Restaurant reviews
You found me. Companion piece to Cappuccino. Written 10.25.06.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
25. Cappuccino reviews
I found you, finally. Companion piece to Empty Restaurant. Written 10.23.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
26. I'll Tell You When It Doesn't Matter Anymore
None of me gets it, all of me loves you, and you know nothing of it. It'll stay that way for a while. Written 12.5.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-06
27. Unrequited reviews
You love me, but I don't know it. How I wish he would say that. Written 8.20.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
28. SoCalled Reality reviews
My reality doesn't exist, and I've accepted that. Note: title's acting up. Written 8.20.06.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
29. If Only reviews
I wish it was me instead of her.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
30. Unforgettable reviews
The part in my life when things started to go right.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
31. Realization reviews
The loss of a friendship that may never have been. Written 9.24.06.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
32. StrengthWeakness reviews
I'm strong, they say. They don't know what strength really is. I'm the weakest one of all. Note: Title's acting up. Written 9.24.06.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-21-06 - Published: 10-21-06
33. Once Upon a Time reviews
What it's like to shut yourself off from the world you so desperately need.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-06
34. Sometimes reviews
Who we want most is just who we can't have.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-06
35. Cynical Laughter Echoing reviews
This is what high school is really like.
Complete - School - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-06
36. Someone I Think I Used to Know
Letting go of the past is hard, we all know that. Unless, of course, you're still blinded by your impression of the past.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-31-06 - Published: 1-31-06
37. Seven Sins reviews
The seven deadly sins just cycle again and again.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-13-06 - Published: 1-13-06
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