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BrokenandBeautiful
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since: 04-15-06, id: 520886
Author has written 22 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, General, Nature, General, and Religion.

Hey guys!!!! Here is some stuff about me!!!

Gender: Female :D yippidiefreakingdooo

Looks: Dirty blonde hair, Brownish green eyes, pale skin (tanning doesnt help AT ALL!!), 5' 2" ish...i think, yup pretty average.

My Poems: ummmmm ya my poems are about alot of stuff looking at them again, alot are about my struggle with my Dad's job aka the army. " Unknown", "Is there a point", "Scars" (kind of) ya i guess thats it. I only have lyk a few about what i lyk!! lol but it seems those are my best pieces "Reflection" and "Running Free". the others are mostly about my love life...or whats left of it...ya thats pretty much it.

Likes: I love writing!!! obviousely but ya...my work isnt that good yet but i think i am getting better... ummmm i like oh singing I WAS in SELECT chorus but our stupid teacher only pics people with good last names so GRRRRR. lets see...i lyk thinks that her father knows about this sight ummm butterflys, rainbows, unicorns :D lol ummm ya i m pretty much a normal teenager i lyk hanging with my amazing friends. i lyk music, art even though I am not very good at it. I LOVE THE RAIN!!! i have always wanted to write a poem on it but they always turn out bad...i just wrote one called Reflection which is my best effort so far so ya u can read it when you are done reading my rambles.

Things I dont like: when people are stuck up, when people fish for complements, when people are OBSESSED with me, chearleading i do lyk some cheerleaders but ITS NOT A SPORT...GET OVER IT!!!! my hair... Dr. Pepper, coffee with sugar, THE ARMY, President Bush, alcohol and what it does to people, I dont like it when people use suicide as an attempt to make people feel sorry for them...why_even_both17's family (DIE), soccer, softball, spiders, my hair..oh sorry did i already mention that..., meat, animal abusers, mayo or n e thing like it... whitchcrafty stuff, and some people who shall remain unnamed...there is more but you people are prolly geting annoyed. MOVING ONNNNNN.

MY FRIENDS: you have to check out their stuff they are AMAZING!!!! there is...

Tiara ( forever my favorite cusin and best friend!!!)Bigtina59

Becky (sister 4 life!!!!) why-even-both17,

Rachel DesertMoon,

Courtney XMidnightStarX,

Season: Fall, totally and completely, its soooooo perfect. i feel a poem coming on!!!!

Favorite Animal: PANDA BEAR!!!! omg so flippin cute...

Favorite Color: BRIGHT GREEN...lyk BAM green wow i love it!!!

Some Favorite Quotes: OMG. i have alot of these...my favorite???
" THAT S IS UPSIDE DOWN" screams faith very annoyed!!!!, "NO MORE BODY HEAT FOR YOU!!!!" lol nice Jade. "Wait who's birthday is it???" oy another blonde moment for Emiko, and the newest addition by bigtina59 "...guys will ALWAYS be assholes. Even the sweetest of the sweet, it doesn't matter. As long as they have balls and they know how to use them. They're a$$holes. Ok? " she is amazing and you know it!!!!!!

How I would describe myself: ...I am hyper active, a psycho, but an amazing psycho!!!at times i am depressed but at times i can be the happiest person u have met. ohhhhhhhhhhh i gots a good sentance I am very murcurial in my emotions...i know amazing hu?

Addictions: CAFFINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COFFEE, COFFEE, COFFEE, OH AND MOUNTAIN DEW AND YA...

favorite words: amazing i say that all the time if you didnt notice. i also add my own little touches like aflippingmazing...yes i know i bit scary...you know you love it!!!!!!!!!!!! oh that reminds me my 2nd one is FLIPPING or just flippin...

Yes i think I have said enough!!! dont forget to check out my other AMAZING friends on my favorite authors list!!!! a few last notes..

