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| Julian Toepfer |
Author has written 82 stories for Song, Love, and Life. REVIEWS MAKE ME HAPPY!! Writing is my way of opening my heart. Feedback and reviews make my day! A profile eh? I suppose I can try my hand at that... I'm an uninteresting 23 year old guy. I've had my heart broken beyond repair, as evidenced by my work below. I'm currently writing a graphic novel based on my ordeals, and it will hopefully be finished within the year. I'm an art major at Slippery Rock University in western PA. I'm pretty much anti-social and have few friends, unless you mean the ones I make up. They all like me alot. I have an unrealistic dream of being in a rock and roll band one day. Most of the stuff I have on here are songs I've written for that very purpose. Not that it will ever happen, but I can dream... I love music. No country, no rap. Biggest inspirational bands are probably Cold, Rush, NIN, Pink Floyd and Jeff Buckley. Other interests include: Art; obviously poetry; scary/depressing movies; nature (particularly the ocean); staying up late and doing nothing productive; scuba diving; baseball; Spider-man; kyaking; Tim Burton; drinking alcohol; etc etc. Things I hate include (but are not limited to): Sloths; people that snore really loud; backstabers; boybands; Bill O'Rilley; man-whores; wet towels; bugs; pens that run out of ink; NasCar; close minded people etc etc. What if everything around you - Trent Reznor - | |||||||||
1. Quarantine reviewsLove in the time of pandemic...Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-2-09 - Published: 6-2-092. I Found Out reviewsThe space I've got to find myself is bending in half again...Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-17-09 - Published: 3-17-093. Manhattan reviewsWe try to say with confidence that we're picking up oblivion.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-25-09 - Published: 2-25-094. Full reviewsThis is about accepting who you are. Even when you hate yourself for it.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-4-08 - Published: 12-4-085. Vacant Entity reviewsThere is a hole where my heart should be. I am incapable of feeling anything anymore.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-13-08 - Published: 11-13-086. One Million Miles Tall reviewsHow did it really feel to take someone's life?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-6-08 - Published: 8-6-087. That Isn't Me reviewsLast night I was brushing my teeth, and I had a strange encounter with the reflection in the mirror.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-22-08 - Published: 6-22-088. Right Beside Me reviewsIs there anyone there at all?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-11-08 - Published: 6-11-089. The Muse reviewsWake up the muse.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-12-08 - Published: 5-12-0810. This Is The First Day Of My Last Day reviewsI am in a place that I don't want to be.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-17-08 - Published: 4-17-0811. The Future of Auto FireWhat it boils down to, is anger.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-7-08 - Published: 4-7-0812. The BeginningI am afraid of what I am capable of. We all should be.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-3-08 - Published: 4-3-0813. I Don't Know reviewsThis is the answer to all the questions.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-31-08 - Published: 3-31-0814. Contagion reviewsSometimes I wonder if there is a cure for this.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-20-08 - Published: 3-20-0815. Somewhere Else In Time reviewsNow I know that you were never here the same time I was.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-6-08 - Published: 3-6-0816. Revulsion reviewsAt some point, revenge becomes that much more appealing.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-18-08 - Published: 2-18-0817. SumZero reviewsAnd all we ever were, just zeros and ones."Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-17-08 - Published: 2-17-0818. RetentionThe imprint is always there.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-0819. There Is A Place I Stay reviewsThe place I stay is turning on me now.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-7-08 - Published: 1-7-0820. Pantomime reviewsMaybe nothing is wrong with the world. Maybe the only thing that's wrong is me.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-29-07 - Published: 12-29-0721. The Infiltrator reviewsThe infiltrator is the most dangerous. Their goal is to gain the trust of their target, and bring it down from the inside.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-1-07 - Published: 12-1-0722. Meet Your MakerEver have one of those moments when you just want to snap on someone?Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 11-28-07 - Published: 11-28-0723. The Great Metamorphosis reviewsI know I'm not the same person I used to be, but I don't know who I am now.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-25-07 - Published: 11-25-0724. Vindicated reviewsIt never fails to amaze me how some people can justify the things they do.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-24-07 - Published: 11-24-0725. It's Happening reviewsI think this poem discribes me better than anything else I've ever written. I guess you could say this is me in a nutshell.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 11-3-07 - Published: 11-3-0726. Remedy reviewsShe is the cure for my painless day.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - Esperanto - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-31-07 - Published: 10-31-0727. Try reviewsI wrote this with a very driving and steady beat in mind. I was just experimenting with using a singular rhyme scheme throughout the entire thing to make it seem very focused and driven. Reviews are welcome...Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-29-07 - Published: 10-29-0728. ReptileThe reptile is coldblooded and unforgiving. It represents all that is primal and without concious.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-19-07 - Published: 10-19-0729. For Your LifeGoodbyes dont matter like you think they do anyway.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-15-07 - Published: 10-15-0730. SkinI wrote this for the scars on her arms. I hope with everything in me their healed for good.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-14-07 - Published: 10-14-0731. AfflictionI'll never know how she became so sick.