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since: 06-11-06, id: 528101, Profile edited: 05-13-08
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Author has written 8 stories for Fantasy, Romance, Religion, Essay, and Supernatural.

Announcements:

So you probably noticed the new FictionPress updates... Need help posting stories? Click here. Didn't find the help you need? Vote in the poll at the top of my profile.

The tutorial has now been updated to include posting new chapters.

Very Exciting: Island Olivier won Most Humorous - Judges Pick at SKoW!
Pathetic Obsessive Girls Anonymous was nominated for Best Het (Complete).
Island Olivier was nominated for Most Humorous (Complete).
and Island Olivier again for Best Cliche (Complete).

Foiled again! FP has just added another all new feature to their already cool site and my tutorial is once again out of date. No worries though! I'm on it! Should be done by the end of the week.


About Me

If there is one thing you should know about me, it's that I like to try different things with my writing. Some stuff is cheesey fluff (Island Olivier) and some stuff is serious drama (In So Many Words) and some stuff is experimental fantasy (A Siren Call). Don't let the summaries fool you: I never write the same story twice.

Listening to my story soundtracks will make your hear something you've never heard before. I can pretty much gaurantee it.

Story Webpages (character pictures & soundtracks)

Island Olivier
Pathetic Obsessive Girls Anonymous (Also, per the suggestion of a number of readers, there is a real POGA group on myspace.)
POGA 2: No Signs of Rehabilitation (story removed)
A Siren Call
Blue Iris (story removed)

Silverantha – On Hold – written in collaboration with Silveralsa, visit her profile for more info as that’s where we’ll be posting the story.


Top Reasons Why I Haven't Reviewed Your Story/Most Recent Chapter Yet:

1. You didn't review me first. I can't find your story if I don't know who you are.

2. You're waiting in line. Someone else reviewed me before you did so I'm reading their story before I read yours.

3. I don't have time right now. Closely tied with reason #2 and the fact that I work full time, it means you just have to wait a little while. I will get to you! If it's been long enough that you think I've forgotten, go ahead and leave me another review that ends your pertinent comments with a request in it to take a look at your stuff. I'll try to move you up in the priority.

4. You write mostly poetry. I suck at reviewing poetry. I don't want to leave you a sucky, worthless review.

5. I have a deadline coming up. Either a work project or a chapter deadline. I can't focus on my deadline and your story at the same time. Once again, I don't want to leave you a sucky, worthless review just because I couldn't focus on your story with my deadline in front of me.

Final Note: I usually give the kind of review I receive. If you want a thoughtful review that shows I've read your story and carefully considered the story and writing, then that's the kind of review you should give me. If you give me a generic review that you could slap onto any story, that's what I'll give you in return. Basically, fair is fair. And finally, don't assume I'm picking on you if I point out something that doesn't sound 100 percent positive. What it means is that I'm taking the time to read your story carefully and any compliments I give are truly sincere.

My Current Review Que:

Angelic Lucifer - Kiss Me Goodbye




1. A Siren Call » reviews
A mermaid with a voice too powerful to control. An abusive father bent on using her to his own ends. A friend determined to save her. And a human man whose heart hangs in the balance... The Little Mermaid, severely twisted and retold into modern times.
Fantasy - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 12 - Words: 23,304 - Reviews: 147 - Updated: 4-2-08 - Published: 6-22-06
2. In So Many Words » reviews
When Jae agreed to it, he knew that granting Claire’s dying wish to dance with him on stage would be good for his public image. What he didn’t know was that meeting her would mean falling for her...
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 17 - Words: 15,739 - Reviews: 131 - Updated: 2-29-08 - Published: 11-26-07
3. The Fifth Dimension » reviews
She can see things no one else can. Touch things no one else feels. Fight things no one else wants to comprehend. In a war most don't even realize they're fighting, she is one of those few warriors who sees all too clearly... [title under construction]
Supernatural - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,512 - Reviews: 35 - Updated: 1-31-08 - Published: 4-19-07
4. Island Olivier » reviews
What: Stranded. When: One screwed up summer vacation. Where: A deserted Island. How: Long story. Who: Me. And that guy who doesn’t really count because at this rate I’m gonna kill the jerk before we ever get rescued...
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 30,235 - Reviews: 283 - Updated: 4-6-07 - Published: 8-21-06
5. Pathetic Obsessive Girls Anonymous » reviews
Twelve steps to dating a pop star.
Complete - Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 36 - Words: 134,628 - Reviews: 436 - Updated: 1-17-07 - Published: 6-17-06
6. Out of Israel » reviews
A collection of poems I wrote just before, during, and after my visit to Israel in 2002. Much of this is very spiritual in nature and contains Christian themes, so do not read if you find Christianity offensive. It is not my intention to offend anyone.
Complete - Religion - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 15 - Words: 2,385 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 12-5-06 - Published: 7-8-06
7. Tips for Writing Useful Reviews reviews
A barebones guide to writing an insightful and thorough critique.
Essay - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 951 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-20-06 - Published: 7-20-06
8. Time Candle reviews
There is a darkness outside the living world where Time resides and a young woman faces the consequences of a youthful mistake.
Complete - Fantasy - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,113 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 6-17-06 - Published: 6-17-06
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