Hi everybody, just updating!!! I've had a few people tell me some things i should change in my story, Dead Awakenings. Not to be rude, but I wrote the story nearly tw years ago, and it was only my second full and completed story. It's only the rough draft. I'm glad people are reviewing my stories and trying to help me, don't get me wrong. I'm making the story from the rough draft so I can look through and correct things. The has better writing later in the book, because, remember, I wasn't the best of writers when I was twelve (when I first wrote DA). I made the descriptions as author notes because I added info to the characters that I couldn't add into the story. Sorry for any inconvience, and please be patient with me! I promise it'll get better!! I'm no Jo Rowling!! lol...but thanks for everything...Now, since I've had a few people ask me, here are the Dead Awakenings character agesas ofHalloween:

Tory: 14, Birthday October 24..Any coincidence? How close to Halloween she was born...?(second oldest)
Lorain: 13, Birthday Feburary 12(Fourth oldest)
Jessie: 13, Birthday March 11 (Fourth Oldest)
Ryalli: 13, Birthday July 15 (Third youngest)
Dylan: 14, Birthday June 30 (oldest)
Nora: 13, Birthday January 9 (Third Oldest)
Jason: 13, Birthday August 10 (second youngest)
Ryan: 13, Birthday August 18 (youngest)

The Story of Batman Ryan:

Well, Trey, my friend who I based Ryan off of, has a Nickname, "Batman". If you've read all of the installments (so far) od Dead Awakenings, you would the story, because Tory talked about it. All of this happened for real. As for Ryan being a scardy cat, all true. lol.

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Well guys, I'm already making the plans on thestory I'm go to be writing after our Beloved Dead Awakenings is over. I have to ideas I'm putting into play; One is a Romance/Humor story and the other is is a Supernatural story on Vampires. Look forward to them in the future!!!!

Name:Tory or EmoEternity2011 or just Eternity, I like that better

Sex: Female...

About me: I love paranormal! Paranormal everything, stories, cases and books. Shows and movies...anything weird intrigues me. I'm a HUGE Harry Potter fan, and MUSIC. I live on music. My favorite country is Scotland and I love Celtic legends, stories, names and culture. I'm also completely random, so expect musical outbursts.

Favorite Music: My Chemical Romance, Hawthorne Heights, Taking Back Sunday, Panic! At the Disco, Foo Fighters, FlyLeaf, From First to Last and various artists.

Favorite Books: Harry Potter, Sing Down the Moon, Island of the Blue Dolphins, TTFN, Fever 1793, and A Great and Terrible Beauty

Favorite movies: Ladder 49, Harry Potter movies, The Village, The Breakfast Club, Elf, Finding Nemo (In "Ryallis" honor), and some others I forget about

Well, enjoy my writting and ta ta for now!!

EmoEternity2011