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| Master Tananh |
Author has written 25 stories for Thriller, General, Love, Friendship, Biography, Fantasy, Play, and Fantasy. Okay folks, I am Master Tananh. I've got some good stuff on here, and I plan to continue to do so. I think one of my best stories has just been put up here. I'd like to try and get it published and any criticisms would be welcome. It is a very open ended piece that kind of makes the reader decide which side is right. It asks whether morality is always black and white, or if doing evil could be justified. I'm really pleased with it and I hope it's as intense as I visualize it. (A little language. It's kind of a tense situation and I couldn't really picture the characters shouting out "Gee wiz!" in this particular moment. I may have to take some of it out though. Let me know if you think it's excessive.) Just got a good poem up about the state of denial one experiences when betrayed by someone you would have trusted with your life. Put up one from the vaults here a little while ago. I think it's one of the best poems I've ever written. Not as rhythmic but it definitely conveys the longing I was shooting for really well. Probably wrote one of my angriest poems to date yesterday. It's not as structured as my other stuff. A lot more raw and uncontrolled, but I think it helps you feel the emotions the speaker is going through. Definitely different than my usual stuff. Got another of those emo love poems I'm so famous for. What can I say? My life sucks. You should definitely review so at least SOMEthing good can come of my woes. Wrote a new short story called The Young Miller. It was inspired by the Brother's Grimm fairy tales and I tried to model it after one as well. It's my first real shot at fantasy and I think it's pretty fun. As always, review. Wrote a new short story entitled "Out the Window". I'm pretty proud of it actually. My first attempt at a female protagonist. It's a very sad and powerful story that will hopefully move you in some way. Let me know what you think. And of course, check out all of my older stuff too. | |||||||||||
1. Jefferson Avenue reviewsIn the near future a desperate man prepares to murder the most powerful leader in the world...Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,667 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-20-07 - Published: 11-20-072. Where do Nice Guys Finish? reviewsA pledge to be there for the one you care about whether she cares back or not.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-8-07 - Published: 11-8-073. The Close Friend reviewsWhen you simply accept that the one you care about doesn't feel the same way. The frustration of watching her chase someone who doesn't treat her right. The resolve to be there for her anyway. Even if as just a close friend.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-7-07 - Published: 10-7-074. Stings of Betrayal reviewsWhen the person you trusted the most takes what you wanted more than anything.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-3-07 - Published: 8-3-075. Halfway Living reviewsExpresses the longing and frustration one feels when your best friend is happy with the way things are but you want so much more.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-4-07 - Published: 6-21-076. Vampire reviewsAbout the one who takes everything from you and leaves you with nothing but emptiness and resentment.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-17-07 - Published: 6-8-077. Crying for Apathy reviewsWhen you've been burned so many times you just don't want to feel anymore...Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-30-07 - Published: 5-30-078. The Young Miller reviewsThe tale of a young miller who falls hopelessly in love with the most beautiful woman in all the land. He faces many obstacles to win her hand, including a cunning hermit, a mighty dragon, and a greasy Count. Based on a true story. Well not really. Kinda.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,651 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-2-07 - Published: 3-31-079. The Last Poem reviewsSometimes the best thing is to let go.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-25-07 - Published: 3-25-0710. Out the Window reviewsThe emotional journey of a broken old woman who spends her days in solitude, looking out her window in the nursing home waiting for a visit from her son that will never come. Some languageComplete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,023 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-21-07 - Published: 3-21-0711. Plight of the Pirates reviewsA readers theatre I wrote featuring an absent minded pirate, a smooth talking poacher, a talking polar bear, and two very exasperated Englishmen.Complete - Play - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-16-07 - Published: 3-16-0712. The Bastard with the Dreamy Eyes reviewsAbout when the perfect guy decides to go after the one you love.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-1-07 - Published: 3-1-0713. The Worst Emotion reviewsThe deadliest and most destructive feeling anyone can ever have.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-07 - Published: 2-17-0714. She's Not You reviewsAbout when the person you love is not the one you're holding.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-13-07 - Published: 2-13-0715. Isolation » reviewsSix convicts are forced to live among each other on a deserted prison moon. But they are not alone on the supposedly barren moon. Their terms quickly become a desperate struggle for survival as they evade the creature and also try not to kill each other.Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 12,057 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 2-4-07 - Published: 8-13-0616. In the Clouds reviewsA quirky little poem I wrote one dreary 7th period about why daydreams are so much more fun than real life.Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-8-06 - Published: 12-8-0617. Negligent Mischief reviewsA personal narrative I wrote about the night an innocent game turned into one of the most disastrous nights of my life.Complete - Biography - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,139 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-06 - Published: 10-28-0618. Long Lost Best Friend reviewsA nostalgic look into the past, lamenting the loss of old childhood friends.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-06 - Published: 10-28-0619. Miss Ross reviewsA poem I wrote for my hot substitute teacher. She gave me detention.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-28-06 - Published: 10-28-0620. Shattered Security reviewsAbout the sudden vulnerability one feels after suffering a loss.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-28-06 - Published: 10-28-0621. Unreturned Love reviewsChronicles the frustration one feels when in love with someone who does not love you in kind.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-9-06 - Published: 10-9-0622. Painful Charade reviewsDocuments the emotional roller coaster one feels when hiding love.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-4-06 - Published: 10-4-0623. What Can I Do? reviewsA sad little love poem I wrote a few years ago about a girl who is now long gone from my life.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-25-06 - Published: 8-25-0624. Price of War reviewsThis isn't based on any real war. Just a random Civil War I made up.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 480 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-5-06 - Published: 8-5-0625. Malicious Company reviewsA friendly old man living a few miles out from a town haunted by a serial killer is held at knifepoint in his own home by a sinister visitor.Complete - Thriller - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,025 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-5-06 - Published: 8-5-06
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