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Ryetheil
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since: 03-05-06, id: 515691, Profile Updated: 06-24-09
country: United States
Author has written 2 stories for Fantasy, and Fable.

Sup,

What's up people. I guess i'm just an average college kid looking to do something with my free time. Writing is a passion of mine and i've always written stuff and have a creative mind. Even back in elementary school, for english assignments I was cooking up the best stories! I have written quite a few novel length stories but they always seem to go unfinished. I am making it a personal dream of mine to publish my novels (but first I have to finish them! >.

That means that I am a serious writer. I correct my work and put alot of thought into writing something. Thats why it takes me such a long time to update and write. I want to make sure that i'm getting my story straight. So far I have these stories: Light (finished), Broken light (finished), Brothers of light (working), Last chance (fanfiction finished), Returned (fanfiction working), A Tale between friends (finished), For Hope (working), The Council of Five (working) and Knights, Sisters, and a Scribe (working). Here are some descriptions of them. See if you like them!And If you would like a better description let me know. Each is an individual work that focuses on different concepts and different worlds. Some are humerous, others action packed, one is spiritual, while the other is a tragedy. If I ever finish them and edit them I believe that they will be literature not just stories! Help me perfect them, read and review! And if a story sounds interesting and is not put on my page and you would like to read it let me know!


History of the Light Trilogy:

Broken Light is the first real story I had ever written. It was made to be a fun story about dreams, dragons, people, and fantasies. But after I had written it, I wanted to make a story that told of the characters pasts. This way you could see what they were like. That's where the story Light came along. It was written after Broken Light but is supposed to take place before Broken light. My ideas began forming and my favorite characters began to change, after I had written Light I knew I wanted to make a trilogy of it. I then started on the third book, Brothers of Light. I got a good way into it before I fell loose from it, wrote the best dramatic scene, and left it to collect dust. Looking back at it now, I find that I want to change the whole theme of the trilogy which requires major editing on Light, a whole face lift and plastic surgery on Broken Light, and a finshed product of Brothers of light. I started reworking it when I realized that I wrote it about four years ago and my style of writing has gone through a major break through. And lets face it, the light trilogy needs major extreme editing. I'll have to start almost completly over. But for the most part the current themes or future themes are these:

Light: Dragons...people...life...It all started with the gift of life. Three brothers were sent down from heaven to govern the great redwood forest of the world. But they came as babies, nothing but hatchlings. They were to grow and awaken at the base of the redwoods when the time was right. But the land would not rest easy. The great governing power of the brothers was yet to be established. The dark creature Shimokata, began reaping souls faster than ever. The dark bat spirit creates deals with the living and takes root inside their souls. Eventually the host is consumed by the parasite. But there is resistance to his evil ways. The brothers were destined to stop him. But when the time came for the brothers of peace to hatch, conflict arose. The young dragon Ryetheil, stumbles across the eggs in a desperate attempt to escape the beasts that chase him. But in this new and frightneing world the brothers are in danger of extinction. Only able to take one of the baby beasts, the dragon Ryetheil brings him back to the Dragon mountains where treachery and disaster loom. Zikolie grows up in a world set apart from what he was supposed to know. Stretching the limits of reality and boundries Zikolie even dares to befriend a human girl and bring her back to the dragon mountains. But the mountains are uneasy as the leading dragons in the dragon council find Shimokata at their doorstep. Can the brother, Zikolie, saved and raised by dragons, be able to fullfill his destiny to bring peace to the world or will he get caught up in the affairs of a mortal life? Even he is unsure of what he is supposed to do. His innocence will be challenged as will the lives of his friends.(Fantasy/action/adventure based)

Broken Light: (This story line is bound for change so its hard to say but based upon my first writing and what I would like it to be, this is it) There was once a family, just like any other. They were each blessed with their own special gift as were the other children of the village. But the world is rising into a reblleion. Not by humans, but by the beasts. Driven from their home two sisters are thrown into a world they never saw coming. One where their past and history are brought to life. They were given their gifts by dragon blood and now they will return to the dragons themselves. Meanwhile, The once young Ryetheil is now aged and the leader of the dragon mountains. His son Harnash is to inherit the land. But something has started to change. Shimokata's presence still lurks within the shadows. The beasts are following under his dark shadow and aim to destroy all of the dragons that once opposed them. But now two things are missing that were crucial to peace. Zikolie, the great Guardian of life...is gone. (Fantasy/action/adventure based) (I haven't looked at this story for a long time but rewritting these intro's are makeing my blood run fast! To bad the storys have yet been revised to match the intro!)

