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since: 05-10-06, id: 524075
country: United States
Author has written 13 stories for School, Life, Love, General, and Young Adult.

"The boy, he always kissed her on the lips, and he missed all those great things she had to say"


Identity

Part of you here and part of you there

Part of them here in the pink in my hair

With the neon dye and the canvas shoes

I'm as cool as can be; unable to lose

I got a name that you don't know

So for now, just call me Sacramento

After the city, yeah, that's right!

I have a thing for the way it looks at night

And I kind of like the secrecy

In keeping you from that real me

But it doesn't matter cause i don't exist

I'm here and there in the gossiper's mist

A flitting shadow like an incandescent bird

I'm always here, but not always heard

'Cuase my voice wasn't loud enough for you

But now I'll scream my head off too

And when I am heard above your roar

When my voice shakes you to the very core

You'll ask for the inner most part of me

And I won't show my real identity


NEWS!!!

Recently, I have ended my posting of poems on this site. The ones that are up shall remain up, at least for now.

Following the support of my writing by several English teachers and my working with two professionals (author Nicole Hunter and poet Micheal Salinger), I am going to begin my search for an editor and maybe one day, if my writing imrpoves enough, an agent.

Thanks much for all your support, and please, continue to critique me!

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1. Strange, the Candlelight » reviews
Sadie and J are two outsiders in a closed society, fighting to preserve their life of drugs and sex in a world of magik and mannerisms. If you review my story, I'll review yours.
Young Adult - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,299 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-8-08 - Published: 6-5-08
2. Demon of the Soul reviews
What does your anger do? Read and Review, and I'll return the favor.
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3-10-07 - Published: 3-10-07
3. Can reviews
Do you need them? If you read and review, I'll return the favor.
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 272 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 3-9-07 - Published: 3-9-07
4. The Death and The Grief » reviews
Two partscompleted: A girl chooses suicide over a forced marriage. Review, and I'll return the favor!
Complete - General - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 574 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-22-07 - Published: 1-15-07
5. Ignored reviews
Written in response to Columbine and other school shootings in an attempt to define what the shooter was thinking. This is an opinion, not for sure what actually happened. Review, and I'll retuin the favor!
Complete - Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1-31-07 - Published: 1-31-07
6. Journey reviews
A fleeting thought on innocence. Review, and I'll return the favor!
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 8-10-06 - Published: 8-10-06
7. Blind reviews
What do you see? Review, and I'll return the favor.
General - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7-5-06 - Published: 7-5-06
8. To Love and To Lose reviews
A girl talking to her lover on the eve of their imminent separation by his execution. Review and I'll return the favor!
Love - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 7-1-06 - Published: 7-1-06
9. Dead and Dying reviews
"It's seeping away/the beauty life once held/and running into Eden..." Review, and I'll return the favor!
Life - Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-2-06 - Published: 6-2-06
10. The Watcher reviews
She’s not real. She won't 'conform by/ Anti-confirmists standards. Review, and I'll return the favor!
Life - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-31-06 - Published: 5-31-06
11. High reviews
Not necessarily about drugs. Review and I'll return the favor!
Life - Fiction Rated: T - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-26-06 - Published: 5-26-06
12. Staff reviews
On cutting. Review and I'll return the favor.
Life - Fiction Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 5-16-06
13. AntiConformity reviews
Review, and I'll return the favor. Title explains it.
School - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-16-06 - Published: 5-16-06
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