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Author has written 18 stories for Romance, General, Thriller, and Mystery. My #1 policy: Review me and I'll do the same. So, I used to have a long profile on this site, but had decided to leave, and erased my profile. Umm, since I guess I'm back for now after taking a break from writing, I don't have much to say. Alright, that's a lie. I do have a few things to say, and the first is thanks to some top nominating (in my opinion) writers on this site that reviewed me. Beginning with Mosaic Stains Comawhite13's Wolfblood82 Itse SirScott Running To Stand Still, Anaare And Terrance Rivendarb's famous story: Funny Business They're all awesome. Check them out, you won't die. And that's not an order, it's a suggestion. Upcoming Stories: Echo When Stupid Came to Dinner Sexpert My Stories in current progress are: They All Fall Down: The Date Book: Fairies Retold: (Will be updated irregularly) The Rebound: (SKOW Challenge) Dumb Blonde: (Updated irregularly) As for my stories, the completed ones are: Not a Moment Too Soon: My Shorts are: Masquerades of Deception: Individuality Ramified: The Sweetest Rejection: Secrets in the Air: Ending Shakespeare: If Only: The Chop: Pretty Pretty Cruel: Welcome to the Dollhouse: Disturbia: TipToe: I make a note to people who don't agree about a certain rating in a story. All of my stories are rated for a reason, that doesn't mean that you can't read it, but expect it to be different. Other than that I only want to state that I don't mind "Constructive Criticism". Every writer needs the help, but what I don't want is somebody that believes they're the best writer. Where I come from, we say that if you're going to be like that, then step the fuck off. I say that because I think that a lot of people have actually forgotten that everything is a learning experience, and in order to get respect, that we have to respect one another. Meaning, and I'll break it into "Dummy Terms". If you want to tell me something about my writing or story, cultivate yourself to be polite. If you feel my story sucks, you can tell me so, but I'd honestly prefer if you said it politely. I wouldn't tell you in a jackass manner that your story sucks. I'd suggest to you how to better it. If you can't do that, then I redirect you to the paragraph up ahead. As well, I hate dumb reviewers. Ask me what that means. No, I literally mean people that read a story, and don't take the time to try and understand it because they don't want to. If you're going to do that with my story, please try to understand it to an extent. Most of my stories have an underlining meaning that the biggest simpleton could get if they took the time. I'm not calling anyone a simpleton, but if you apply to that, I wasn't the one that cast you in that group. Oh, and I'm not only asking for myself but every writer. Feel free to look at my other account for poetry: Just to add, I'm a member of Youngwriters101 Forums that I visit a lot: But check this out, (\_/)(")_(") I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal pweor of the hmuan mnid. Aoccdrnig to a rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm. Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe. Amzanig huh? Yaeh and I awlyas tohguht slpeling was ipomrantt! tahts so cool! If you cuold raed taht put it in yuor pfoirle. | |||||||||||
1. The Date Book » reviewsYour mother lied. Romance is chess and you're a pawn, some joke, huh? But I'll fix that. I've written The Date Book just to get you through this rough patch in life.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 20 - Words: 65,790 - Reviews: 226 - Updated: 4-24-09 - Published: 7-24-082. TipToe reviewsIt crawls through me, tingling the stiff bones as it weasles through the marrow and outwards. This tip-toe sensation comforts me with happiness, yet it's all still relative.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 982 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 2-24-09 - Published: 2-24-093. They All Fall Down » reviewsSecrets lived everywhere, surviving on the guilts of the people that bore them, along with ghosts. And in a new town there was only room enough for one. So, if there was no such thing as ghosts, why was she seeing one?Mystery - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 5 - Words: 15,255 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 2-10-09 - Published: 12-19-084. The Rebound » reviewsCainell was happy with herself. 59 percent masculine over feminine, she was one of the guys. That was until the girlfriend of her adopted brother's friend, Talbot, hit on her, and he confided his troubles in her. Rebounds aren't fouls, right?Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 16 - Words: 55,677 - Reviews: 103 - Updated: 2-10-09 - Published: 12-10-075. Dumb Blonde » reviewsThe customer's always right. That was the policy for CVS, but what they had forgotten to mention was the customers were always wrong. They took one look at her and assumed that she was stupid and dumb. Was that because she was blonde?General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Parody - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,852 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 12-10-08 - Published: 8-21-086. Fairies Retold » reviewsWhat if the duckling wasn't ugly, Red had no hood, or the little mermaid couldn't sing? If Beauty was the Beast, and Sleeping Beauty wasn't actually sleep? Would it be okay, or would you be too afraid to venture into a world of fairies retold?General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,667 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 8-20-08 - Published: 6-16-087. Count 2 Three » reviewsEvery romance has its own story... For them, theirs was being born on opposite sides of the spectrum in modern life as well as being in similar predicaments that demanded their attention. The only thing to do, count to three.Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 63,771 - Reviews: 100 - Updated: 8-20-08 - Published: 8-9-078. Disturbia reviewsShe smirked at him. "If I guess it right will you promise me something?" she asked. She had already bought him a drink, what more was there that she wanted?Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,800 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 8-17-08 - Published: 8-17-089. Welcome to the Dollhouse reviewsShe hated her cursed curls and perfect image, it made her feel like a doll.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 8-12-08 - Published: 8-12-0810. Pretty Pretty Cruel reviewsYou're pretty," he said to her, "Pretty ugly."Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 698 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 7-12-0811. The Chop reviewsIt wasn't a dance or happy jive, it was real. She wanted to see him die, choke.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 590 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-2-08 - Published: 5-2-0812. Masquerades of Deception reviewsFor every masquerading person, there lies deception, and for every deception, there lies more than one truth, and for every truth there lies consequence.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 883 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 10-19-0613. Individuality Ramified reviewsShe had watched her friend get killed by another person that she knew, only nothing was as it seemed... Nothing ever is.Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,034 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 9-23-06 - Published: 9-23-0614. The Sweetest Rejection reviewsThe sweetest rejection, is the rejection that comes at an abrupt moment. The sweetest rejection, is the rejection that is least expected, and it is the only correct rejection.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 365 - Reviews: 49 - Updated: 9-10-06 - Published: 9-10-0615. Not A Moment Too Soon » reviewsKevin Warner's a loser and well aware of it, yet in one day his life takes a turn for the best...and worst. After events which are decision altering, he changes his mind about the way he's living his life.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,056 - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 8-18-06 - Published: 8-16-0616. Secrets in The Air reviewsSecrets are supposed to be kept quiet, and some are better that way.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 514 - Reviews: 40 - Updated: 5-23-06 - Published: 5-23-0617. Ending Shakespeare reviewsNobody ever told the truth, but he didn't die of natural causes.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,200 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 5-10-06 - Published: 5-10-0618. If Only reviewsHave you ever loved someone enough to not confront them about it, but your wishes seem to get the best of you that your mind won't allow?Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,060 - Reviews: 30 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
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