Brothers of Light: Surving the years that had been stolen from them, time once again tries to start what it had kept frozen for so long. The long lost Brothers Zakano and Tusu have awakened. They too have taken up their rightful role as oncoming rulers of not just the animal kingdom but of man as well. But something has changed and they are living mortal lives. Their destiny has been changed. Their dragon friend Zalon is also facing tough times. The adopted son of Ryetheil, and apprentince to Harnash, this young Eon dragon will have the greatest challenge of all. But the worst of their nightmares have come alive. Shimokata has taken his original bodily form. But his host Shimo has started to grow. What once was obident is becoming free. But what happened in the past, how did this all come to be? One thing is for certain, this last battle may be the last these creatures have ever seen... (Action/Adventure/Fantasy based)

Others

A Tale Between Friends: This is a story that I wrote during the school year. I had my friends in mind when I made it, some of which I've lost track of and broken apart since I've been to College. When I post it again I will make it more cohesive and story like instead of fragments with jokes you may not understand. But I believe it is a good story non the less. This particular one is people based. the world is different than what we know of it. People are not the dominant species, they never were. Magical creatures of every and all kind inhabit the Earth but for some reason they are coming together, rising up against the people. After invading territory, destroying the land, and polluting the world the creatures are developing an unanutral hatred for the homosapieans. The government can see this rage and created a series of schools to stop the uprising. These schools take in young students of a high school age and teach them the ways of becoming a tamer. Tamers, equpied with whips, are taught how to capture and control beasts. And those not strong enough for the whip learn of other careers in the animal world. A group of friends who reside at the school are beinging to see faults within the school system. They are begining to see the school for what it really is. A training camp for an army against he creatures. Is there time for the friends to realize what is going on through this centurys old Taming system? Or will the creatures rage explode before it can be contained?

For Hope: Have you ever wondered what it would be like if your emotions were real? What it would be like if spring had a physical form and trotted upon the Earth? If Death stalked you as you walked down the street? Most people haven't. It's because these wonderous beasts choose to stay hidden. To see them is taboo. To interact with them forbidden. In fact, they arn't even considered real. But what can you do if they decided to interact with you? A young girl finds herself in this situation when she stumbles upon a forbidden sight. She witnesses Death reaping a soul. Outcasted by her village upon finding out the knowledge of what she has seen, a sudden hatred brews within the people. But Creil knows something else is going on. Befriending the mysterious beast Death, Creil sets out to find the truth with her friend Jake. But what they find is most disturbing. Someone is killing off the seasons and breaking the boundries of the known world. With the taboo broken, the dark creature, also known in human terms as Evil, is trying to dethrone the Savior Life and take control of the world. Together Death, Creil, and Jake set out to save the four seasons before Death has a chance to win. But the legendary beasts have secrets that the companions have yet to understand. They are able to take form as humans. but Death takes his human to far as he tries to understand this new human world around him. Confused and frightened Death will try to steal his mind and his heart because when you control Death, you control everything...(Fantasy/love/tragedy). (A personal favorite but currently on hold as I work on "Knights")

Knights, Sisters, and a Scribe: "I heard the swords clashing in my dreams. The silver of the blades would flash before my eyes, carrying the deep red of the blood of their enemies. Following the swing a spray of the crimson life drippled onto my face. If only I had been fast enough to realize that this blood was my own." -the creative storybook thoughts of a scribe.

Tage, a young scribe, has worked deligently for the church for months. Able to freely do as she pleases, the young adult has found her place of rest within the house of God. It was like a home. A place where she was loved and felt most at peace, a second home. She even found time to write her own thoughts upon the parchment in the dusk of day. But destiny has been put into motion and the once peaceful city of Galcoast is about to be shaken by it's core. A murderer has come to the city gates. Killing off members of the church, this killer is looking for something. Something that would cost many their lives, an unspeakable power that has descended upon the earth from the great heavens above. His calling card is a bloody cross etched into the chest of his victum where there own Red cross ensignia once laid. Palentine, the paranoid and dark governor, of Galcoast has also shaken the world with which Tage has once lived. Stripping her of her holy oath, he has taken her for his own to work as a historian. But his obessesion with power does not easily fall over the scribes family. Now a new troop is forced to form as the people try to survive in this time of crisis. Set on a journey across the land, Tage and her companions must decided whether to save themselves or stop the killings once and for all. But the biggest probelm is that the murderer... is closer than anyone would have expected to reaching his goal.

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1. KNIGHTS, Sisters, and a Scribe » reviews
The medieval time of Knights, castles, and swords has filled the land and the Thantos family tries to make a living. But something happened in the town of Galcoast. A serial killer is running free, searching for the hidden power of the archangel Gabrial
Fable - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 27 - Words: 88,157 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-30-09 - Published: 1-3-09
2. For Hope » reviews
Death, Life, Spring, Summer, Winter, Fall...All Are real and in physical form. Bound in forms similar to animals, the Saviors, Guardians, and Knights walk the Earth unseen and hidden. But a troubled girl finds that for some reason, the seasons are moveing
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 22,018 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-17-08 - Published: 8-17-08
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