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-10-07 - Published: 10-10-0732. The Place That RemainsI found out that there's a place inside me that doesn't feel pain. It's just a numb and caloused shell that's drifted closer and closer to the surface.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-9-07 - Published: 10-9-0733. A Life ApartJust feeling lonely and thinking about the past. I know I think about things too much for my own good, but I cant help it.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 10-6-07 - Published: 10-6-0734. Before Everything Else reviewsAnother spontanious song. I was just thinking that it was bad enough to have my heart stepped on without watching her change into a complete stranger. It sucks to realize the person you loved so much is completely gone forever.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-3-07 - Published: 10-3-0735. Run reviewsThis is a piece that I just sort of wrote without any serious thought process. Sometimes my better work starts out that way. I think it has a pretty strong rhythem behind it, so tell me what you think.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-1-07 - Published: 10-1-0736. See You There reviewsInfluenced by a Bosch painting I saw. Some people seem to dirive some sort of power trip over causing misery. I hope they get what they have coming soon.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-25-07 - Published: 9-25-0737. Crooked Head reviewsI'm in the process of repressing some memories, but some are especially hard to shake.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-24-07 - Published: 9-24-0738. The Shadows Smile reviewsSometimes I find myself having conversations with absolutely no one. Their often the most gratifying ones.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-22-07 - Published: 9-22-0739. Ms F'ked Me Up reviewsThis is what her name should be...Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-12-07 - Published: 9-12-0740. Ode To It All reviewsSometimes I struggle with my concept of what happens, and what is allowed to happen.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-5-07 - Published: 9-5-0741. Creatures reviewsWith all of man's creation and self emulated glory, it's easy to forget we are still just animals watching our lives from afar.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-5-07 - Published: 9-5-0742. Beauty reviewsBeauty creates obsession.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-3-07 - Published: 9-3-0743. Secrets reviewsThere's really only 1 secret. What happens after this?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 9-3-07 - Published: 9-3-0744. Forever? reviewsI wonder when 'forever' really starts.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-0745. Unordinary Nocturne reviewsSometimes just walking into a room is enough to make it all come back. I hate it when that happens.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-2-07 - Published: 9-2-0746. DeviloutionHave you ever watched someone change right before your eyes?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-30-07 - Published: 8-30-0747. HallelujahHallelujah: noun An exclaim of thankfulness and appriciation usually having a spiritual or religious theme.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-23-07 - Published: 8-23-0748. With YouEverything I ever wanted started with your name.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-22-07 - Published: 8-22-0749. No reviewsYou can't cry victim anymore.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-21-07 - Published: 8-21-0750. Game Shows at 4 amGoing through such a difficult ending, its important to remember all the great times and the great things that we had together. A bunch of random memories are a poor excuse, but I hope that everyone experiences what we had at some time in their life.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-20-07 - Published: 8-20-0751. Death of a StarWhen a star dies, it implodes collapsing inward on itself and pulling other matter along with it. A dead star usually forms a black hole which inhales everything around it into an unknown vortex.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-20-07 - Published: 8-20-0752. Hey reviewsI'm just sick of saying sorry for the way I feel. I've tried to be the understanding one. But somethings are beyond being understood I guess.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-8-07 - Published: 8-8-0753. Inside the SurgeThey say all good things must come to an end. I always wondered why it had to be that way.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-7-07 - Published: 8-7-0754. Vicarious reviewsSometimes I like to just watch people and try to remember when I was as carefree as they seem to be. I hope that one day I'll be able to feel that way again, but right now it doesnt feel like I will.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-6-07 - Published: 8-6-0755. Kill What You FoundSometimes it's hard to decide if I should be hurt about what happened, or if I should just be angry. No, this is not one of my better works, but it felt good to write, and I think it turned out decently. Lemme know what you think...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 348 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-0756. Stumble reviewsI was at the park last week and I happened upon something that brought back alot of memories. This pretty much wrote itself after that. Now that I know it's there, I won't soon go back.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-1-07 - Published: 8-1-0757. Finisher reviewsI wish I could feel something other than this. It's not much fun. But this feeling has obviously chewed me up and spit me out, and I don't like it. R&R please!Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-31-0758. All of This for You reviewsI don't know if this really qualifies as a poem, as it has very little rhyme or measure to it. Its sort of a spoken word piece and I really wanted to choose my words carefully. It started out as a bunch of random thoughts, but hopefully i glued it togetheComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-31-0759. May 19, 2007 1:47 am reviewsI'm not sure if this poem really needs a summary, but writing it was very hard for me. Confronting something so dark is never easy. I can only hope that writing this helps and allows me to move on from that horrible evening.