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Author has written 62 stories for Life, Friendship, Religion, Nature, General, Fantasy, Family, Song, and War. I'm just an adult girl. I was born and raised in America. :( sadly. I hate it. The past few years, I have gotten to like the internet a lot. I found out that there are really a lot of kids out there that cry every night because their mom and/or dad don't exactly care too much. My heart goes out to them. If you will read some of my poetry, this is the main theme in most of them. I have a mother and father who love me, which I am not too fond of my mother MOST times. But thats a different story. But seeing what my mother has come through, I pray for all those who are sexually, physically and mentally abused, as was my mother. She is the greatest inspiration - seeing someone heal from practically a mental illness. I used to believe prayer didn't change a thing until I found a 15 yr old girl who used to cut and is now loving Jesus. I know my God does answer prayers, considering everything I've been through. I have recently been enjoying photography. You can probably catch me on AIM or Yahoo Messenger in the late evenings. I love questions and I love to talk, but most of all I like relationships. I have a tiny tiny crush on one man and I absolutely am in love with another man. I'm also interested in dreams/supernatural things. My favorite style of poetry is a depressive or death/suicide poem... something that really sparks emotions, preferably tears. And I also love poems that tell a short glimpse of a persons life, like straight out. For example, this 10 yr old was raped by her father and she has no friends except for a teddy bear but that's only during the night. My least favorite type of poetry is stuff that gets mushy and all lovey-dovey. I can't stand talking about love, even though I am in love. hehe "Forgiveness is greater than vengeance; compassion more powerful than anger." -Joseph My best works: Please, read at least one of my poems, and I'm seriously open to anything you have to comment about. Even if it's that the poem left you speechless (in a good or bad way). I'm just looking for critique, not insults. | |||||||||
1. Emo Messwhen you make one wrong decision, and they never forgive you for it... um yeah. this poem rhymes. i really would appreciate your thoughts on this work.Complete - Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 4-15-07 - Published: 4-15-072. Contemplating Suicide reviewsHope this catches your attention, because it's not exactly about the stereotypical suicide.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-073. Something Like A Ghost reviewsIt's not anything like Casper, or what Scooby Doo is scared of.Complete - Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-074. My Pictographic Memoryit's about whenever I saw her scarsComplete - Song - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 3-31-075. Shoot And Miss reviewsa girl takes a shot at death but misses, instead Jesus takes the bullet.Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-30-06 - Published: 12-30-066. Invasion reviewsIt means something religious to me, but it is a simple poem, clearly about an attack. Please R&R.War - Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-2-06 - Published: 10-2-067. Beautiful Song reviewsa girl sings a song about her sad life.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 10-2-06 - Published: 10-2-068. Comfort song reviewsa song/prayer. i also have a poem named Comfort. i am pleased with this song, which isn't usual.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-1-06 - Published: 10-1-069. Bad, Sad, Horrible Meif you think i have a perfect life, you're wrong.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0610. Remembering Prayer reviewsa prayer i wrote about turning back to Christ and Him being my help. it has some words that would be considered explicit.Religion - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-29-06 - Published: 9-29-0611. Knife Tonight reviewsabout cutting. writing this helped me that night to hold back on cutting. i really like this poem.General - Fiction Rated: M - English - General/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 9-28-06 - Published: 9-28-0612. Unmasking » reviewsif i take my mask off, this is what it might be like.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 2 - Words: 299 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-6-06 - Published: 7-11-0613. One Of Her Best reviewsthis kind of stuff usually doesn't come from me, but it came. it's a two verse, one chorus song... short.Song - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-6-06 - Published: 9-6-0614. Piece reviewsReligion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-3-06 - Published: 9-3-0615. Empty Soul reviewsif you understand what it is talking about, which i tried to make obvious, let me know. i wrote it when thinking about a friend and what i found out about her recently.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-3-06 - Published: 9-3-0616. Diamonds reviewsat points kinda harsh. goes through all borthstones. pretty interesting.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-0617. Bound Next To Me reviewsi wrote this in like three minutes. it just came out. tell me if it makes sense to you, cuz i know what it talks about and it makes sense to me. please R/R!Friendship - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-30-06 - Published: 7-30-0618. It Could Be Anyone reviewsMatthew 25:34-36Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-25-06 - Published: 7-25-0619. Feather reviewsthe feather is symbolic of my calling/blessing in life. i hope you get the idea.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-23-06 - Published: 7-23-0620. As Broken Glass Would Still Show Its Cracks reviewsRated because if under 13, you probably wont understand it. I think this is one of the better ones.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 7-18-06 - Published: 7-18-0621. Taken Away reviewsIt seems like every time you blink, something bad happens to someone. In this story, Faith, the sister, could be symbolism, but im not sure if it goes too well. please review and tell me what you think.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-18-06 - Published: 7-18-0622. Save My Breath reviewsdeath by cryingso much i guess. i dunno. the poem shaped into an arrow pointing down. i thought it was totally neat because it unintentional until i added to last two lines.