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Amalia Jagd
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since: 05-01-06, id: 522948
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Author has written 62 stories for Friendship, Song, Life, Religion, Nature, General, Fantasy, Family, and War.

I'm just an adult girl. I was born and raised in America. :( sadly. I hate it. The past few years, I have gotten to like the internet a lot. I found out that there are really a lot of kids out there that cry every night because their mom and/or dad don't exactly care too much. My heart goes out to them. If you will read some of my poetry, this is the main theme in most of them. I have a mother and father who love me, which I am not too fond of my mother MOST times. But thats a different story. But seeing what my mother has come through, I pray for all those who are sexually, physically and mentally abused, as was my mother. She is the greatest inspiration - seeing someone heal from practically a mental illness. I used to believe prayer didn't change a thing until I found a 15 yr old girl who used to cut and is now loving Jesus. I know my God does answer prayers, considering everything I've been through.

I have recently been enjoying photography. You can probably catch me on AIM or Yahoo Messenger in the late evenings. I love questions and I love to talk, but most of all I like relationships. I have a tiny tiny crush on one man and I absolutely am in love with another man. I'm also interested in dreams/supernatural things.

My favorite style of poetry is a depressive or death/suicide poem... something that really sparks emotions, preferably tears. And I also love poems that tell a short glimpse of a persons life, like straight out. For example, this 10 yr old was raped by her father and she has no friends except for a teddy bear but that's only during the night. My least favorite type of poetry is stuff that gets mushy and all lovey-dovey. I can't stand talking about love, even though I am in love. hehe

"Forgiveness is greater than vengeance; compassion more powerful than anger." -Joseph

My best works:
After A Long Life // As Broken Glass Would Still Show It's Cracks // Comfort
Crying Inside // Guilt // Little Things // Lost Control // Trapped In A Prison

Please, read at least one of my poems, and I'm seriously open to anything you have to comment about. Even if it's that the poem left you speechless (in a good or bad way). I'm just looking for critique, not insults.