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-30-07 - Published: 7-30-0760. Pins reviewsThis is the product of a freewrite I did, and with a bit of tweaking, i got this out of it. Yes, it sucks. This is a more random writing than with most of my work. I paired it with another writing, 'Needles', so its sort of part2. PLEASE review!Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 397 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-16-07 - Published: 7-16-0761. NeedlesIn the dark, eyes closed tight, so far from here is a place where i sleep, and dream in fear. Dream of you, insincere. Bruises black and blue. All alone, love's a lie. Where were you?Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-12-07 - Published: 7-12-0762. Buried Just the SameAnother piece I wrote right from my heart, but I wanted to experiment with another word scheme. I think it turned out pretty well, and I think the finished product is solid. I think it could be set to music pretty well. Reviews as always are welcome.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 7-10-07 - Published: 7-10-0763. Succumb reviewsI'm never very happy with my work, but I actually like this one alot. You may say I'm a wimp, but I cried while writing it. I've been working on it for almost a week and it took a lot of emotion to finally nail it. I'd love to hear what you think.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-8-07 - Published: 7-8-0764. Down the Sun reviewsHaving love and losing it is a really painful thing to go through. Especially when you're still in love. Here's to you.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 7-5-0765. Demons in a Row reviewsI was in a bad mood today, so I wrote a very angry song. I think its ok, but then again I'm never happy with anything I write.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 385 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-07 - Published: 6-25-0766. Halfway Doneim almost halfway done with my life, and some things make you wish you were closer.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-21-07 - Published: 6-21-0767. Inhale reviewsJust a poem I wrote at work about something I'm going through. Yes, I know its pretty bad, but anything you have to say would be most welcome.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-20-07 - Published: 6-20-0768. Can't Make ItA poem about not being able to let go of the best thing in your life. How do you make it through when everything that mattered is gone? I wrote this as a poem, but it could become a song very easily.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-19-07 - Published: 6-19-0769. Two Years Later reviewsA portrait of the last two and a half years, in which I've seen the highest highs, and the lowest lows. The lows are fresher in my mind.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-16-07 - Published: 6-16-0770. Animus reviewsAnimus: noun a feeling of ill will arousing active hostilityComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0771. Except Him reviewsI was at work today and recieved some news that prompted me to write this. Yeah, pretty much this is a load of crap : Feel free to point and laugh. But in fairness, it felt good to write.Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 241 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-13-07 - Published: 6-13-0772. The Hurt You're Looking ForI used this song to vent a few un answered questions about something I don't understand. I woke up this morning with a great tune in my head and the lyrics just poured out. It's different from any other song I've written and I think it's successful overalComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-9-07 - Published: 6-9-0773. Sarafina reviewsI started this about 2 years ago, writing it as a poem of love and salvation. I finish it now with very different results.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 556 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-4-07 - Published: 6-4-0774. Gave It AllI just finished this a day or 2 ago. Its really the first thing I've writen in the better part of 2 years. I really used this piece to vent a whole lot of emotion, and I think it's one of my better songs for it.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0775. Blackbird Skies reviewsAnother depressing song about how far away I feel I am from everything else. This is about 2 years old, and I think its a fairly strong piece. Reading it again makes me all depressed.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0776. Burn Like Timber reviewsI wrote this about 2 years ago, and I guess I consider it a bit of a departure from my usual songwriting style. I had alot of emotion in me when I wrote it, and I remember being very satisfied with it at the time. I think its one of my stronger songs.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0777. Everyday reviewsThis is the earliest thing that I could find to submit. Some of my stuff is just so awful haha. But I have nothing to loose from getting some critisim for it.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0778. Forgive My Stupid Feelings reviewsAnother oldie. I wrote this about 3 years ago and I just uncovered it last week. I really like parts of it, and others not so much. It seems I was destined for heart break even before I was out of high school.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0779. My Own EndingOne of the few songs I've writen about being utterly P.O'd. Again, an older piece, but writing this came really easily to me. I think I sat down and wrote it in about a half hour. That said, I'm sure theres plenty to be fixed.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0780. The Colour of Space reviewsAs with most of my stuff on here, I wrote this a looong time ago. Its probably the crappiest song I've ever writen. But I figured I'd throw it out there and try and use whatever critisism I get to make me a better writer.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 281 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0781. Wasting Good Air reviewsAnother song I wrote about all the wonderful feelings of rejection, confusion and just not knowing why your even here. I actually have music for this one, so I guess its that much closer to actually becoming a reality.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-0782. Where I Belong reviewsThis is a song I wrote a long time ago. As with several of my entries, I wrote them before I really knew what it was like to feel feelings like this. But recently, I looked back on this song, and it was like I was writing it knowing what was to come.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-31-07 - Published: 5-31-07