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Captain Lucky
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since: 01-31-06, id: 511573
Author has written 21 stories for Fantasy, Life, General, Fantasy, Nature, and Religion.

Aarrrgggg! I be Captain Lucky! Before I say anything more, I'd like to establish a couple of things: I love to write, of course, and I love reading all your stuff. I love getting reviews and I will review something of yours if you review mine. I claim the right to be cliche, I claim the right to be cheesy, and I respect your rights to do the same if you like to write that. Most of the stuff I will be putting on here are works in progress and are still a first or second draft, so it'll be rough, but hey - if it's fun, I'm all for it! So blah, blah, blah, that's all my warnings. I hope you enjoy my work and I'm sure I'll enjoy yours!

4-21: Hi everyone, I have just something I'd like to say about reviews: I recognize that my grammar and spelling are off the charts (not in a good way), but please try to focus reviews on my ideas and the actual story. I need revision from you guys. Anyone can edit, but it takes a skilled author (such as anyone reading this page ;) to actually give advise.

And I promise to review anyone who reviews me, even though it may take me a few days/weeks (sorry!), so PLEASE review=)

Quote of the day/week/month/year/...: "You were supposed to be this Colossus - you were this great, legendary thing - and yet he gains!" -The Princess Bride




1. The lost, the found, and the searching reviews
A poem with a fantasy-esque sort of feel to it. A man goes off to war and, of course, his lover sends her heart along with him, but what happens to that gift when he doesn't return. Still in progress, so suggestions would be great! I return reviews
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-9-08 - Published: 7-9-08
2. La Patria
Un poema sobre un gozo perdido - una patria.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-08 - Published: 6-19-08
3. Versos Antiguos: Cosas Que Me Hacen Recordar
Algunas cosas nunca nos dejan, siquiera anos despues. Este es un parte de una idea que tenia yo para la misma cuenta como 'La Cancion' en ingles . Espero que les lo gusten. Degreso commentarios...
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - Spanish - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-6-08 - Published: 3-6-08
4. The Descenders
I'm not exactly sure what this is. It's connected with 'Taking Flight' for any of you who read that. The past can be a frightening thing when left to wander about... I return reviews eventually!
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 624 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-17-07 - Published: 11-17-07
5. The Travelling Folk reviews
Once forbidden, twice forgot, three times hidden, four times sought. I return reviews!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07
6. The Miracle of the Path reviews
Perhaps the most miraculous part of life is life itself...things are not always what they seem. Plz r&r, I'll return the favor!
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07
7. Shatter reviews
I'm not exactly sure what this poem is meant to be. It's mainly about inner turmoil and the choice to let go and be healed. I return reviews
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-20-07
8. Rivers and Souls reviews
The protector they had sought for 50 years was among them, but they didn't see her. Now, banished to a world beyond mortality, she must learn how to save them. Yes, this is the requested sequel for 'The Keymaster' and I am really desperate for ideas!
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,154 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-07 - Published: 5-15-07
9. The Song reviews
Having lost everything she holds dear, how can she still fight for the land she loved? An exerpt from the not yet written Tales of the Homeland. I would greatly appreciate reviews and will return the favor!
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 727 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-21-07 - Published: 4-21-07
10. No Tengo Miedo reviews
Para todos bien, los dos que les gustaba mi otra poema en espanol, estaba aburrida anoche y decidi escribirles una mas. Disfruten!
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-21-07 - Published: 4-21-07
11. Para Prepararme reviews
Written in English class, ironically enough. I thought this might help to improve my Spanish a bit. Please review and let me know if it is any good. Muchas gracias!
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - Spanish - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-25-07 - Published: 1-25-07
12. The Keymaster » reviews
COMPLETEor at least as complete as I'm going to make it Arel, a servant, meets up with a mysterious stranger offering information about her past. Cliche, at first, I admit, but I promise it gets better. A work in progress for almost 3 years, so plz r&r!
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 87,508 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 1-15-07 - Published: 2-6-06
13. The Dream reviews
Do dreams ever die? I wrote this poem as a metaphor of something else in my life. Please excuse the rhyming I know it's a little strained.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 4-3-06 - Published: 4-3-06
14. Silent Fire reviews
This isn't a very skillfully written poem, but yeah. I wrote this about a year ago in math class of course about an experience, or rather a feeling I've experienced.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 3-31-06 - Published: 3-31-06
15. Moments reviews
As I've already established, I'm not a very skillful poet, and there is really nothing beautiful or enticing about this poem, except that it tells a truth that I've found to be more and more accurate.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-31-06 - Published: 3-31-06
16. The Sky is Blue reviews
This is a poem that I wrote while staring out the window of my math class on a cloudless day. It doesn't all make sense, but I hope you'll enjoy it anyway.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 3-31-06 - Published: 3-31-06
17. Words of the Sea reviews
Yes, this is yet another poem I wrote long ago, so parts of it are rough, but overall, I like it. Hope you will.
Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-21-06 - Published: 2-21-06
18. To Ride on the Wind reviews
Mystical riders set off on a journey and leave the world behind them. Honestly, I'm not much of a poet, but of all my feeble poetry, this is my favorite!
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-17-06 - Published: 2-17-06
19. Scared reviews
A short piece I wrote for English a coulple years ago, mind you that I thought would be fun to read, so enjoy
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,239 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-16-06 - Published: 2-16-06
20. All Seeing Eyes reviews
This is just a sonnet I wrote for English (but nothing romantic, I promise) so I hope you enjoy it.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-16-06 - Published: 2-16-06
21. Taking Flight reviews
The title pretty much says it all. This is a clip from a longer story I hope to write soon. It's my first piece on here so please R/R and tell me if I should continue. I'll return the favor!
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 2-6-06 - Published: 2-6-06
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