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since: 02-06-06, id: 512321, Profile edited: 07-25-08
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Author has written 13 stories for General, Romance, and Thriller.

My #1 policy: Review me and I'll do the same.

So, I used to have a long profile on this site, but had decided to leave, and erased my profile. Umm, since I guess I'm back for now after taking a break from writing, I don't have much to say. Alright, that's a lie. I do have a few things to say, and the first is thanks to some top nominating (in my opinion) writers on this site that reviewed me.

Beginning with Mosaic Stains

Who I would suggest that people take a look at her story: Fragment Pieces of Life's Sonnet

The Breakdancing Ninja,

Wolfblood82

For his many great fantasies

Itse

Her many stories are worth the read

SirScott

For the most live fiction there is to read

Running To Stand Still,

For her elaborative, great stories

Anaare

For the many famous Joria

And Terrance Rivendarb's famous story: Funny Business

They're all awesome. Check them out, you won't die. And that's not an order, it's a suggestion.


Upcoming Stories:

When Stupid Came to Dinner:

--(No summary yet)

My Stories in current progress are:

Fairies Retold: (Will be updated irregularly)

--What if the duckling wasn't ugly, Red had no hood, or the little mermaid couldn't sing? If Beauty was the Beast, and Sleeping Beauty wasn't actually sleep? Would it be okay, or would you be too afraid to venture into a world of fairies retold?

The Rebound:

--Cainell was satisfied with herself. 59 percent more masculine than she was feminine, she wasn't hanging with the guys, she was one of them. That was until the girlfriend of her adopted brother's friend, Talbot, hit on her and he confided his troubles in her. Rebounds aren't fouls, right?

Count 2 Three:

--Every romance has its own story... For them, theirs was being born on opposite sides of the spectrum in modern life as well as being in similar predicaments that demanded their seperate attention. The only thing to do, count to three.

As for my stories, the completed ones are:

Not a Moment Too Soon:

--Kevin Warner's a loser and well aware of it, yet in one day his life takes a turn for the best...and worst. After events which are decision altering, he changes his mind about the way he's living his life.

My Shorts are:

Masquerades of Deception:

--For every masquerading person, there lies deception, and for every deception, there lies more than one truth, and or every truth there lies consequence.

Individuality Ramified:

--She had watched her friend get killed by another person that she knew, only nothing was as it seemed... Nothing ever is.

The Sweetest Rejection:

--The sweetest rejection, is the rejection that comes at an abrupt moment. The sweetest rejection, is the rejection that is least expected, and it is the only correct rejection.

Secrets in the Air:

--Secrets are supposed to be kept quiet, and some are better that way.

Ending Shakespeare:

--Nobody ever told the truth, but he didn't die of natural causes.

If Only:

--Have you ever loved someone enough to not confront them about it, but your wishes seem to get the best of you that your mind won't allow?

The Chop:

--It wasn't a dance or happy jive, it was real. She wanted to see him die, choke.

Pretty Pretty Cruel:

--"You're pretty," he said, "pretty ugly."


I make a note to people who don't agree about a certain rating in a story. All of my stories are rated for a reason, that doesn't mean that you can't read it, but expect it to be different.

Other than that I only want to state that I don't mind "Constructive Criticism", every writer needs the help, but what I don't want is somebody that believes they're the best writer. Where I come from, we say that if you're going to be like that, then step the fuck off. I say that because I think that a lot of people have actually forgotten that everything is a learning experience, and in order to get respect, that we have to respect one another. Meaning, and I'll break it into "Dummy Terms", if you want to tell me something about my writing or story, cultivate yourself to be polite.

If you feel my story sucks, you can tell me so, but I'd honestly prefer if you said it politely, being I wouldn't tell you in a jackass manner that you story sucks. I'd suggest to you how to better it. If you can't do that, then I redirect you to the paragraph up ahead.

As well, I hate dumb reviewers. Ask me what that means. No, I literally mean people that read a story, and don't take the time to try and understand it because they don't want to. If you're going to do that with my story, please try to understand it to an extent. Most of my stories have an underlining meaning that the biggest simpleton could get if they took the time. I'm not calling anyone a simpleton, but if you apply to that, I wasn't the one that cast you in that group.

Oh, and I'm not only asking for myself, but every writer.

Feel free to look at my other account for poetry:

Symphonious

Just to add, I'm a member of Youngwriters101

Writers Abound

Reviewers-Found

Reviewers Kingdom

But look at these,

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The Date Book:

--Your mother lied. Romance is chess and you're a pawn, some joke, huh? There's nothing you can do about it. But I'll fix that. I've written The Date Book.




1. The Date Book » reviews
Your mother lied. Romance is chess and you're a pawn, some joke, huh? But I'll fix that. I've written The Date Book just to get you through this rough patch in life.
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,430 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-24-08 - Published: 7-24-08
2. The Rebound » reviews
Cainell was happy with herself. 59 percent masculine over feminine, she was one of the guys. That was until the girlfriend of her adopted brother's friend, Talbot, hit on her, and he confided his troubles in her. Rebounds aren't fouls, right?
Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 37,404 - Reviews: 68 - Updated: 7-20-08 - Published: 12-10-07
3. Count 2 Three » reviews
Every romance has its own story... For them, theirs was being born on opposite sides of the spectrum in modern life as well as being in similar predicaments that demanded their attention. The only thing to do, count to three.
Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 17 - Words: 58,216 - Reviews: 94 - Updated: 7-18-08 - Published: 8-9-07
4. Pretty Pretty Cruel reviews
You're pretty," he said to her, "Pretty ugly."
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 658 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 7-12-08
5. Fairies Retold » reviews
What if the duckling wasn't ugly, Red had no hood, or the little mermaid couldn't sing? If Beauty was the Beast, and Sleeping Beauty wasn't actually sleep? Would it be okay, or would you be too afraid to venture into a world of fairies retold?
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,728 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-16-08 - Published: 6-16-08
6. The Chop reviews
It wasn't a dance or happy jive, it was real. She wanted to see him die, choke.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 551 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-2-08 - Published: 5-2-08
7. Masquerades of Deception reviews
For every masquerading person, there lies deception, and for every deception, there lies more than one truth, and for every truth there lies consequence.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 825 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 10-19-06 - Published: 10-19-06
8. Individuality Ramified reviews
She had watched her friend get killed by another person that she knew, only nothing was as it seemed... Nothing ever is.
Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,531 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 9-23-06 - Published: 9-23-06
9. The Sweetest Rejection reviews
The sweetest rejection, is the rejection that comes at an abrupt moment. The sweetest rejection, is the rejection that is least expected, and it is the only correct rejection.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 9-10-06 - Published: 9-10-06
10. Not A Moment Too Soon » reviews
Kevin Warner's a loser and well aware of it, yet in one day his life takes a turn for the best...and worst. After events which are decision altering, he changes his mind about the way he's living his life.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,045 - Reviews: 41 - Updated: 8-18-06 - Published: 8-16-06
11. Secrets in The Air reviews
Secrets are supposed to be kept quiet, and some are better that way.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 36 - Updated: 5-23-06 - Published: 5-23-06
12. Ending Shakespeare reviews
Nobody ever told the truth, but he didn't die of natural causes.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,176 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 5-10-06 - Published: 5-10-06
13. If Only reviews
Have you ever loved someone enough to not confront them about it, but your wishes seem to get the best of you that your mind won't allow?
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,045 - Reviews: 28 - Updated: 4-20-06 - Published: 4-20-06
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