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-11-06 - Published: 7-11-0623. Bleed reviewscutting/SI - phasing out - dyingFantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-9-06 - Published: 7-9-0624. Next Year reviewsi was thinking about the good friend i had all this timeFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-4-06 - Published: 7-4-0625. Bug reviewsRated for one word. It's about how I feel having the place I do in my family.Family - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-3-06 - Published: 7-3-0626. Grown Into A Rose, But With Thorns reviewsTitle should be a sufficient summary.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-2-06 - Published: 7-2-0627. Secret reviewssimilar to my other work, My Deepest Darkest SecretGeneral - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-2-06 - Published: 7-2-0628. Set Me Free reviewsYou'll See! if you get confused, remember "me" and "her" are the same one. I like this one a lot!General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-0629. Am I Really This Hidden reviewsJust pondering something from the past.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-0630. Goodbye Kiss reviewsif i were to summarize, it might tell half the story or give away the ending. very suspenseful.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-26-06 - Published: 6-26-0631. I Stand Neutral reviewsstanding neutral in a positive and negative world. its feels like it at least.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0632. Promise of Promises"Little girl, why do you cry... I’ll give you the promise of promises"General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 0 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0633. Daydreaming reviews...daydreaming... la la laFantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0634. Sleep reviewssuicidal poem again. it's hard to summarize other than im dying according to a countdownLife - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0635. My Deepest Darkest Secret reviewsthe poet is talking to his/her deepest darkest secret, telling it to not get out, to stay inside.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0636. I Was Bored reviewsA suicidal poem... i was bored and decided to write whatever came out.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0637. Questioning reviewsJust a bunch of questions about a relationship with God.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-25-06 - Published: 6-25-0638. English Poet reviewswritten in KJV old british english. i think it's quite interesting... what do you think?General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-24-06 - Published: 6-24-0639. Trapped In A Prison reviewsrape victim's feelingsGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-23-06 - Published: 6-23-0640. One Way Street reviewsEver had that moment that lasted only a short short time and you really would like to go back, but life is a one way street and won't let you?Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-21-06 - Published: 6-21-0641. Black Box reviewsMy heart is trapped inside a black box. at least give it a shot.Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-19-06 - Published: 6-19-0642. Last Time Together reviewsFriendship in general - could even be taken religiously I suppose. One stays by another's side... next to his/her deathbed.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-0643. Entitled One reviewsRandom stuff really. After I wrote it though, I noticed it wasn't as random as I thought.General - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-0644. Emotions Connected To My Poetry reviewsIt's about when I feel sorry for myself that no one cares about what I write.General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 6-18-06 - Published: 6-18-0645. Little Things reviewsIt only takes one match to burn the whole house down.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-12-06 - Published: 6-12-0646. That Tree reviewsThat tree is my life, its all ive ever known until I died.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-11-06 - Published: 6-11-0647. Raindrops reviewsAnna is 8 yr old being abused by her parents and... i dont know how to summarize it other than... RaindropsFamily - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-10-06 - Published: 6-10-0648. Left Hopeless reviewsStarts off almost emotionless... but ends with something almost anyone can relate to.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-4-06 - Published: 6-4-0649. Comfort reviewsI dont know where this came from. It's about dying/SI but with a happy tone to it.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-4-06 - Published: 6-4-0650. Beauty Of A Flower reviewsA girl looks at a flower and ends up by the end of the day seeing her life similar to the flower's.Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 5-31-0651. Perfect Bliss reviewsIt seemed as if we were children Having fantasy-like fun Still in our youth Being the lovers of lifeFriendship - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-21-06 - Published: 5-21-0652. After A Long Life reviewsLife is not known without pain. We will die remembering all our hurt and how we hurt others.Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 5-16-0653. She Was Called To My Attention reviewsjust telling of something that happened a year ago.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-0654. No More Baby Wrists reviewsThis was really inspired by another poet/poem... This poem tells of the night I first cut my wrist.General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-15-06 - Published: 5-15-0655. In My Dreams reviewsjust sharing about my dreams, which i love most timesFantasy - Fiction Rated: K - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-14-06 - Published: 5-14-0656. Connect Two reviewsthis is a poet's voice... and what he feels and expressesGeneral - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-13-06 - Published: 5-13-0657. It's A Cramped World reviewsSee how many aspects of this finite earth/nature you can find. There more than I meant there to be.Nature - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-8-06 - Published: 5-8-0658. Lost Control reviewsA prayer I wrote giving up myself to Christ.Religion - Fiction Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-0659. Sisters And Brothers of Suicidal Poetry reviewsIf you are suicidal, please read this and tell me what you think.Friendship - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-0660. Crying Inside reviewsI don't know how to summarize this except for the title explains it all.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-7-06 - Published: 5-7-0661. One Time Hurt Experience reviewsAnother experience caused by self-inflicted pain.Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 5-6-06 - Published: 5-6-06