Once again my poems are new. I am not a very experienced poet. So any of your suggestions will help me greatly. Oh and flames are welcome. I like people to be honest.

p.s. if you would like to read more of my stuff on here, look up My Hideing Place. I have like...4 on there. thanks again!!!

Respect the female race and we promise not to take all of your money when we rule the world.

Wow... where did that come from??? Very sorry...

~Hippie at Heart~


"Falling inside the Black"

By: Skillet (whhhhhhhooooooooo)

Tonight I’m so alone

This sorrow takes ahold

Don’t leave me here so cold

Never want to be so cold

Your touch used to be so kind

Your touch used to give me life

I’ve waited all this time,

I’ve wasted so much time

Don’t leave me alone

Cause I barely see at all

Don’t leave me alone,

I’m Chorus: falling in the black

Slipping through the cracks

Falling to the depths

can I ever go back

Dreaming of the way it used to be

Can you hear me

falling in the black

Slipping through the cracks

Falling to the depths

can I ever go back

Falling inside the black

Falling inside falling inside the black

You were my source of strength

I’ve traded everything

That I love for this one thing

Stranded in the offering

Don’t leave me here like this

Can’t hear me scream from the abyss

And now I wish for you my desire

Don’t leave me alone

cause I barely see at all




1. Alter Call reviews
A part of this Amazing experiance was the alter call. This poem kind of weaklyexplains what happens. Of course I couldnt really get what I was going for here, but tell me what you think n e way.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 10-30-06 - Published: 10-30-06
2. All I want reviews
After and Amazing life changing experiance I have learned that my life should revolve around God. This poem speaks my one true wish, to be closer to God.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-30-06 - Published: 10-30-06
3. October 7, 2006 ch2 reviews
chapter 2 to october 7,2006
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 688 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 10-10-06 - Published: 10-10-06
4. October 7, 2006 reviews
About a school shooting, Fiction of course, Started out as an English Short Story, but evolved to this. R&R please!
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,384 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-7-06 - Published: 10-7-06
5. Live reviews
Its about the choices we can make in life...and what I choose to do...its a bit hard to explain but R&R...maybe you'll like it
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 9-22-06 - Published: 9-22-06
6. When I get to Heaven reviews
Rain doesnt only bring moister and life but something else as well...R&R please
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-06
7. Reflection reviews
I just wanted to write a poem about rain because it is amazing and i have alot of memories about it...this is what came out...i actually like this one...i think R&R please...Flames welcome cringes in a nice way please
Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 7-12-06 - Published: 7-12-06
8. Just Waiting reviews
Just waiting...for something to happen that ruins everything.
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06
9. Unknown reviews
a title basicly about a deployment...any ideas about a title?
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-6-06 - Published: 7-6-06
10. Running Free reviews
One of my happier poems about my love for running. And and explaination as to why I do. Even if you dont like running...u might like it .>
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-5-06 - Published: 7-5-06
11. Scars reviews
About well...scars on the body of life. R&R please
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-4-06 - Published: 7-4-06
12. Pain and Tears reviews
i actually got this idea listening to James Blunt. I cant figure out how to make this better so if you have any suggestions please tell me!
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-1-06 - Published: 7-1-06
13. Truth reviews
Im sorry, I was just doing what I thought was right
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-8-06 - Published: 6-8-06
14. Butterflies reviews
Most peoples butterflies are in thier stomach right? This one is a different point of view. R&R pleaseandthankyou
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-8-06 - Published: 5-8-06
15. When I was with you reviews
When i was with you
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-4-06 - Published: 5-4-06
16. Falling reviews
When someone needs my help, i help them, then i fall for them...
Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-4-06 - Published: 5-4-06
17. Would you think of me reviews
Is this just a dream, or are you real?
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
18. What do you think of me? reviews
What do you think of me?
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
19. Love reviews
Always only in my dreams.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
20. In My Dreams reviews
It's always the same. We'll only ever be friends.
Love - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
21. Happy Face reviews
Just give them that million dollar smile and they'll never know.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
22. Fear of What reviews
I lay here trembling with fear, and I don't know why
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
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