1. Emo Mess
when you make one wrong decision, and they never forgive you for it... um yeah. this poem rhymes. i really would appreciate your thoughts on this work.
Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-15-07 - Published: 4-15-07
2. Contemplating Suicide reviews
Hope this catches your attention, because it's not exactly about the stereotypical suicide.
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-07
3. Something Like A Ghost reviews
It's not anything like Casper, or what Scooby Doo is scared of.
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-07
4. My Pictographic Memory
it's about whenever I saw her scars
Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-07
5. Shoot And Miss reviews
a girl takes a shot at death but misses, instead Jesus takes the bullet.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-30-06 - Published: 12-30-06
6. Invasion reviews
It means something religious to me, but it is a simple poem, clearly about an attack. Please R&R.
War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-2-06 - Published: 10-2-06
7. Beautiful Song reviews
a girl sings a song about her sad life.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-2-06 - Published: 10-2-06
8. Comfort song reviews
a song/prayer. i also have a poem named Comfort. i am pleased with this song, which isn't usual.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-1-06 - Published: 10-1-06
9. Bad, Sad, Horrible Me
if you think i have a perfect life, you're wrong.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-06
10. Remembering Prayer reviews
a prayer i wrote about turning back to Christ and Him being my help. it has some words that would be considered explicit.
Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-06
11. Knife Tonight reviews
about cutting. writing this helped me that night to hold back on cutting. i really like this poem.
General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-28-06 - Published: 9-28-06
12. Unmasking » reviews
if i take my mask off, this is what it might be like.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 2 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-6-06 - Published: 7-11-06
13. One Of Her Best reviews
this kind of stuff usually doesn't come from me, but it came. it's a two verse, one chorus song... short.
Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-6-06 - Published: 9-6-06
14. Piece reviews
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-3-06 - Published: 9-3-06
15. Empty Soul reviews
if you understand what it is talking about, which i tried to make obvious, let me know. i wrote it when thinking about a friend and what i found out about her recently.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-3-06 - Published: 9-3-06
16. Diamonds reviews
at points kinda harsh. goes through all borthstones. pretty interesting.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-06
17. Bound Next To Me reviews
i wrote this in like three minutes. it just came out. tell me if it makes sense to you, cuz i know what it talks about and it makes sense to me. please R/R!
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-30-06 - Published: 7-30-06
18. It Could Be Anyone reviews
Matthew 25:34-36
Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-06
19. Feather reviews
the feather is symbolic of my calling/blessing in life. i hope you get the idea.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-23-06 - Published: 7-23-06
20. As Broken Glass Would Still Show Its Cracks reviews
Rated because if under 13, you probably wont understand it. I think this is one of the better ones.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-18-06 - Published: 7-18-06
21. Taken Away reviews
It seems like every time you blink, something bad happens to someone. In this story, Faith, the sister, could be symbolism, but im not sure if it goes too well. please review and tell me what you think.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-18-06 - Published: 7-18-06
22. Save My Breath reviews
death by cryingso much i guess. i dunno. the poem shaped into an arrow pointing down. i thought it was totally neat because it unintentional until i added to last two lines.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-11-06 - Published: 7-11-06
23. Bleed reviews
cutting/SI - phasing out - dying
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-9-06 - Published: 7-9-06
24. Next Year reviews
i was thinking about the good friend i had all this time
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-4-06 - Published: 7-4-06
25. Bug reviews
Rated for one word. It's about how I feel having the place I do in my family.
Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-06 - Published: 7-3-06
26. Grown Into A Rose, But With Thorns reviews
Title should be a sufficient summary.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-2-06 - Published: 7-2-06
27. Secret reviews
similar to my other work, My Deepest Darkest Secret
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-06 - Published: 7-2-06
28. Set Me Free reviews
You'll See! if you get confused, remember "me" and "her" are the same one. I like this one a lot!
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-06
29. Am I Really This Hidden reviews
Just pondering something from the past.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-06
30. Goodbye Kiss reviews
if i were to summarize, it might tell half the story or give away the ending. very suspenseful.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-06
31. I Stand Neutral reviews
standing neutral in a positive and negative world. its feels like it at least.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
32. Promise of Promises
"Little girl, why do you cry... I’ll give you the promise of promises"
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
33. Daydreaming reviews
...daydreaming... la la la
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
34. Sleep reviews
suicidal poem again. it's hard to summarize other than im dying according to a countdown
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
35. My Deepest Darkest Secret reviews
the poet is talking to his/her deepest darkest secret, telling it to not get out, to stay inside.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
36. I Was Bored reviews
A suicidal poem... i was bored and decided to write whatever came out.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
37. Questioning reviews
Just a bunch of questions about a relationship with God.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-06
38. English Poet reviews
written in KJV old british english. i think it's quite interesting... what do you think?
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-24-06 - Published: 6-24-06
39. Trapped In A Prison reviews
rape victim's feelings
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-23-06 - Published: 6-23-06
40. One Way Street reviews
Ever had that moment that lasted only a short short time and you really would like to go back, but life is a one way street and won't let you?
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-06
41. Black Box reviews
My heart is trapped inside a black box. at least give it a shot.
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-19-06 - Published: 6-19-06
42. Last Time Together reviews
Friendship in general - could even be taken religiously I suppose. One stays by another's side... next to his/her deathbed.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-06
43. Entitled One reviews
Random stuff really. After I wrote it though, I noticed it wasn't as random as I thought.
General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-06
44. Emotions Connected To My Poetry reviews
It's about when I feel sorry for myself that no one cares about what I write.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-06
45. Little Things reviews
It only takes one match to burn the whole house down.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-12-06 - Published: 6-12-06
46. That Tree reviews
That tree is my life, its all ive ever known until I died.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-11-06 - Published: 6-11-06
47. Raindrops reviews
Anna is 8 yr old being abused by her parents and... i dont know how to summarize it other than... Raindrops
Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-10-06 - Published: 6-10-06
48. Left Hopeless reviews
Starts off almost emotionless... but ends with something almost anyone can relate to.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-4-06 - Published: 6-4-06
49. Comfort reviews
I dont know where this came from. It's about dying/SI but with a happy tone to it.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-4-06 - Published: 6-4-06
50. Beauty Of A Flower reviews
A girl looks at a flower and ends up by the end of the day seeing her life similar to the flower's.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 5-31-06
51. Perfect Bliss reviews
It seemed as if we were children Having fantasy-like fun Still in our youth Being the lovers of life
Friendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-21-06 - Published: 5-21-06
52. After A Long Life reviews
Life is not known without pain. We will die remembering all our hurt and how we hurt others.
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 5-16-06
53. She Was Called To My Attention reviews
just telling of something that happened a year ago.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
54. No More Baby Wrists reviews
This was really inspired by another poet/poem... This poem tells of the night I first cut my wrist.
General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-06
55. In My Dreams reviews
just sharing about my dreams, which i love most times
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-14-06 - Published: 5-14-06
56. Connect Two reviews
this is a poet's voice... and what he feels and expresses
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-13-06 - Published: 5-13-06
57. It's A Cramped World reviews
See how many aspects of this finite earth/nature you can find. There more than I meant there to be.
Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-8-06 - Published: 5-8-06
58. Lost Control reviews
A prayer I wrote giving up myself to Christ.
Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-06
59. Sisters And Brothers of Suicidal Poetry reviews
If you are suicidal, please read this and tell me what you think.
Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-06
60. Crying Inside reviews
I don't know how to summarize this except for the title explains it all.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-06
61. One Time Hurt Experience reviews
Another experience caused by self-inflicted pain.
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-06 - Published: 5-6-06
62. Guilt reviews
I believe I wrote this after my first time viewing online pornography
Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-6-06 - Published: 5-6-06
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