This is Alokin from Yalime Alokin. I felt like having my own fictionpress because it was getting confusing having both of us only having one. she has another, so i decided to make my own... it's actually one i made a while ago but never got around to putting anything on.

so yes... if you like crazy amazing funny stories, check out hatapalooza on Yalime Alokin.

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A little about me...

i LOVE to read. people say, oh, i hate reading, and people have to force them to read. this was never a problem for me. my parents had to tell me to stop (to go to school, sleep, etc)

i love it when my friends read books that i've read so i can talk about them. i stood over my sister almost the entire time she read HP7 so i could talk about it with her. it annoyed her, to say the least.

oh yes, and i love chocolate.

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Well, I've fininshed lifeblood. it's really bad, but i'm going to submit it here anyways. please, give suggestions. i hope to be expanding it over christmas break, add a lot to the middle, but i wnat to submit it now just to get people's opinions on it.

My story, lifeblood, is one i started writing about a year ago, but i gave it up because i thought it was pretty bad. but i saw that there's a scholarship for sci fi/fantasy novellettes, so i read it again and it wasn't as bad as i remembered and i decided to give it another try. anyways.

okay... update on lifeblood... i just submitted chapters 4-10. They're really bad, unpolished. I just wanted to get them up so i could get people's opinion on the story adn how i can improve it. it will be undergoing extreme revision soon hopefully, provided i have enough time. if it doesnt... oh well.

It was late, i think i was delusional. I have deleted chapters four through ten of lifeblood, i have no idea what i was thinking submitting those. they SUCKED! lol. but at least i've got a framework, i just need to add in details. but that sounds like a job for winter break, not the end of the first grading period. durrr

new story up! Game of War... lol it was really hard coming up with a title for this... read it and you'll see. if anyone has a better title for me, TELL ME!

AND IF YOU'RE ACTUALLY READING THIS, JUST NOTE THAT I WOULD REALLY LIKE PEOPLE TO READ GAME OF WAR!!!!!! i've been dying to get feedback on it, not just the first part, you really have to read the whole thing, but i am loathe to show it to people i actually know.

Osteomyelitis... i wanted to name it Now That I Look Back On It, I Probably Should Have Done My Physical Therapy, but it was too long. i put that title on the story, tho. it's a paper i wrote for english. it's about something that really happened to me, about three years ago, i woke up with a sore shoulder and ended up three years later landed wtih severe depression adn learning that i was knocking on death's door at the time. lots of crap happened... i had twelve minutes to write my first draft in english class, and that lab at the beginning happened THAT DAY, so this was still fresh in my mind. anyways...

I'd like to say something: I know that I'm a decent writer. I know that I am also a VERY bad writer at times (a lot of the time, actually). If you review my stuff, don't just tell me oh, it's good, or oh, it's bad, tell me why! I always try to give helpful reviews, and i'm sorry if I don't, but I HATE it when people say: LOL! or XD XD or wow, this sucks... That's not helping me improve! sorry if i'm sounding grumpy... if you have ever taken AP chem you will understand lol.