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since: 04-27-06, id: 522405, Profile Updated: 02-19-09
country: United States
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Author has written 9 stories for General, Life, Love, Essay, and Young Adult.

Words should never be forced; when this happens, they lose all meaning.

A little about me is called for I suppose:

I'm currently studying International Business with Honors at FIU in Miami. I'm supposed to graduate in 2010 unless I go on the 5 year plan.
Writing and poetry have always been passions of mine, and I've managed to develop quite the personal collection of works over the years even though I absolutely hate to read. Problem with my work is: I'm one of those people who never lets anyone read things. I haven't published on here in a good while, but came back the other day to see if the site was still running its normal antics. Nothing really has changed.

I've decided to post a few works just because I feel like I should have something for people to look at as long as I'm going to be criticizing all of their work and reading their soul's confessions. Things you might want to look at:

The Window
Theresa E
Together Apart
Light Amidst Darkness

of the junk I've posted, these are the best I think...
I will be posting and reading more often now, so feel free to hit me up for reviews, and drop your 2 cents on all of my stuff when you get the time.

if you feel like stalking me on Facebook, my name is Justin Vizaro. I'm pretty easy to find because I think there's only 1 of me out there.

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1. Light Amidst Darkness reviews
A sonnet done in Shakespearean style, use of metaphor is apparent.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 3-26-08 - Published: 3-26-08
2. Tree of Life
Major Metaphor
Complete - Young Adult - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,025 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-26-08 - Published: 3-26-08
3. The Window reviews
One of my better ones... plays with structural elements as well as what is perhaps my favorite technique: metaphor.
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 3-26-08 - Published: 3-26-08
4. Dissertation on the persuit of knowledge reviews
What is our ultimate purpose? An attempt to answer all of life's questions including the most fundamental.
Essay - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-08 - Published: 3-25-08
5. Theresa E reviews
A celebration of the life of my grandmother, who passed away yesterday. Probably one of my best, and certainly full of poetic elements for all of you poetry scholars.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-25-08 - Published: 3-25-08
6. Together Apart
Surely I'm not the only person who has ever fallen in love with someone else while already in a perfectly healthy and happy relationship with someone you love dearly. Sometimes these things happen, and the best way to deal with your demons is to write...
Complete - Love - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 5-25-07 - Published: 5-25-07
7. Maiden Desire reviews
Your interpretation determines the Fiction Rating, but keep in mind as you read that there must be some reason it was given (M). Try to find the irony in the religious motif, also note the title's duality and symbolism.
Love - Fiction Rated: M - English - Spiritual/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-5-06 - Published: 5-5-06
8. One Day reviews
Metaphor- as always. I don't typically like free verse, and this is one of my only works in that style.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
9. Lasiana reviews
Structure is so important in this piece. There are so many subtleties involved in it. Email me or IM me to truly appreciate everything. Poem itself is about the limits of expression.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-2-06 - Published: 5-2-06
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