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Author has written 35 stories for War, Life, Young Adult, General, General, and Nature. My characters are not me. They are their own selves. Unlike me, they swear. Don't insult me with swear words. Don't make assumptions about my age, gender, origin, or, well, anything. I'm anonymous for a reason. The people in my stories are very different from me, so please don't assume and yell these assumptions out. I'd prefer you leave your speculations inside. If I don't correct you, it means nothing. I delete pieces when they get too old, outdated, or I decide they're bad. If you suddenly realize something you liked is gone, well... It means it went to the creative writing afterlife, also known as my external drive. Short stories are cool. Love poems get boring. Let's be original, okay? Tell me if you think something isn't - I hate just ripping other people off. Note: Everyone has room for improvement and I don't think I should stunt some wonderful writing by telling someone that it's not up to par or good. If you're mad at me for a not-so-friendly review I left you, I'm sorry you feel this way and can't take criticism (especially constructive criticism, which is what I'd like to think I write). If you want to leave me a review full of criticism, bashing, and rage, go ahead, but at least make it real stuff, because if it's full of nonsense, I won't pay it any mind, and then I might be missing something deep.Please. If I leave a detailed review, respond in kind. It's the right thing to do. I don't want flattery - I want honesty. -Note- I just finished a year-long project. Of course, now I enter the rigorous editing stage. I'll still bring forth the little goodies that have popped up since but I'll be focusing on this single piece. Poem: Lemons Story: Sonata for Violin and Piano | |||||||
1. Sonata for Violin and Piano » reviewsA duet.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,762 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-23-09 - Published: 4-20-092. Rip reviewsRemembering a person I never knew.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-15-09 - Published: 2-15-093. Łopuchowo Forest reviewsInspired by PolandComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-17-09 - Published: 1-17-094. A Conversation Upon My Return reviewsInspired by PolandComplete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-12-09 - Published: 1-12-095. Stained Glass reviewsBehold this scientist's perfect study.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-26-08 - Published: 9-26-086. Untitled reviewsThere across the river I see the west bank and a not so different child looking at me.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 334 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-26-08 - Published: 9-26-087. Blue Dwarf reviewsScience and old poetry. Their molecular fingertips are cold and dusty.Complete - Nature - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-26-08 - Published: 9-26-088. Lemons reviewsTogether, at least for the moment.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-21-08 - Published: 6-21-089. March reviewsWinter, spring, or summer. The battle continues.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 3-26-08 - Published: 3-26-0810. Clockwork reviewsShe understood.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-22-08 - Published: 3-22-0811. The Slant reviewsThey play in one world and occupy another.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-26-08 - Published: 2-26-0812. February reviewsSpringtime.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-26-08 - Published: 2-26-0813. Her Coma reviewsHe waits in patience for his loved one to awake.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-26-08 - Published: 2-26-0814. The Draft reviewsWarning: Rating is between T and M. Readers who want to avoid stories with violence and swearing might want to consider. We young men, going off to war. Short story.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,664 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-26-08 - Published: 2-26-0815. Birthday Girl reviewsI've been in a coma now for one year. They hope I'll respond, but I don't. And bit by bit it happened, and I remember it all. Everything and everyone. My life. Short story.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,824 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-29-07 - Published: 12-29-0716. Children in the Walls » reviewsFor a moment I saw tired children, trying to live off of the single moment of life I gave them, and then just waiting. Waiting for someone. Children. All of us. Children in the walls. Five chapter story.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,158 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 11-27-07 - Published: 6-5-0717. User 517622 reviewsFor every single one of us who thinks anything about what we post. For everyone who writes poems and stories.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 573 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 10-3-07 - Published: 10-3-0718. Shaking Hands reviewsShaking bodies never stop, never stray from work.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 8-19-07 - Published: 8-19-0719. Beautiful reviewsJust like everybody else.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,041 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 8-19-07 - Published: 8-19-0720. Color reviewsArson is such an ugly word.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-14-07 - Published: 6-14-0721. Lyra Angelica reviewsLyre. Harp. And then she understood. 'No,' she said. 'It's your song now.'Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,753 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-2-07 - Published: 5-2-0722. At the Hallway's End reviewsYou want them to survive. You want them to stay alive. And you're trying, trying not to cry.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 398 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4-24-07 - Published: 4-24-0723. One Year Anniversary reviewsToday is the one year anniversary of my sister Jayla’s death. It’s also the one year anniversary of my mother’s paralysis and my brother’s silence. Short story. Edited without gas station scene.Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,950 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 4-15-07 - Published: 4-15-0724. The Suicide Poem reviewsI alone saw the perverse little smile, flickering on his lips, just before...Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 3-20-07 - Published: 3-20-0725. The Train reviewsThe cold metal barrel of a gun pressed against her head click.Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,803 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-30-07 - Published: 1-30-0726. The Coroner reviewsThe coroner looks, but all he sees is one more dead girl, lying cold and asleep, the results saying overdosed... She had so many choices, and she picked this one.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 421 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-13-07 - Published: 1-13-0727. Beethoven reviewsThe best composer and the piece that made my classical music love grow to this incredible thing I have now. A world of strings, woodwinds and brass...Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 1-6-07 - Published: 1-6-0728. Victim reviewsIt's brave of me to post this here, since it's practically a message to all of you who write poems about wanting to die. Please learn from it.Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 418 - Reviews: 68 - Updated: 10-23-06 - Published: 10-23-0629. A Child reviewsI'm just a kid. Why can't you all remember that?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 415 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 8-22-06 - Published: 8-22-0630. November Woods reviewsCome away with me...Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-23-06 - Published: 6-23-0631. Mother reviewsThere are many stories and poems here on the website about how parents don't understand their children, and how mean they are. And what do you think the parent feels?Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 610 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-0632. Monet reviews"We sat under a blue sky... We took a cliché, And turned it around."General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 368 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 6-13-06 - Published: 6-13-0633. Stanza » reviewsThis epic poem, a poem about history, life, and war, is dedicated to those who have died in these events, for bringing so much to light.War - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 20 - Words: 2,870 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 6-11-06 - Published: 4-29-06
