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nadorj
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since: 01-15-06, id: 509462
Author has written 4 stories for Friendship, Love, and Life.

First of all I would like to say if anyone relates to my poems
and needs to talk e-mail me! I know some of my poems are'nt from real
life exsperiences but I am a person who understands people no madder
who you are so don't be afraid to e-mail me any time! : >

Well First of all I love TAKING BACK SUNDAY but most of all I love Adam Lazzara

Well I am a 14 year old girl with brown, wavy, shoulder lenth hair, and brown eyes. Also I am 5 foot 4 inches tall.

My
favorite thing is to get reveiws I love reveiws. I cant ryme but I wish
I could!But whatever I love my writing and if you disagree thats your
opinion and you should put it into an R&R and tell me what I should
improve on. I can take constructive critasisim but if you are just
going to R&R to say you hate the poem and have no advice of how I
could improve it then dont even Reveiw me.

If you ask me the
worst people are the snobs who think they are better than everyone
else. If I ever turn into one of those people then please someone slap
me accros the face. And if that means going half way around the world
to do it then I'll pay for the tiket. lol.

I like to write depressing poetry and a couple happy to balence it out.

I think guys on fiction press are great beacuse I have never met a guy who likes to write storys or poetry!!!

The
last thing I'm going to say is personally I think the people who read
my poems know me better than people in my life they get to know the
real me.

Well enjoy my poety and poety to come Make sure to Reveiw me and tell me how you like it. : >

and im acire..

me and naroj decided to share accounts i like to write poetry even though im not that good

and i wnat reviews saying how i change the poem etc etc.

thanks!

nadroj and acire




1. The Beauty in Pain reviews
this poem is about the hardships in life and how you shouldnt let all the pain get in the way of your happiness. & by the way I'm only fifteen & im not posting poems on here to be judged by my grammer, please dont mention that in any reviews.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-30-08 - Published: 5-30-08
2. You Complete Me reviews
You're the song I can't get out of my head, the one I sing over and over again.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-08 - Published: 3-1-08
3. Hurt reviews
Sorry if theres spelling errors, im not great with that and the document i used to write it didnt have spell check. But please reveiw, i really like this one and i would love to hear what you think :]]]
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-14-07 - Published: 11-14-07
4. Perfection reviews
please read and tell me what you think :]]]]
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-10-07 - Published: 6-10-07
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